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"The Transience of Memory" Reviews/Comments [ 149 ]
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 Reviewed By: Number VIII - Axel [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 21, 2007 23:52 EST
Comment/Review:
Yay!! AkuRoku is back!
 Reviewed By: AmytheYu  On: January 21, 2007 04:51 EST
Comment/Review:
Okay, I lie. Akuroku is still hot. O_O Holy crap that was some nice smut. XD Only thing that would have made it better would have been more smut. Though now I want more Akuroku smut on top of more SeiHay smut. The solution? More ghey porn for all (except Bo...I hope he landed on his penis when he got punched down and it's all crushed and painful)! 8B
 Reviewed By: sennenricecooker  On: January 21, 2007 02:49 EST
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Haha, I'm so glad I checked back the same day. I was like "NOOOO" for missing two updates, but it's better sometimes because I don't have to wait for the updates as long, I suppose. I only had to wait a few hours for the outcome of Bo's party, I had it easy! XD Anyways, you are really good at this timing stuff. I was like "No, don't rape Hayner." And he didn't, that would have been too much drama too fast. That is one thing I think "gangster-bitch lit" writers rush WAY too much. But then again, I didn't expect this story to be typical. ^__^ And... AXEL IS BACK AND ROXAS LOVES HIM!!! That scene made me feel fuzzy with overwhelming Yaoi fangirlishness... Those were some damn good emotions you played up! So... 'appropriate', is the best word I could think of >< Ok, now I have to wait more than a day for the next chapter.-__- Update soon!
 Reviewed By: KageRune  On: January 21, 2007 01:51 EST
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^^ AkuRoku. Did Hayner actually get........ Err yea. BTW, I think I wrote it in an AFF.net review. Fujin's a girl. Maybe you just decided to make him a guy ^^;
 Reviewed By: Loli  On: January 21, 2007 01:41 EST
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Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
I..Uh..GRAH! I have no words for this chapter! D: POOR HAYNER. WHAT ABOUT SEIFER? WHATS WITH XAVIER? YAY FOR ROXAS AND AXEL? Grah! So many questions!
 Reviewed By: Takaia  On: January 20, 2007 22:42 EST
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
OMG! -squeels- I love this I am like so totally just gah... I'm to addicted for my own good I must know what happens next I absolutlly LOVE the relationship between Seifer and Hayner awesome! wwwweeeeeee.... Sorry I just can't help my self I am so glad I started reading this it is just so ahhhh!!!!! The first time I was reading it I was up till like 4am in the monring reading it all I just couldn't stop and then that cliffhanger in the last chapter ohhh! I nearly went MAD well more so then I already am any ways but moring on I CAN'T wait till your next update I have the story Bookmarked on my computer ^_^ YAYS!!! I love this story so much you are the bestest ever weeeeee!!!! Once this story is finished and I'm done reading it all I belive I can die happy!! Again YOU ARE THE BESTEST EVER!!!!!
 Reviewed By: mellorine [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 20, 2007 19:47 EST
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Now I feel like a spammer. Oi oi oi. I'm sorry. I'm too stubborn. Stupid MM. J00 MUST HEAR MY PRAISE! "... But the best part of this chapter? The akuroku. YAYYYYY! I love you. Thank you thankyouthankyouthankyou! ^^ You write scenes like that beautifully and the emotion really comes through and just... I could cry with joy that Roxas finally remembered and that Axel finally was all "YAYSEX!".. My life is fulfilled for the moment, now, anyway. I am surprised that you haven't played the whole game yet, though. Granted, the only parts really concerning Roxas/Axel are in the beginning. Your characters don't seem too OOC. Axel is appropriately gentler around Roxas, and just... yeah. I digress, however. I would try to think of something that I didn't like about this chapter, I can't think of anything. So yeah! Can't wait for your next update, squeee!"
 Reviewed By: mellorine [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 20, 2007 19:45 EST
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
((*spots that review was cut* NOT THIS TIME, YO! *pastes in rest of review*)) >.
 Reviewed By: mellorine [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 20, 2007 19:44 EST
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Pfeh, you kidding me? That bathtub scene was awesome. You really got Roxas' misery across, I felt terrible xD Your picture is quite teh spiffeh. But onto teh chappie review! First off... Bo deserved that punch. Mmmhmm. Heck yes. Although when the bandana crew said "That's Seifer's bitch!" I cracked up. With giggles. Hehehe. But then I was all "NOOO! Don't rape Hayner, plzkthx!" I half-expected Seifer to show up and lay the smack-down, but he didn't. Two points to Xavier for saving the day, ne? Seifer's going to be pissed later, though. Phew boy >.
 Reviewed By: sennenricecooker  On: January 20, 2007 02:18 EST
Comment/Review:
Is Roxas going to be totally wasted??? YAY, you've updated!I loved that Hayner and Roxas chapter. "I have the attention span of a retarded gnat..." the chapter was just a really nice read. As usual...^__^ Aaaand I also love the actual affection between Seifer and Hayner, usually it's like arrogance shipping or something going on between them. Aaaand you are evil for that cliff hanger.But I'm too caught up in this fic to actually be frustrated. I don't think that made any sense. Anyways...Update soon!
 Reviewed By: olheiras  On: January 19, 2007 16:05 EST
Comment/Review:
I'm really enjoying this! You were prolly one of the people who got me into Seifer/Hayner, mmyep. Have some internet cookies! You deserve them 8]
 Reviewed By: codename_windy aka Wind  On: January 19, 2007 10:15 EST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Another reader from AFF.net! I generally don't bother browsing fics on mm.org, so I am glad you posted at least the beginning in AFF 'cause I am enjoying this fic very much. Seifer&Hayner are quite tasty couple. >3 And yay for the generous amouth of lemony goodness with them~! As for Axel and Roxas... who doesn't think they're a wonderful couple! Aaaw, Roxy, your confusion and emo-angst is so adorable~! ^_^ The latest chapter does have me worried tho. Uh oh, boys... not a good idea to a)go somewhere alone with someone stronger than you or b)get drunk with a horny stranger. Unless it's a hot horny stranger and you're free, but... Roxas isn't free, he's Axel's property, even if he doesn't know it at the moment! So I am hoping for a heroic rescue~!
 Reviewed By: AmytheYu  On: January 15, 2007 20:35 EST
Comment/Review:
Nuuuuuuuuuuuuu. I want more now. T_T I look forward to potential Bo pwnage in the next chap. >=D
 Title: late...as always
Reviewed By: hikariryu  On: January 15, 2007 14:37 EST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
asldkfjkld! Cliffhangers make me sad...but I really like what you've done with the story, so I'll forgive you ^_~ Hayner's in such a pinch...and where's Seifer to save poor Hayhay? I just hope Bo's gonna get the ass-kicking of a lifetime, because no one touches Hayner except Seif! On another note, I apologize for my lack of activity on DA...*grumbles* since when did spanish take over Biggest Workload...but I'm working on it - unfortunately, it will take a while T_T Well, I'll be waiting to see the outcome Bo's party this weekend!
 Reviewed By: Uniasus [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 15, 2007 06:41 EST
Comment/Review:
You haven't played the game?! Or just haven't finished? 'cuz you have a great handle on thier personas.
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