| "Hentai Bets" Reviews/Comments [ 302 ] |
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Reviewed By: Touketsu Kaijin [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2006 14:35 EST
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that was briliant! totally evil too! and that part about naraku with his baboon pent thing.... pure genious! u have to put in a little part on how hiei deals with that! man im still laughing about it!
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Reviewed By: Sardave [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2006 09:53 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is fantastic! Great storyline, and it's funny-one doesn't normally see Jakotsu or Naraku in situations like this. It's fun to see it in a not-so far-fetched kinda way, you know what I mean? I love both Kurama and Hiei, and this story has me tickled. I'll be reading! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Shadow Maiden (NSI) On: November 20, 2006 06:50 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this newest addition! Pickpocket lessons, sneaking into beds, hotsprings, more bets *grins*. Though I do wonder what it was that Naraku had with him besides the oils and towels. Naraku...flashing! *big grin* I wonder what'll happen with Hiei and Naraku! And Kurama and Kagome, when she tries to pick his pocket *bigger grin* Keep up the excellent work!
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Reviewed By: SadBrokenWings [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2006 06:45 EST
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Yay!!! -lol- I'm kinda excited, a new chapter! I'm just anticipating who she's going to be with...Kurama, Hiei, maybe both? THE SUSPENSE IS KILLING ME!!!
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Reviewed By: Youkos_Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2006 14:04 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter, the bets are intriguing. Update soon plz.
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Reviewed By: Miss Mischief [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2006 13:32 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was another excellent chapter, I love how Naraku and Miroku are putting money on who's going to win, just class.
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Reviewed By: Icywolfflame [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2006 22:30 EST
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Do you know what I'm doing right now? You know that football 'woot woot' or is it more 'woff woff', any way YES!!!!!Please do continue!This story is alot better than I first thought it would be!=)
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Reviewed By: SadBrokenWings [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2006 13:08 EST
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This is a very interesting and very original story! Oooooooo.....I can't wait to read more! This really is a great story! ~SBW~
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Reviewed By: Takhisiss (nsi) On: November 15, 2006 10:38 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL, I don't think I've ever read a story quite like this one. The plot is interesting, even more so with all the bets that are going around. I can just imagine how Kags will blow up when she finally learns about them. I wonder, no matter who wins, will she blow them off once she finds out about the bets? I think I would, but that's just me. LOL, and I of course am rooting for Hiei. Please update soon.
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Title: great story
Reviewed By: sixtiesgal On: November 15, 2006 08:59 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i am really enjoying reading your story... please update soon! i want some lemony goodness asap... but bets between who actually gets to bed kagome is a nice touch though i dont really approve of that sort of thing... it kind if gives me the shivers... but good job and keep on writing
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Title: yays!!
Reviewed By: Mysterious_Tears [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2006 18:34 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yays!!! i love it.. its so original.. i mean ive never red another story even close to this plot.. so Kudo's to you.... but one thing.. they gay guy.. i have no clue who he is!!! tell me plz??? *puppy dog eyes* so yes.. but anyways.. its very very entertaining.. so keep it up!! i give you a cookie XD
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Reviewed By: Youkos_Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2006 17:27 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great work! Interesting choice of characters for the HSD. Update soon plz
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Reviewed By: Hieisexymiko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2006 13:35 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
By the way, LOVED that you brought in Jakotsu! He's my all time favorite member of the Shintachi! Wait, did I spell that right?
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Reviewed By: Hieisexymiko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2006 13:32 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello! I didn't realize you post on MediaMiner! I have an account but I haven't transferred any of my stories.... Okay back to the subject at hand! Love the fic so far and think you have an amazing talent exspecially since this is-to my knowledge-your first fic! i'm really enjoying it, but just warning you you'll probably have to repost the last 2 chapters on Fichaven after the server move! Well I can hardly wait to read the next chapter, but don't think I'm gonna do the annoying thing and write UPDATE over and over everyday. (Though I DID do that a lot when I first got into fics....) Well, as I said before LOVE it and sorry about the off-topic sentences I'm just a tad hyper cause I got very little sleep which means I'm running off adrenaline- Shutting up now! Keep up the good work! Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: airwalk55 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2006 13:28 EST
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Hehehe. That was funny. I can't wait to find out what happens next. I think I'm really starting to like Jakotsu. ^^
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