| "Hentai Bets" Reviews/Comments [ 302 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lunarwolfdemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2006 19:59 EST
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Please update soon!I want to find out what happens next,and add in what Hiei,and Naraku are doing at the time.The whole "Naraku is a flasher"thing as got me wondering if he'll actually do that,so please add the next chapter soon.
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Reviewed By: Miss Mischief [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2006 19:33 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was brill, i loved how you portrayed Kurama when he was teaching her how to pick pocket, made me howl with laughter, can't wait till it's kags turn to try it out on kur, even funnier if she had a go on Hiei too.
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Reviewed By: Touketsu Kaijin [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2006 14:35 EST
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that was briliant! totally evil too! and that part about naraku with his baboon pent thing.... pure genious! u have to put in a little part on how hiei deals with that! man im still laughing about it!
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Reviewed By: Sardave [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2006 09:53 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is fantastic! Great storyline, and it's funny-one doesn't normally see Jakotsu or Naraku in situations like this. It's fun to see it in a not-so far-fetched kinda way, you know what I mean? I love both Kurama and Hiei, and this story has me tickled. I'll be reading! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Shadow Maiden (NSI) On: November 20, 2006 06:50 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this newest addition! Pickpocket lessons, sneaking into beds, hotsprings, more bets *grins*. Though I do wonder what it was that Naraku had with him besides the oils and towels. Naraku...flashing! *big grin* I wonder what'll happen with Hiei and Naraku! And Kurama and Kagome, when she tries to pick his pocket *bigger grin* Keep up the excellent work!
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Reviewed By: SadBrokenWings [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2006 06:45 EST
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Yay!!! -lol- I'm kinda excited, a new chapter! I'm just anticipating who she's going to be with...Kurama, Hiei, maybe both? THE SUSPENSE IS KILLING ME!!!
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Reviewed By: Youkos_Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2006 14:04 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter, the bets are intriguing. Update soon plz.
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Reviewed By: Miss Mischief [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2006 13:32 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was another excellent chapter, I love how Naraku and Miroku are putting money on who's going to win, just class.
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Reviewed By: Icywolfflame [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2006 22:30 EST
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Do you know what I'm doing right now? You know that football 'woot woot' or is it more 'woff woff', any way YES!!!!!Please do continue!This story is alot better than I first thought it would be!=)
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Reviewed By: SadBrokenWings [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2006 13:08 EST
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This is a very interesting and very original story! Oooooooo.....I can't wait to read more! This really is a great story! ~SBW~
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Reviewed By: Takhisiss (nsi) On: November 15, 2006 10:38 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL, I don't think I've ever read a story quite like this one. The plot is interesting, even more so with all the bets that are going around. I can just imagine how Kags will blow up when she finally learns about them. I wonder, no matter who wins, will she blow them off once she finds out about the bets? I think I would, but that's just me. LOL, and I of course am rooting for Hiei. Please update soon.
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Title: great story
Reviewed By: sixtiesgal On: November 15, 2006 08:59 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i am really enjoying reading your story... please update soon! i want some lemony goodness asap... but bets between who actually gets to bed kagome is a nice touch though i dont really approve of that sort of thing... it kind if gives me the shivers... but good job and keep on writing
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Title: yays!!
Reviewed By: Mysterious_Tears [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2006 18:34 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yays!!! i love it.. its so original.. i mean ive never red another story even close to this plot.. so Kudo's to you.... but one thing.. they gay guy.. i have no clue who he is!!! tell me plz??? *puppy dog eyes* so yes.. but anyways.. its very very entertaining.. so keep it up!! i give you a cookie XD
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Reviewed By: Youkos_Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2006 17:27 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great work! Interesting choice of characters for the HSD. Update soon plz
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Reviewed By: Hieisexymiko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2006 13:35 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
By the way, LOVED that you brought in Jakotsu! He's my all time favorite member of the Shintachi! Wait, did I spell that right?
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