| "Hentai Bets" Reviews/Comments [ 302 ] |
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Reviewed By: Miss Mischief [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2006 08:14 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter, i thought it was hysterically. The unteraction between the chars was good, flowed really well. And the comment from Hiei about Youko "Sneaky bastard." just perfect.
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Title: Chapter 4
Reviewed By: Shadow Maiden [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2006 06:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved it! And don't worry everything is fixed (no more double posted chapter) Loved the interaction between the characters, you did a good job with their characterizations, I can't wait to see the next chapter, it's bound to be exciting. Keep up the excellent work!
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Reviewed By: airwalk55 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2006 01:04 EST
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HAHAHHAHAHAHAHA....I love it. This is a really unique story. I can imagine Koenma wrestling with a little brother and using the stamps. Funny. ^^ HSD...ingenious. Hehe. And I loved having Jakotsu as the fourth team member. I look forward to future chapters! ^___^ Can't wait to see who wins the bet...Hiei or Kurama...or both!
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Reviewed By: insert evil laugh here On: November 11, 2006 12:25 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yes! i ;oved it! update soon!
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Reviewed By: Miss Mischief [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2006 09:34 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The way you ended chap 3 was excellent, didn't expect it to be Jakotsu. Can't wait for more. I wonder who he'll be chasing, Hiei or Kurama? So cool. The posibilties are interesting.
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Reviewed By: Jessica_Hemora [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2006 01:36 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hahahahahaha! love your story you smiply must continue! My curiosity is killing me! so please update REAL soon! :puppy dog eyes:...ok that doesn't work when your trying not to fall over laughing...oh well....I was really surprised that you didn't put Inuyasha or Sessho or even Bankotsu in your story but this is a much more interesting group :evil smirk: I can't wait to see what caos Jakotsu will surely cause! :chuckle: Well once again please update soon!
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Title: Allowing Anonymous Reviews
Reviewed By: Shadow Maiden [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2006 01:03 EST
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You asked about Allowing Anonymous reviews, sorry I wasn't clear in my first post and forgot about adding it during my other review...Just go to "My Settings" You should see things like "Real Name", "User Name" etc. Scroll down and in the Fan Art/Fanfiction reviews section you should see "Accept reviews from non-registered and non-loged in MM.org visitors anonymous reviews:" Check the "yes" box. Hope that helped!
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Reviewed By: Touketsu Kaijin [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2006 00:32 EST
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I LOVE IT!!!! i was expecting inuyasha or maby some other guy but it was Jakotsu! i cant beleive u used him! im so happy. this is gonna be ssooooo funny!!!! i cant wait for the next chapter. the spirit detectives are going to go crazy! update soon please!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: KagomeoftheSouth [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2006 20:38 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
um... you posted chapter 3 twice it all says the same stuff its a good story though
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Title: Chapter 3
Reviewed By: Shadow Maiden [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2006 19:32 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed this very much, so those two are still going on with the bet, eh? I wonder what'll happen...*grins* And you brought Jakotsu in too! *bigger grin* I can't wait to see what he does, to the SD's or their reactions! *snickers* Keep up the excellent work. By the way--you posted the third chapter twice.
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Reviewed By: Miss Mischief [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2006 13:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Totally excellent, I laughed my pants off, when Koenma and his bro were fighting. A great start too. I am glad you finally managed to upload here, I did quickly read it on Fichaven last night before I left for work, and 'the bet' makes an Interesting plot. Loved the dialoge between Hiei and Youko, poor Kurama for being in the middle.
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Title: =^^=
Reviewed By: KawaiiKoneko89 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2006 10:18 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this fanfic! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Raizen [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2006 04:40 EST
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Ooh i hope this gets updated soon!
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Title: Sorry I forgot something
Reviewed By: Shadow Maiden [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2006 23:55 EST
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By the way, you have it set so only Registered/Logged in users can review, you may get more reviews if you allow anonymous reviews...some people don't like logging in, or don't wanna register.
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Reviewed By: Shadow Maiden [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2006 23:54 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've never seen a story where Koenma has a sibling and runs half of Reikai, very interesting, I loved the part where the two 'babies' were fighting! Hilarious! I also wonder what their reactions to meeting Kagome will be. Was the second male, Naraku? Oh, and will she find out about the bet, in the beginning or at the end? I can't wait to see where you take this story!
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