| "The Transience of Memory" Reviews/Comments [ 149 ] |
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Reviewed By: phz On: January 01, 2007 01:34 EST
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hey ya... i still new to mediaminer, but i have been stalking you story for a very long time now... im sorry that i didnt review you until now.. you have a great fic here, i enjoy it very much and got excited everytime i see an update for this ^^ you make me like pairing sei/hay now.. im glad that akuroku are coming out next chapter, i wanted to see more of Roxas ^^ okay then, that's all i have to say for now. i will review you again next time. *wander around mediaminer like a lost puppy*
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Reviewed By: high-and-down On: January 01, 2007 01:28 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I mean wow. I've never read Seifer/Hayner before but I think you have me hooked. Plus, your lemon (S/H mostly, I'm not a big AkuRoku shipper) made me shivery and it's been aaaages since any lemon did that. And there's STYLE and SENSE and plain GOOD WRITING in your story. Which is increasingly hard to find these days, especially so in the KH arena. Congratulations, and please keep writing. I really do want to see more.
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Title: OMG!
Reviewed By: ceera1231 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2006 12:34 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! I love this story so much.^__^ I hope you update soon.Whoot.You should go to livejournal.com/community/khyaoi and post it there.
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Reviewed By: Uniasus [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2006 11:13 EST
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Lier, you are evil. It nice to see that you are returning to Roxas though. Nice chapter.
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Reviewed By: KageRune On: December 30, 2006 01:26 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(AKA SilverWolf at AFF.net) Love this, and I'm so happy that your updates are constant. Can't wait for another chapter of course. I don't use this site often, but you can't update at AFF.net, so yo'ure an exception XD.
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Reviewed By: hikariryu On: December 29, 2006 22:19 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Have I ever mentioned how much I love you -- because I really do...even more so after this chapter. I wish real boys were like Seifer. Once again, beautiful job on this chapter!! Keep up the good work! I've been slaving away bringing Ch. 8's fantasy to life xD.. Pages seven and eight should be up some unholy hour tomorrow morning. Personally, I think the layout's getting much, much better...at the expense of the art itself x.x Enjoy anyway ^^
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Reviewed By: JJ On: December 27, 2006 06:57 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...*_________*... I never thought I'd actually find a Seifer/Hayner fic, let alone a GOOD one!! Maybe I just haven't been looking in the right places. Thank God I'm not the only one who was totally intrigued (read: turned on) by the sexual tension between those two XD Is there a livejournal community for these two? There should be.... *ponders* Well, I bookmarked this and I absolutely cannot wait for more!!
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Reviewed By: AmytheYu On: December 27, 2006 00:16 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*reads and dies* Oh why oh why did I think that it would be okay to not check for updates this week. DX *at home with horrible unstable internet* That was so damn cute. Seifer is growing on me cause of this fic. I never though that I'd see the day I'd think Seifer is cute, but OMFG, Seifer is so cute. O_O;; I don't think I will ever be a SeiHay fan, but I'm totally devoted to them as long as you're writing it. XD And cause it really needed reiteration, OMFG, that was so damn cute. O_O *Vows to check for updates daily from now on to not miss the next update*
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Title: wahhhh
Reviewed By: Chibi Hikiri [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2006 15:14 EST
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axel! i wanna see axel again!
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Reviewed By: Candy Smoke On: December 26, 2006 01:43 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhhohohoho, you are brilliant. I rarely review stories, but yours is truly exceptional. Extremely well written-- structurally, technically and originally-- which is a rare find in fanfiction these days. You make the characters so believable! Also: Thankyouthankyouthankyou for using spellcheck. For some reason it always makes me squirm when people write 'starred' instead of 'stared' or something like that. Wonderful story!
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Reviewed By: JapSock On: December 24, 2006 03:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is very well written. Too bad my family isn't that caring or understanding. If I disappeared for a day my parents would flip. Anyways, I started reading this fic on aff and stalked it when it moved here, I love it! *glomps* Keep up the good work! ~Japsock
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Reviewed By: Hikariryu On: December 24, 2006 02:43 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy Crap. Your impossibly lovely fanfiction has inspired me to draw a doujinshi...which rarely ever happens. This is one stellar piece of work - keep it up! You've totally converted me to a Seifer x Hayner fan...I was intrigued already by that one cutscene where Hayner watches Seifer walk off for the longest time. I've done the first two pages (shoots self, the busy student) The quality's gonna have to be compromised...I've never done a doujinshi, no less in two weeks time. Er, I hope you're not offended or anything - if you don't like it I'll take it down ^^ P1: http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/45260441/ P2: http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/45261293/ Lawlz, I still love your work beyond description. Hang the golden couple (I still love them) and write more shameless Seifer x Hayner!!! Admiringly yours, Hikariryu
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Title: BAH!
Reviewed By: Kemnebi (or Riley) On: December 23, 2006 22:10 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! It was way worth the wait and the change from AFF.NET. Yes, I stalked you to this website >:3. One thing I suggest is actually playing the video game, but other than that this is such a fun fic! Please continue, and I will continue to check every three hours for an update! Merry christmas, and a happy new year to you! (Or happy whatever, I don't know your religion but I wish you the best!)
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Title: Your fangirl's back =3
Reviewed By: Deidara [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2006 21:44 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad you liked my review, and I did, and still mean every word I typed. ^^ Oh, god I loved Hayner's grandmother! She was so awesome, and here I thought she'd be an almost nonexsistent side-character. I'm still gushing over Seifer and Hayner's realtionship, it just so cute. Though with Roxas, I hope things get better! I love Roxas, and to just see him so detached and emo, hurts me.TT_TT Seriously, I check my email everyday to see if you update. And when you do, I'm like "Yes!" cause I know it'll be just be another awesome chapter. Somehow, you made me want to watch that movie that Seifer and Hayner were (somewhat) watching(xD). Well, I don't have much time to gush more on your great work, unforunately, even though you deserve every compliment. But, be sure to expect me to review after EVERY chapter. You won't be able to get rid of me >D
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Reviewed By: Uniasus [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2006 14:43 EST
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I must say I got excited when I say the chapter title. I always tend to be mean to my favorite charaters. But he only got a brief snipet of air time! Sigh, sorry but I just tend to play favorites, even if everything around me (like the pink elephant playing with my hair) is all in my head. Good story though.
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