| "You're Joking, Right?" Reviews/Comments [ 94 ] |
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2008 22:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Each new chapter is such cause for celebration! I love the interplay between the multiple layers of the story; the hints of the backstory and future possibilities; the complex and many facets of Crawford; Aya as a superbly talented, overstressed, and shown more than ever in this chapter, hauntingly young adult; Farfarello and his philosophy -- as well as a prescription for Aya. Great chapter in a terrific story!
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Reviewed By: @met On: May 02, 2008 04:34 EDT
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poor yohji, hope his hopes are not crushed...aya is quite manipulative here...but both being used in a way....cant wait to see what happens now...will be waiting for next update
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Reviewed By: Caitlebug [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2008 02:04 EDT
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Yohji not love Aya? NEVER! Meant to be they are! I direly hope that Ken is mistaken and that the two don't tear each other apart. Oh the plot thickens! The angst is building and emotions grow confused, haywire! I'm so very excited to see what happens next!
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Reviewed By: glinwulf On: April 20, 2008 00:47 EDT
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Yay! Another chapter!
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Reviewed By: Caitlebug [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2008 18:01 EDT
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thank goodness for updates! I can't wait to see what happens next!
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Reviewed By: erisincognito [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2008 01:59 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Glad to see you back with this! Great story, thoroughly enjoyable reading.
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Reviewed By: glinwulf On: February 27, 2008 00:07 EST
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sad. great to see another chapter, though.
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Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2008 14:27 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just devoured all your chapters. Want more! I love the angst and sexual dynamics. Hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: leilachan *nsi* On: December 07, 2007 14:44 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well, the bit with crawford threw me off a little. i had no idea the pain and well, helplessness aya was feeling!! poor guy. each chap makes me ache more for him. he feels truly lost. i, for one, love yohji/aya, and hope it works out. crawford is too 'hard' for someone like aya, i think. aya needs a gentle touch like yohji to complete him. you write them being 'together' so well. the inserts (heh) of farfarello and brad just spice it all up. with this mission coming up, i am freaking out... the vision has me more than a little worried. aya dying would kill yohji. ack, please write more soon. it's dreadful to wait! ^_^
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Reviewed By: snapy pants [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2007 21:15 EST
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OH MY GOD!!!! I love this chapter. a WHOLE LOT. oh my god. With the punching and the fucking and the confessing and the vision-ing.....WAH! *ded* SUPERB UPDATE!!!! *plasters you with gold stars*
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Reviewed By: @met On: November 14, 2007 14:24 EST
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oh god, is ran really gonna die?? ok kill youji or aya! then i wanna see him dying n wats gonna happpen nex, i love youjixaya but i dont see it goin on that direction so doesnt matter XD
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Reviewed By: glinwulf On: November 10, 2007 22:59 EST
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Awesome! Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: snapy pants [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2007 22:41 EDT
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AAWWWW *WOOBIE* seriously, I am crying the salty tears of an emo for Aya...ITS SO GOOD!!! NEED MORE!!! p.s. I love that aya loves farf...seriously...or if not love realleh realleh lurfs him...AAAWWWWWWWW
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Reviewed By: slowglass On: October 26, 2007 19:26 EDT
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>>Omi just looked at him for a good 30 seconds. It was brutal. I can just see the little sweatdrop rolling down Yohji's neck,here. >>It was such a virtuoso little performance Yoji almost believed it himself. I really like the way Yohji is learning to read Aya. There way a time when he would have fallen for that performace - - especially since he wants to. >>He looked guileless, but Yoji knew that Aya's bag of tricks was tightly packed. Hee! Danger, Will Robinson! Of course, that's what Yohji likes about the situation. >>He lay down next to Aya and put his arms around him, ignoring the terrifying thrill he felt when Aya rolled over to face him, leaning his face against Yoji's shoulder. Ditto above. Oh, Yohji. When you gonna learn? As always, I love your characterizations. Somehow, Aya seemed creepier than usual in this chapter. I think it was the deliberateness of his manipulations. He really seemed like a sociopath here, where usually he just seems antisocial and self-protective. I hope that Aya can find his way to an ending that leads to some healing, and doesn't destroy Yohji in the process. Again, great job. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: glinwulf On: October 25, 2007 21:11 EDT
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another fabulous chapter. love the convoluted plot. love that Yoji's eyes are wide open. love how he knew he'd have to talk--but hoped to die first.
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