| "You're Joking, Right?" Reviews/Comments [ 94 ] |
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Reviewed By: Caitlebug [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2009 19:10 EDT
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So confusing...I'm not quite sure what anyone is really feeling right now. I just hope that Aya and yohji begin to understand each other better soon before yohji makes a dire mistake, you know, like fulfilling omi and ken's prophecy that he'll leave the redhead. tsk tsk tsk, way to keep me guessing.
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Reviewed By: glinwulf On: March 22, 2009 01:32 EDT
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good chapter. hope you write a sequel.
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Reviewed By: @met On: February 19, 2009 19:12 EST
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love the humour in ur story... gotta say i loved this chappie! said with lot still kept unsaid, poor aya, yohji n ken-ken... hope aya gets well soon.....
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Reviewed By: glinwulf On: February 03, 2009 00:41 EST
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Great Chapter! Have I told you how much I love the way you write Ken? His "pep talk" was absolutely wonderful
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Reviewed By: @met On: January 11, 2009 05:27 EST
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if only omi knew...but its good that he doesnt! neways, great chapter! aya has way with words, loved how he managed to keep yohji out of this mess, considerin the amount of his involvement.. i wonder how yohji left before omi's arrival, just without word or some arguement maybe? i clearly wanna know if aya really loves yohji even w/ bits n pieces of possible hints... please update soon ^^ keep it up!
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Reviewed By: glinwulf On: January 07, 2009 00:23 EST
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so painful watching Aya lie there and lie--but then, reading this whole fic has been painful (but in a good way)
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Reviewed By: @met On: December 18, 2008 13:39 EST
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wow! another update... i wonder wats gonna happen, will yohji leave? cant wait 4 next chapter~
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Reviewed By: glinwulf On: December 16, 2008 21:21 EST
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Awesome as usual. This is so convoluted, I have to wonder if even Brad sees it all. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: lelann On: November 22, 2008 15:26 EST
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love it! very interesting and fun to read. I can't wait for more,thanks for sharing
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Reviewed By: @met On: November 08, 2008 13:41 EST
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when brad arrived, i nearly got blinded! somebody needs to shoot him (lol) seriously... he must've his reason but no reason is enuff to make Aya suffer so, as stubborn as our red-head is... but seems yohji is tryin his best to anchor aya out of abyss or is it yohji who's hangin on to 'im? as glinwulf said below, i love Ken in this... would there be KenxOmi surprise? (haha) that would be so random but great nonetheless! ^.~
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Reviewed By: glinwulf On: November 05, 2008 21:31 EST
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Super chapter. I love this not only because of the interesting plot and great writing, but because I particularly like your take on the characters. A ditzy Ken is boring, but your Ken is strong--a good foil for the others. Keep writing!
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Reviewed By: Caitlebug [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2008 07:45 EDT
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AYA LIIIIVVVEEESSS! Heh, that's all I needed XD
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Reviewed By: BLG On: October 20, 2008 21:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic! Keep it up.
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Reviewed By: glinwulf On: October 14, 2008 23:37 EDT
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wow--just, wow! very tense scene. i love yohji's intelligence here, and boy, does he ever owe ken big time.
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Reviewed By: glinwulf On: August 19, 2008 01:21 EDT
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I love it when Yoji shows his intelligence. I hope he can find a way out of this mess Aya's dragged him into.
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