| "Hentai Bets" Reviews/Comments [ 302 ] |
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Reviewed By: ChaoticKittiex3 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2007 21:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're gonna update more chapter right?! RIGHT?! i love your story!! and when it's done, you should totally right a sequal!! Oh mah goshhhhh. I love this story. it's so amazing. =] =] =] You're now my hero. =D
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Reviewed By: loveinuyasha911 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2007 19:22 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon....
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Reviewed By: Hawaiianhoney2030 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2007 20:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
BRILLIANT!!!! i loved it! i loved how Kagome sucessfully picked Kurama's pocket! AMAZING!! this is officially my favorite fanfic of all time! U should get a grammy for this one! lol Great job!
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Reviewed By: Bruce n Charlie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2007 19:57 EDT
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That was soo sweet how you ended the Kagome Hiei part, I'm gonna have to read that part over and over again! Exciting! You have a wonderful writing style, and I don't know hwo to explain it, but what you said in your a/n at the end made sense. Have a wonderful week! Bruce n' Charlie
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Title: EXCELLENT!
Reviewed By: Sango Tajiya [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2007 19:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Laughs with joy*once AGAIN you've written another great chapter. I absolutely love the conclusion to it all and Kagome's response to the bet was wonderful. I can't wait for the next chapter! I apologize for freaking you out in my last review(I don't remember what I said and I'm to lazy to go back and find it). When I read such good stories like these I get a natural high. so I guess that's a compliment to you. TTYL!^_^
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Reviewed By: Youkai Goddess (anime.girl.99@hotmail.com) On: March 21, 2007 19:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi. You're story is extrmemly awesome. I've actually followed it since I first saw it posted awhile ago. I think it had only three-five chapters then. I really like the way you portray the characters and how you can throw in a funny comment and make it fit. You know how lots of authors are really random in order to be funy? Like, one second Kagome will be talking like an intelligent person and the very next sentance she's under the impression that she's a ballerina? It's resfreshing to read a story that can be funny at appropriete time, like how Youko responded to that comment Hiei made; "Fuck Kurama." I was wondeing if I could use that idea with the second Spirit Detective team consisting of Naraku, Miroku, Kagome and Jakotsu? I wouldn't follow the same plotline as you, and I'd probably have an entirely different pairing. Perhaps Kagome/teenaged Koenma.... Anyway, can you let me know? Even just a tiny note in your reviewer responses? Please? I think it woul be easy to work a fiction involving those four, they'd make an amusing team. Please update soon! I can't wait to read the next chapter. Especially since it's the long awaited lemon! Yo're my favorite author! Youve even replaced Ryukotusei's place as #1 in Hiei/Kagome stories!!!! Sayonara, ~Youkai Goddess~ -Bradhadair- anime.girl.99@hotmail.com
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Reviewed By: Starlet Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2007 17:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was wonderful. Definately worth the wait! I'm kinda sad to know it's almost over. You're such a fantastic writer with a great imagination. Do you have anymore stories in the works after you complete this one? I'd love to see more by you.
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Reviewed By: Hieis_soulmateis_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2007 15:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love what you did to Hojo, that loser deserved it. But, I'm curious about a comment you made at the end. What exactly did you mean when you said that the next chapter will have Hiei and Kagome swimming in lemonade? Will Kagome be having those really weird dreams that are a sure sign of pregnancy?
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Reviewed By: Seiteki_Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2007 10:27 EDT
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hehe! yes that ending was very satisfactory! YAY! i love the bet you put on this chappie, that was too funny!
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Reviewed By: Touketsu Kaijin [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2007 22:37 EDT
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genious. i bow down to your greatness. *bows* that was so awsome! Hiei rocked this chapter. the slaughter of that jerk... the manipulation of hojo... fluffy-sama killing everybody... what kagome did in the end... u were on a roll. i cant wait to see how well the next one is....
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Title: Hentai Review
Reviewed By: grilka On: March 20, 2007 21:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can't wait for the rest, please hurry! I have followed this from the first time you posted, and I have loved every bit of it!
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Title: Hentai Review
Reviewed By: grilka On: March 20, 2007 21:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can't wait for the rest, please hurry! I have followed this from the first time you posted, and I have loved every bit of it!
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Reviewed By: underwater963 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2007 20:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
By far the best chapter yet! If any other author had been writing this I would have expected Kagome to freak out and start screaming and sobbing about betrayal when she found out about the bet. I was correct in my assumption that you would do something more original, and I thank you for it. I'm so thankful that you're writing this because I have read so many fanfics with the same banal plots that EVERYONE uses! And then I come upon stories like this one and thank God for their originality. I'll end this review here with my customary "Please update soon!"
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Reviewed By: Kawaii-KeKe-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2007 14:52 EDT
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Yay! What an super long super funny super yummy chappy! ^.^ Sesshy was absolutely hilarious- that was totally brill the way u made him kill Kags, then Kurama and Hiei! Hehe. OOOh can't wait for the next chappy! And can't believe this is nearly over! Do you have an idea for ur next fic yet??? I know i haven't updated in a while, but i will get round to it! ^.^; xxxx
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Title: ROFLMAO
Reviewed By: selenitypotter [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2007 13:49 EDT
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Oh, ouch, my sides! LOVED IT!!!!!! Being pregnant and laughing that hard don't mix, but I am glad I did. I needed the laugh. Hope you update soon!
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