| "A Life for a Life" Reviews/Comments [ 127 ] |
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Reviewed By: itachi-sama15 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2007 00:37 EDT
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Holy crap!!! ......0.o Naruto wait for me into the unconscious world from this shock !! ( fall on to the floor and enter unconscious world ) Please write some more so i can wake up again from this shock.......
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Reviewed By: EmeraldFoxTears [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2007 13:33 EDT
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AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE YOU STORY SO FAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!!!!!!!!!! I CANT SAY MUCH MORE CUZ IM SO FLIPPING HYPER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WRITE MORE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ~runs around and jumps off a cliff singing mary had a little lamb while sipping sake and flapping my arms like wings~
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Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2007 11:22 EDT
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wonderful as usual. I love it when that fuzz ball comes out like that. Keep out the excelent work.
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Reviewed By: CrimsonCat10101 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2007 22:11 EDT
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This is......beautiful, y-your going to make me cry...Why are you so good? I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Drac [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2007 17:52 EDT
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Definately loving the story you set up. This is great. Can't wait to see what happens next!
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Title: Neat story
Reviewed By: Mirena [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2007 18:31 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice story whatever all the chapters have been interesting. wanna hear all of it.
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Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2007 11:31 EDT
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He better take that offer. I know I have not read this in many days but it was worth the wait to do so. Keep up with the excelent work. and update soon.
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Title: PLEASE update
Reviewed By: Shinu 13th Sage Sage of Pain [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2007 10:33 EDT
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Please, please update!! I like your story. It has a few grammatical errors, but it's pretty good, and very believeable, if you would only update! (silent sobs) I want to know what happens!!
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Reviewed By: jessie6491 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2007 22:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have really enjoyed reading this fanfiction so far because it is very realistic. those are obviously always the best ones. i can't help but wonder though, if you are going to do a flash back of when sasuke and sasami left the sound?
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Reviewed By: EmeraldFoxTears [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2007 18:59 EDT
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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NOOOOOOOO!!!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!! NO!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHY DO YOU DO THIS TO ME?!!?!?! YOU LEAVE ME AT A CLIFFHANGER!!!!!!!!! WAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!! WHY MUST YOU TORTURE ME SO!?!?!?!?!!?!? T.T You're so evil!!! They're acting like chum chums! Wooo! I normally don't like Sasuke, but he seems tolerable in your story. I didn't know someone could do that. o.o Good for you! ~squeals and falls to the floor~ HEHEHE NARUTO AND SASUKE GETS A FAMILY!!!! ~girly squeal~ O.O OMG WTH DID I JUST DOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!! ~collapses to the ground in shame~ (i know, really random much o.o) ~shoots herself with a shuriken and kuts myself with a kunai~ SHAMEFUL KITSUTORA!!! BAD!!! NO GIRLY SQUEAL!!!!!!!!!! ^^ Please update soon. (i'm not phychotic! I'm just on crack >.> [not really])
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Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2007 09:24 EDT
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You and those cliffy's, but that is all right I love this story. Keep up with the excelent work.
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Reviewed By: itachi-sama15 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2007 02:17 EDT
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Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Why stop there it was getting to the good part!!! But that is also a good cliffy!!! Please write more soon don't keep in suspence or I might just slice some random person with my katanna !!!
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Reviewed By: ya-ya-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2007 10:08 EDT
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noooooooo haw could you stop the story just like that its not right you are soooooo cruel im going to cry
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Reviewed By: InuyashaNaruto [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2007 08:29 EDT
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Great chapter I loved it the cliffy is great I cant wait to see how this develops!!
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Reviewed By: ya-ya-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2007 10:02 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story kees getting better and better please update soon
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