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| "You're Joking, Right?" Reviews/Comments [ 94 ] | | Pages (7): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 › » ] | Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2007 20:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the way you portray Aya's carefully developed genius--first through the ad lib masterful performance before Omi and Ken that fit so neatly into what Yoji had been saying even though he wasn't there to hear it, and then the even more incredible seduction in which everything he told Yoji was the absolute truth, just as he promised, but delivered with such calculation in each word and movement. By showing his performances, and Yoji's reactions to each, you give us wonderful insight into the characters and their pasts. Best of all was that flicker of vulnerability, so slight but still Yoji was able to discern it and feel the need to comfort. Beautifully done yet again!
| Reviewed By: Lirilith [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2007 10:16 EDT
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Aya is such a manipulative bastard! I've been enjoying this story since I came across it, and this chapter doesn't disappoint. The sarcasm and humor are great. When a story makes me snicker out loud I know I'm enjoying it.
| Reviewed By: Lirilith [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2007 18:03 EDT
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I absolutely loved it. I have to admit I never thought of Aya and Farf together but it works in this story. The twists with Yoji and the mysterious background with Brad are really compelling. The writing style flows nicely and there are no big typos or mispellings to really detract from a well told story. The sex scenes are hot, the violence is really nice and the humor is a nice touch. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
| Reviewed By: slowglass On: September 25, 2007 17:09 EDT
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Things I liked in chapter 11, in no particular order: 1)Aya's drinking binge. I've never been able to see Aya enjoying convivial drinking in a bar or club, but wandering the streets, bottle in hand, drinking for the sake of drunkenness? Oh, yeah. That's my screwed-up baby. 2)Farfarello. Of course, I always enjoy Farfarello. But: Actually,I want to fuck you and beat you senseless and drink your blood hits exactly the right note for me. And, apparently, for Aya. 3) The hints that Aya's fascimile of affection may be good enough to fool even him, at least briefly. And cheer up, Yohji! Aya is something you haven't got to deserve. I'm rooting for Aya/Yohji. . . kinda. I'm also rooting for a second chance at romance with Crawford and serious maiming at the hands of Farfarello, but what the heck. I know that whatever you decide will be sure to amuse. Looking forward to the next section!
| Reviewed By: RS On: September 24, 2007 23:50 EDT
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"Of course, if I had any sense, *you'd* be a deal breaker..." Yeah, Yohji, just keep telling yourself that. Nice touch about Farfarello's black nail polish, too. Thanks for bringing this story back to the front burner and keeping it going, it's turning into my favorite of yours.
| Reviewed By: Omni-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2007 16:38 EDT
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Oh my, trouble in crazy paradise. Since I'm rather partial towards YxA, I'm hoping this latest development is a sign that Aya won't be quite so smitten with Farfarello for very much longer. And I love how Yohji is still able to shake Aya a bit, even though he's hopelessly fallen for the crazy redhead.
| Reviewed By: RS On: September 08, 2007 14:11 EDT
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Nice, nice, very nice; so many different people all in the same device.
| Reviewed By: leilachan ~nsi~ On: September 07, 2007 13:43 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
brad is so cruel! aya has a lot of shit that just can't stay hidden away, eh!? i hope yoji is up to the job. aya won't make it easy, but then the story wouldn't be as fascinating, now would it? ^_^ aya just needs kudoh's sweet lovin' and some time to smear a few guys faces across the floor. *cough* farfarello/crawford *cough* well, maybe farf is trying to help in his own way, not sure yet. but yoji gets my vote. =P please continue this fic. i love it, as i do all of your works, which i've read, but am only now reviewing... sorry. you rock!!
| Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2007 20:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hae eagerly looked forward to this chapter, and hoped for more tidbits on Brad and Aya's past relationship, and wow, was this even more and better than I could have imagined! Brad might have "won" the first cruel battle, but it seems Aya "won" the second. After that, both and neither were victors. Although all of Brad's actions could simply be to assure that Aya acts in the desired fashion, I'm going to assume that there might be truth in those few moments, helping to explain the cruel exchanges, the strong mix of emotions, and possibly Brad's insistence on Yohji (beyond simply as a needed partner for a mission). I love the way you added in more pieces to the puzzle of how these characters got to this point (Ran's father, Aya's heritage). Such a fantastic and compelling story!
| Title: Encouragement...
Reviewed By: Miss_Under_Stood_07 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2007 01:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just had to say that I love Weiss Kreuz fiction...especially the ones with Aya and Yohji as the pairings!!!WOOT!!!But adding Farf in their has added a certain HOTTNESS that is not easy to put your finger on.....Carry on...Please! Ever notice how everyone feels that Aya just screams S&M, I think it's because he wears it well.............
| Reviewed By: Serena1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2007 17:56 EDT
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Damn that was hot! Also a little weird which makes it interesting. Ahh! I gotta know what's gonna happen next! Can't wait til you update.
| Reviewed By: Omni-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2007 17:33 EDT
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Ah, glad to see more of this. Thist latest chapter was pretty intense, and I don't just mean because of the sex (though that was pretty damn hot). Wonder if Aya's really going to walk away from his time with Yohji like this unaffected...
| Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2007 21:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hurray for your return, you have been sorely missed. Yet another terrific chapter. Complex characters, incredible sex, and best of all, more revelations realistically woven into the chapter. Poor Aya, so willing to be torn apart based upon a promise of eventual vengence. Fascinating revelation of his early relationship with Brad, and so painful not only how that turned out but the many other incidents with people other than Brad, Farfarello and now Yohji. At least part of Yohji, if not the part to which he is much listening in this chapter, has some understanding of the danger he is in. I hope Yohji will be able to find a way to help Aya.
| Reviewed By: Monachos43 On: July 27, 2007 17:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad you haven't abandoned this fic-it is so good. Your characterizations are awesome!
| Reviewed By: RS On: July 27, 2007 01:13 EDT
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OOOOOOHHHHH, *yeah* !! Love the mind fuck as much as the literal act...maybe I'll root for Yoji yet.
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