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| "Love's Smirking Revenge" Reviews/Comments [ 148 ] | | Pages (10): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 › » ] | Reviewed By: Ai Kisugi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2009 16:18 EST
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Well, I have thoroughly enjoyed reading your story. I loved the plot twists. As usual I'm upset at Inuyasha for being a baka. It certainly wasn't Kagome's fault that Kikyo was killed. It was Naraku's fault. But still the guilt overrides everything sometimes... And Inuyasha still feels guilty about not getting there in time. I'm betting that Inuyasha is going to give up on Kags for a while, which will mean Koga will sweep on in. Maybe in a fit of jealously Iunyasha might finally figure out what he wants and needs. I can only hope. Well, please give us a happy ending! Oh and one more prediction. Kagura has the gun with the gold bullets...right?
| Title: Congratulations!
Reviewed By: ktshabatie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2009 01:35 EST
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Congratulations Langus - your story Love's Smirking Revenge has been nominated for Best Drama at the Inuyasha FanGuild for the Fourth Quarter of 2008! This is only the first step in the process though-all nominations have to be seconded in order to reach voting. Furthermore, each nominated story must pass a careful screening process in order to make certain that all stories nominated at the IYFG meet our standards for technical quality. In the event that your story is disqualified for technical reasons, the IYFG offers resources to help you make improvements so that you can appeal the disqualification and have the nomination of your story reinstated. These resources include a Grammar Guide (posted on our website) of helpful hints and common mistakes, as well as a newly created Beta Group to assist you in making any changes you wish to make. You are in no way obligated to use these resources, but they're here for anyone who is interested. If you would like to learn more, keep abreast of your story's progress, or perhaps even join the IYFG and participate in our proceedings yourself, visit our website at Inuyashafanguild . com [remove the spaces] (or search "Inuyasha FanGuild" if you cannot access the link). And feel free to contact a moderator if you have any questions-their contact info is available on the site. Congratulations again! ktshabatie
| Title: Congratulations!
Reviewed By: ktshabatie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2009 01:33 EST
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Congratulations Langus - your story Love's Smirking Revenge has been nominated for Best Alternate Reality/Universe at the Inuyasha FanGuild for the Fourth Quarter of 2008! This is only the first step in the process though-all nominations have to be seconded in order to reach voting. Furthermore, each nominated story must pass a careful screening process in order to make certain that all stories nominated at the IYFG meet our standards for technical quality. In the event that your story is disqualified for technical reasons, the IYFG offers resources to help you make improvements so that you can appeal the disqualification and have the nomination of your story reinstated. These resources include a Grammar Guide (posted on our website) of helpful hints and common mistakes, as well as a newly created Beta Group to assist you in making any changes you wish to make. You are in no way obligated to use these resources, but they're here for anyone who is interested. If you would like to learn more, keep abreast of your story's progress, or perhaps even join the IYFG and participate in our proceedings yourself, visit our website at Inuyashafanguild . com [remove the spaces] (or search "Inuyasha FanGuild" if you cannot access the link). And feel free to contact a moderator if you have any questions-their contact info is available on the site. Congratulations again! ktshabatie
| Title: Congratulations!
Reviewed By: ktshabatie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2009 01:31 EST
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Congratulations Langus - your story Love's Smirking Revenge has been nominated for Best Action/Adventure at the Inuyasha FanGuild for the Fourth Quarter of 2008! This is only the first step in the process though-all nominations have to be seconded in order to reach voting. Furthermore, each nominated story must pass a careful screening process in order to make certain that all stories nominated at the IYFG meet our standards for technical quality. In the event that your story is disqualified for technical reasons, the IYFG offers resources to help you make improvements so that you can appeal the disqualification and have the nomination of your story reinstated. These resources include a Grammar Guide (posted on our website) of helpful hints and common mistakes, as well as a newly created Beta Group to assist you in making any changes you wish to make. You are in no way obligated to use these resources, but they're here for anyone who is interested. If you would like to learn more, keep abreast of your story's progress, or perhaps even join the IYFG and participate in our proceedings yourself, visit our website at Inuyashafanguild . com [remove the spaces] (or search "Inuyasha FanGuild" if you cannot access the link). And feel free to contact a moderator if you have any questions-their contact info is available on the site. Congratulations again! ktshabatie
| Reviewed By: clnv [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2009 17:12 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the new chapter! I apologize for not writing a review sooner. As much as we love to get them, sometimes, we fall short in giving them out. I've loved this story since the beginning and the emotions you draw out in your writing leave me breathless! I immensely enjoy your Inuyasha character. He fits so well with the actual manga: tortured, guilty, arrogant to hide his pain. And your version of Kagome is always my favorite. I love a good strong female character. One who has suffered greatly and overcome her past to become a strong and independant woman. Unfotunately, those heorines usually have an iron clad barrier around their hearts but you approach that subject and blow it away with a passion between the two that was so well written and well...HOT, for lack of a better word! And here I sound like a twittering fan girl...haha. Thank you so much for sharing such a fabulous peice of work. You have so much talent! I can't wait to see what you come up with next! Regards!
| Reviewed By: Selina MacCloveror [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2009 11:58 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Shame on you!! *shakes finger teasingly* I had been following this on ED and just realized that you had been updating on MM all along! Oh, man!!! But I was so happy to see new chapters to read, so all is forgiven!! (Like you were concerned! lol) Anyway, I'm LOVING this story, and the updates are beyond exciting!! I can't wait for another!! I feel bad for Yash; Kagome definitely betrayed him, at least in a way, but of course I'm hoping he'll come to forgive her! But is it just me, or is that not his main issue with her? He seemed to be less concerned about what she had done in her past and more concerned with how he had let her down. So maybe he has forgiven her already? Hmmmm.... I have to know! And what's going on with the bullet? Did someone else shoot it, or was Naraku not the person he thought he was? BAH! I'm going in circles! My brain's on overload because I was so excited to find updated chapters! XD But anyway, I (as I'm sure others) totally understand about the break in order to deal with real-world needs...especially when it's concerning school! Good luck with your thesis, and I'll be anxiously awaiting your return! :)
| Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2009 16:34 EST
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good luck with your thesis and thanks for the update!
| Reviewed By: Inu_Does_Me [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2009 15:16 EST
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Oh Langus, your going to have my poor heart like melted goo in your hot hands! You'll have to scoop it up in a spoon because I'm never leaving your side (smile). I'll be leaving puddles behind you in your wake. That mind and fingers of yours are a dangerous combo my dear friend and I am hopelessly bound to your magic. You must have that powder on them that addicts people to you, cause right now Im like a Kagome with a fetish for dog ears (haha)! I am running out of words to say how wonderful this story is and why its so. You just seem to have my mind going at snail pace because its crammed with too much goodness! Im going to have to run out and buy a thesaurus so I can actually sound impressive. I couldn't believe that InuYasha left Kagome. I was kinda expecting the awkwardness of InuYasha battling the feelings of not wanting to be with her because of the guilt but can't stay away because I care for you, yet when you wrote my heart was literally so loud I was sure I was hearing a base pounding in my ears -it also could have been my neighbors music too- and I was quite tempted to drag a homeless person off my street, and pay them 50 bucks to read the chapter and then tell me what happened, I kid you not (laugh). Yes, Im quirky that way (sigh). Part of my.....interesting personality. In the end though I didn't because like I said in the last review your story has drawn me in more deeply than I could ever have first thought. Its always amazing that if you stop looking for a good fiction they eventually find you. Im so glad that I found yours. LSR brings a certain enjoyment in me that I haven't had toward fiction since I first started reading them. So thankyou. I think its almost at the standard of being published worthy. I know your shaking your head and laughing bout now but have some faith in my judgement my friend. Its just the way you describe the characters personality and somehow blend it in so nicely with the basics of writing like the details that make readers feel apart of the plot journey. People who don't like a bit of romance in their books -which is boggling for me imagine- will sit down until they read every single chapter. You just add that spunk to your writing that makes a wonderful concoction to drown in. And not like my writing, you have just the right amount of detail so that it doesn't overshadow the conflicts themselves. And I was SO SO TOUCHED that at the end you dedicated the chapter to me!!!! I reread it 20 times before I really believed that it was my name. No one has ever done that because to me reviews are done out of just plain respect to the writer. You deserve every good word. Although Im very happy with myself that Id made you smile. You certainly did for me. Im STILL in shock and laughing, blushing and giggling like an idiot. All at the same time. No doubt that my room-mate thinks I've gone mad. It's true though, Ive been smiling this huge smile and giggling like a lunatic the whole while I was writing this review, which has been some time now. Im defintely acting like a pree-teen and your my Jonas Brother (giggling). Im gonna print this chapter off and frame it now haha. I hope your school project goes well. I know they can be a real pain in the you-know-where. I'll be sure to click in when the new post arrives. Its going to be a long month without you (sigh). Oh well, you got me strapped into the long ride now. No way Im giving up my seat in your torture. First seat baby! Take care of yourself and thanks for giving up some of your time. And I'll be for sure voting for LSR in all the Feudal Association categories! I hope this review makes you smile like that last. It's the least I can do.
| Reviewed By: Inu_Does_Me [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2009 22:05 EST
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I really admire your writing in this story. Absolutely superb. I always tell because I find it plays a very love-hate situation with your heart. Love because you have personalities done so well, when you write I feel as though I am that character, you realistic not all cheesy, your smuts are mind-blowing and your InuYasha and Kagome are so perfect! I am a die hard fan of them if you didn't know already (snicker). The hate part is because I just don't like having anything in the way between InuYasha and Kagome. My heart strings are attached to these two fictional characters! And I hate that its made to be that Kagome is an awful person because she ain't. She protecting herself when Onigumo was after her and it wasn't her fault when that damn Kikyou was killed. I REALLLY hope that doesn't affect InuYasha and Kagome's relationship! Please tell if it does so I can prepare my poor heart. So please keep the InuYasha and Kagome love because I won't be able to stand it if not. Then again thats what makes a good story right? You want readers to feel sadness and anger because they will read on to seek that bright happy moment. So you better have one or god help me i'll have a heartattack (smile). Pretty please write some more. Thankyou so much for the lovely talent you share with us.
| Title: omg
Reviewed By: ahhhhhh On: December 20, 2008 19:47 EST
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omg i see where the title is coming in now. i love love love this story i cant wait to find out what the guy did to make kagome 'gut him like a fish'. and and and how badly the truth is oging to affect her and inuyahsa's relationship. :):) i can see 2 ways already. none of them really pretty. good job :) update soon PLEASE
| Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2008 14:33 EST
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oh man i read every chapter with baited breath lol. finally i can breathe again! thanks for the great update!
| Reviewed By: Tarzan from fanfic.net On: December 20, 2008 00:28 EST
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yay for it not being the end!
| Reviewed By: chanda [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2008 00:02 EST
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WTG Langus!!! I am so ready for the ride, let's do it! ;) Great update hun! I was on the edge of my seat the entire chapter! I feel bad that the other guy died, but I am happy that bastard finally had what was coming to him. Thank you for the awesome Christmas present and I hope you have a wonderful holiday as well! Until next time, Chanda
| Reviewed By: Ivellios [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2008 23:43 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When you said loose ends to tie up you weren't kidding! Who was the man that got shot and killed in the warehouse (besides Naraku of course) And what happens now to Inuyasha and Kagome's relationship? How does Inuyasha start to trust Kagome again or does he not trust her again? And where do they go from here? Well thank you very much for the Christmas present and have a very Happy Holidays yourself! Sincerely, Zach
| Reviewed By: Kags- -dogboylover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2008 09:01 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay, finally an update :DD it took a little long but it was worth the waiting! really an amazing chapter that certainly left everyone even more curious and anxious, please keep it up!!
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