| "Hentai Bets" Reviews/Comments [ 302 ] |
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Reviewed By: VB On: December 11, 2006 22:08 EST
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Ai god I'm dieing here. What a lovely twist to their nightly interludes. I wonder how long it took Musuo to figure out it was Kagome. Update soon please. (And Damnit I was so sure Hojo was Musuo :( Unfair.)
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Title: XD
Reviewed By: mistress_yume (NSI) On: December 11, 2006 15:30 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aww! hiei and kurama are soooo cute when they're jealous! and i honestly love the night scenes; thank you for making them clearer! =D and can i make a guess? did musuo take over hojou's body? because hojo is cute...he's just the plain cute ^^
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Reviewed By: Sardave [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2006 09:50 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Fit of giggles*-- That was great! I am so addicted to this story. You don't see this kind of set-up in other stories, and your style of writing is fabulous! I love your spot on characterization and the banter between Hiei and Kurama. Ready to read more! ^_^ *Love it Love it Love it***
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Reviewed By: Hopelessly Hopefull [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2006 02:37 EST
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wicked chappie dearest, its funny but you left it with a touch of mystery! much love always hope xxx
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2006 19:20 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ha lol hojo has the gem I bet it is no longer a neckless but noe a rings...
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Reviewed By: Lunarwolfdemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2006 16:01 EST
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Please update soon!I love how you had Hiei pretty much beat up hojo.I was laughing my,but off near the end,and now i'm in suspense from that last couple of lines.Please update ASAP!
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Reviewed By: Touketsu Kaijin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2006 13:14 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!! I didnt believe it possible but this chapters better then the last!!!! Absolutly awsome! and soooo funny! Man I love that u put Jakotsu on the team... And the comment about Yusukes spirit gun... lol halarious. LOL I LOVE how Hiei treats Hojo when hes jelois. i cant wait to see wat else he does. and then his fight with Naraku... thats bound to be awsome... Naraku should so show up in his baboon pelt thing... lol Hiei would kill him! update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Youkos_Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2006 12:56 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved that chapter, its was so funny. Plz update soon.
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Reviewed By: Magiknight [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2006 10:23 EST
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Oh my God now that I've wiped the tears out of my eyes i can review. This has to be the most hilarious story I have ever come accross. I love it!.... Just do me a favor and let Jak have some one by the end to, poor guy's getting lonely.
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Reviewed By: Miss Mischief [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2006 09:30 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
every chapter just gets better, your mind is so evil - i love it. i just love the interaction going between hiei and kurama especially some of the one liners ie "Dirty, rotten, sneaky, polite bastard.", jusr brill. and kags buying nice new underwear just becos she knows kurama and hiei is going to steal it. her thoughts were good to, wondering why kurama and hiei are not jealous of each other but when it comes to houjo they pair are. and you right when hiei and youko getting turned on by kags fighting, they do like a strong woman. anyways update soooooooooooonnnnn, cos this is my fave.
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Reviewed By: LmKiTsUnE [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2006 00:56 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wish I was Kagome right about now. This is one of the few chapters that has any fluff, actually alot of them have fluff but I wanted to say that. So who's going to get her, its kinda leaning to Hiei (fluff-o-rama).Hiei does like to call Kurama Big words, ne? "Dirty, rotten, sneaky, opportunistic bastard"(Hey what can I say, I'm a dumbass.) I like the talk at the springs, it was sooo funny "Seeing Jakotsu in action"lol. Jakotsu Is so mean to Naraku, lol. And Kouga shows up and makes a dumbass out of himself (for some reason I dont like him to much), but does have some info so thats good. Jakotsu Is so mean to Naraku, lol.
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Reviewed By: Fox_Hanyou On: December 07, 2006 19:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yet another stunning chapter! i applaud ye and wait excitedly for the next chapter......*rereads note* well damn, i sounded pretty high up didnt i? lol my apologies. This story is really one of my favs of all time. so thank you for writing such a piece.
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Title: Wooohoooo
Reviewed By: Mysterious_Tears [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2006 04:33 EST
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yays!!! i LOVED it!!! it makes me laugh the "whole " time im reading it!!! ITS GREAT!! ysys.. update more.. update more!!! lol.. if you ask me i see you tending to lean this more towards a Hiei/Kags fic.... WOOHOOO! i love a good one but a good Kurama/ Kag fic is welcoming aswell... well keep up the good work!! and e-mail me sometime.. would love to hear from you. till next time!! Ja Ne~ Mysterious_Tears
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2006 04:24 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my God you so have to update really very Soon Thank you.
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Reviewed By: Youkos_Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2006 11:41 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic! Can't wait for the next chapter.
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