| "Hentai Bets" Reviews/Comments [ 302 ] |
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Reviewed By: SadBrokenWings [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2006 20:53 EST
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I swear, this is one of my absolute FAVORITE stories! You are such a great writer and this is one of the stories that I'm sad when I reach the end of a chapter because I want to read more...*pouts* And who would've thought that the new VP would be HOJO?!?!?!? Man, you've got a wicked mind! I'm dancing in my chair waiting for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Magiknight On: November 26, 2006 15:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's has been a long time since a fan fic has entertained me to this degree. I haven't laughed so hard in a long while. Please continue I can't wait to read more!
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Title: That was Evil
Reviewed By: Arcangel3012 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2006 02:35 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was evil, evily, evil. That was such a wrong place to leave a chapter at. My husband and ms=yself have had great enjoyment out of your story, especially your ulterior meaning behind Nakrau's pelt. Update soon. Arcangel3012 (I am an author on this site, I just Hadn't logged on)
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Reviewed By: Hopelessly Hopefull [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2006 17:54 EST
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oh wow, this is a fantastic story, please continue. much love always, hope xxx
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Reviewed By: Touketsu Kaijin [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2006 16:47 EST
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AAWWWWW!!!!!!! Hiei was being SO sweet! and that little trick Kurama played... beautiful! AND NARAKU!! I wouldn't be surprized if he doesn't show up for another week... truly I'd figure Hiei would castrate him........ Loved it. I can't wait for the next update!
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Reviewed By: Hieisexymiko (NSI) On: November 24, 2006 15:32 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really impressed by this story! I loved the interaction between Hiei and Kags and thought it was really sweet! Also thought Kagome's distractions were hilarious! Keep up the great work, you're an excellent authoress!
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Title: awww...
Reviewed By: mistress_yume [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2006 14:27 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this so amazing! i love it! love the hentai-ness...X3. the night scenes are still a bit confuseing for me, and i desperately want to understand whats happening but... *shrug* eh, give it time, perhaps i'll understand it ^^. please keep up the good work!
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Title: your muse is great
Reviewed By: copperfairy On: November 24, 2006 13:50 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed the picking pockets... wow. what i would not give to have Kuramas mouth on mine... hoooooot! and jakatsou is a really awsome touch to the story, pure brilliance... i laughed my ass off when i read about naraku's little... erm... fetish... love the story... amazing and wonderful and i hope that you keep on writing cause i think you have gotr something great here and it is totally worth continuing... if you dont... well lets just say that ill be mad and sad... and you wouldnt want to do that would you? pwease? *puppy eyes* ... oh and ps... i really want more sexy details about the steamy kisses.. and Kurama lifting kagomes bra... woah... lol Anywho... love the story... keep writing please! xox copper fairy xox
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Reviewed By: Hanyoukagome962 (nsi) On: November 24, 2006 13:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How could youjust let the chapter end like that you are evil after knowing he kissed her i have to know what will happen next so UPADTE SOON.
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Reviewed By: LmKiTsUnE [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2006 12:44 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn, nice way to end the chapter. And it happens again, only this time its Miroku and Jakotsu. I couldn't stop laughing through-out this chapter. It's sad that Naraku would do that, poor Deer. lofl .The pick-pocketing lesson was extra funny this time. "Dude, wheres my bra!!" funny funny. Update soon =]
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Reviewed By: Shadow Maiden [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2006 03:48 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Humor, sexual tension, bets, suspense, even some angst what more can a girl ask for? You did an excellent job on this chapter! I can only imagine what Kagome had uh...'touched' *grins*. Keep up the excellent work!
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Reviewed By: jem89 On: November 20, 2006 23:06 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy reading this story! It's very creative and very good. Please update soon : )
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Reviewed By: LmKiTsUnE [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2006 22:10 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whew, that was full of laughs. I liked the "Omg, Hieis stuck in the woods with a flasher" thing. I cant wait to see how that turns out, poor Hiei. Also the little thing with Kurama, Kagome , Naraku, Jakotsu, other things.......yeah kinda strange but in a good way. Very funny, I love the way your mind works so update again please.!!!
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Reviewed By: Lunarwolfdemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2006 19:59 EST
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Please update soon!I want to find out what happens next,and add in what Hiei,and Naraku are doing at the time.The whole "Naraku is a flasher"thing as got me wondering if he'll actually do that,so please add the next chapter soon.
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Reviewed By: Miss Mischief [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2006 19:33 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was brill, i loved how you portrayed Kurama when he was teaching her how to pick pocket, made me howl with laughter, can't wait till it's kags turn to try it out on kur, even funnier if she had a go on Hiei too.
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