| "Hentai Bets" Reviews/Comments [ 302 ] |
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Reviewed By: TAJE [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2007 18:03 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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You are really talented. What killed me was the bet now being done by the other males! I thought that was hilarious. I not too familiar with the YuYu Hakusho series. From what I get is really funny posturing between the spirit detectives. Really funny. Then adding Jakotsu is priceless! I'm loving it so far! Peace!
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Reviewed By: TAJE [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2007 16:47 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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The first 3 chapters leads me to believe this is going to be a fun story. Naraku's character is interesting. I'm dying to see his portrayal. I'm looking forward to the next chapters
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Reviewed By: airwalk55 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2007 12:20 EDT
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Hehe. I loved the ending! The bets and her groping fetish were awesome. ^___^ Great job! Can't wait for more of you stuff.
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Reviewed By: dark_angel_of_death9 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2007 13:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is one of the best i've read :) i love how your charactures seem alive :) very cool :)
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Reviewed By: -Tsuki-Hime- [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2007 06:08 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I seriously LOVE this story I mean its really great...
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Reviewed By: Youkos_Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2007 18:07 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
An excellent ending; I really enjoyed reading this fanfiction and love reading all of your work. Please keep up your brilliant fanfiction. Ja ne.
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Title: missjay
Reviewed By: jem89 On: April 09, 2007 11:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great ending!! I love this story! It's really funny. Please update your other stories soon : )
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Reviewed By: -Bradhadair- [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2007 09:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Konichiwa. I'm really happy you're finished the fiction, but sad too, really. Last chapter I asked you if I could do a fic with Naraku, Kagome, Jakotsu and Miroku as Spirit Detectives? Well, I couldn't figure out how to post it on Mediaminer; I can't save it as the right kind of document off of wordperfect. However, it is posted on fanfiction.net under 'Youkai Goddess.' It's called 'Shattering Barrier.' The summary isn't the best, and I can't write the next chapter until reviewers vote, but I think it's okay. Can you read it? f you get some spare time, I mean? You are the greatest author ever! I loved your other stories. Especially White Day. I prefer it to the one that came before. Though, I must say, 'Hentai Bets' was a masterpiece. Did you see how many people urge other reader to read it in their author notes? Je, ~Youkai Goddess~ -Bradhadair- (Sarah Grace)
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Reviewed By: animeboysrock23 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 20:51 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i was reading before but i didn't review gomen but anyway that was funny where kagome flashed herself and then run into the woods what a naughty girl picking the habits of everyone on the team but anyway great job i love it plz keep it up for your other fanfics
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: animebook fan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 11:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it! I have actually read it several times, but I just haven't had the time to review. But I will now tell you that I love this story. I am so happy that you have finished it now. It was so hilarious!!! Can you do a Kurama/Kagome/Hiei story?
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Title: LovE iT
Reviewed By: xBLaCKxANgELx On: April 06, 2007 12:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love it love it love it well u get the drift but i really enjoyed dis fic
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Reviewed By: Miss Mischief [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2007 09:34 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
An excellent end to a brilliant and funny story. This chapter made me laugh so much I nearly peed myself. I loved all the betting going on in this story which the title 'Hentai Bets' totally summarise's it. Not only that considering how many charactors you have in a chap, you keep the action between them flowing with the quips and so on. I so can't wait till your next one, what will your mind come up with even if it is on more serious note. I had you up as fave story but have changed it to fave author so i know instantly when it come out.
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Reviewed By: Michael22 On: April 06, 2007 00:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the story theme amd the writing was great. Anyway would love to read more so maybe you could write a one where Kagome and Hiel have a kid or continue on with there mated lives with more missions. Great job though.
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Reviewed By: loveinuyasha911 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2007 19:31 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
blue love the way you ended this....also i think your on my fav list on fanfiction.net.. My two user names are MuppyPuppy and TOTAL HATER WHO LOVES SESSHOMARU thanks for updating and reviewing my own personal stories. I'll make sure to cheack out your new story.. loveinuyasha911(AKA MuppyPuppy and TOTAL HATER WHO LOVES SESSHOMARU)
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Reviewed By: loveinuyasha911 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2007 19:29 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love the way you ended this....also i think your on my fav list on fanfiction.net.. My two user names are MuppyPuppy and TOTAL HATER WHO LOVES SESSHOMARU thanks for updating and reviewing my own personal stories. I'll make sure to cheack out your new story.. loveinuyasha911(AKA MuppyPuppy and TOTAL HATER WHO LOVES SESSHOMARU)
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