| "Hentai Bets" Reviews/Comments [ 302 ] |
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Reviewed By: purp1ebabe [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2006 22:54 EST
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well hiei spent a lot of time with kagome hehe wow... funny how kagome thought she was in a threesome w/ hiei and hojo interesting well... ill be waiting for more.
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Reviewed By: PureMiko_Kagome69ner [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2006 23:40 EST
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OMG! I LOVE IT!!! HAHA! I LOVE IT!!! HEHE! PLEASE UPDATE! MORE HIEI/KAGOME GOODNESS PLEASE! HAHA, KAGOME'S THOUGHTS ARE FUNNY! PLEASE UPDATE! Merry Christmas!
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Title: Ch. 13
Reviewed By: halfblackwolfdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2006 00:45 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
FUCKING YES! Such good Kagome/Hiei mushyness! I can't wait till the next chapters out! I lurved it! *gushes while squeazing hiei plushie happily* ooo! go hiei! mr. smexy had fun! GO SMEXY-DEMON-DANGLY-DANGLES!! *dies after nosebleed*
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Reviewed By: loveinuyasha911 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2006 18:12 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh I like this chappie.....pleaseeee update soon.......(Takes Hiei from you and kisses him..) (stops Kissing him).....*You Walk forward and open your arms*.....(hiei is mine back off) (looks around then hands him to you..) (I only share with you if you update soon) pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.....
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Reviewed By: Youkos_Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2006 14:42 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, loved that chapter! Kagome has spent too much time around her hentai teammates to think such thoughts. Lol. Whatever happened to her innocent mind? I loved Hiei's possesiveness and Jakotsu's comments. :D Thanks for updating, can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Touketsu Kaijin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2006 14:19 EST
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fan-freakin-tastic! that was so totaly awsome! and u had hiei kick hojos ass! finally! to bad Kagome healed him... well at least he still has a black eye and an extreme fear of Hiei! and then meeting Hiei as her boyfriend.. absolutly fantastic! and poor Kagome! thinking that stuff happened while she was drunk! i hope she figures it out eventually... and with minimal embaressment. tho i doubt thats possible. lol. and for Hiei to bring her back naked and then all of Jakotsus coments... ahhh lovely chapter yet again. cant wait till u update again
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Reviewed By: Starlet Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2006 13:51 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Merry Christmas to me! Thanks for the update :) Poor Hojo! Did he slip her something? If so, then I recant the "Poor Hojo" statement of before. Happy Holidays!
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Reviewed By: Kawaii-KeKe-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2006 07:46 EST
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Squee! You updated! Heh, i totally loved the Kagome Hiei-ness! He's such a big boy! lol! Can't wait fore the next updated...hopefully i will update some time today...
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Reviewed By: loveinuyasha911 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2006 02:09 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pleaseeee update soon.................(hiei is mine back off) (looks around then hands him to you..) (I only share with you if you update soon) pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.....
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Reviewed By: LmKiTsUnE [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2006 01:34 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Holy f'ing sh*t!(LMFAO) Thats what im talking about. I cant believe that Kagome thought that. For some reason you do not wanna know, I like it when Kurama and Hiei call each other names. Miroku, Naraku, and Jakotsu are so mean, Leting her think that they were Doing-it.Hojo is a retarted bitch, and needs to be beat up by Hiei .Dude, were they doing-it when Hiei crashed in(He didnt even knock.) Whoo, over all this chapter was so freaking aswome. Update soon; =O
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Reviewed By: Youkos_Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2006 11:16 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! I love this story! I like how you made Kagome think that Hiei and Kurama were lovers. Can't wait for the next chapter, please update soon.
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2006 02:44 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol hot damn ! You have to update soon I can't wait to see whaT HAPPENS NEXT.
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Reviewed By: Kawaii-KeKe-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2006 19:27 EST
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Yeah! Hello fellow friend! I'm luvin your story honey...it's great so far! Can't wait to find out what happens next...i can't really yell bout the cliffy considering the number of ones ive left you on!!!
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Reviewed By: Starlet Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2006 17:12 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter! Even Hojo is catching my attention (for once!). I can't wait for the citrusy goodness to come...even if it is Hojo. LMAO! It looks like your starting to set things up for her and Hiei. Have you decided on the pairing? Keep it up! I'm lovin' it!
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Reviewed By: Touketsu Kaijin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2006 14:33 EST
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oo thats briliant. Hiei does so seem to love ta crash everything. and that sneak naraku. convincing everyone to let Kagome think hiei and kurama were doing that. and Kagome setting up Jakotsu and Kouga. lol halarious. o and i do so hope that hiei will kick Hojos ass in the next chapter. if he was that mean to his best friend i cant wait to se what condition he leaves hojo in... another brilliant chapter on your behalf. plz update soon!
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