| "A Life for a Life" Reviews/Comments [ 127 ] |
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Reviewed By: EmeraldFoxTears [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2007 18:39 EDT
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Really good as usual, I really love your fanfic so far, it's getting really deep. and... YAY!!!!!!!! YOU PUT NARUTO AND HINATA TOGETHER!!!!! WOOOOOOOOOOOOOT!!!! Lol, well I don't know what much to say, (did I mix up my words?) You should toy around with some other couples too (i like Shikamaru Temari pairings personally) -^.^- teeeheee lol jk but seriously, that's a cute couple, just a suggestion though. Question, what does Sasmi's grandfather having the snake summoning contract stolen from him have to do with the whole situation? You gonna explain it in future chapters? I WANNA KNOW!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2007 09:21 EDT
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delightful as ever. Keep up with the great work.
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Title: WOW!!!!!
Reviewed By: itachi-sama15 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2007 18:00 EDT
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Wow1!!! That was unexecpeted that the snake contract was stolen from sasami's grandfather. The story is totaly awesome as always. Keep up the awesomw work!!!^_*
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Reviewed By: InuyashaNaruto [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2007 10:22 EDT
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I am really getting more and more into this with every chapter and I have to say I am as hyped about updates for this is I am about the manga great chapter!
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Reviewed By: InuyashaNaruto [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2007 17:51 EDT
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It was a little jerky and I agree I like the Sasuke Sami moments espiecially the peek at his 'memory' all around a good chapter and as always I look forward to the next!!
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Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2007 13:29 EDT
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That was an awsome chapter. Really, can't wait for you to up date.
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Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2007 13:00 EDT
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UHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHGgggggggggggg, Love the cliffies. Wonderful Chappy.
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Reviewed By: Fyrloche [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2007 10:31 EDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that you've been around me too long. You are quite adept at the use of cliff hangers. I like the story but you are having a little trouble with some of your spelling and grammar. It's not that you are misspelling the words as much as you are using the wrong spelling. Ex.- then should have been than. Most of your mistakes are like that which is why spell check doesn't get them. You are not getting the spelling wrong, just the wrong spelling for what you are saying. Otherwise, this is a great story. I look forward to your next chapter. Later, Fyrloche.
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Reviewed By: ya-ya-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2007 09:36 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow its been a while since i reviewed its only cuz i've been so absorbed in the story so congrats on a great story
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Title: Ameteretsu
Reviewed By: midnyte_chylde [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2007 18:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
style of writing is an 8 because I know from expirence that there is always room for improvement. Did you know that Ameteretsu is the Japanese goddess of the sun? Sopposedly all life sprung from her and the Japanese Emporer is a direct decendent, because the firts was (or claimed to be) her celestial child on earth. If you did, that's a great paralelle that adds a nice eerie quality to an already astounding plot twist. If you didn't now you do and the coiencidence adds something to the story. This is one of my favorite pieces of writing, and reading (either fanficcs or otherwise) is all I do, so it's high praise. (I cant afford a tv, nor do I want one, I know about naruto from the manga and internet) Keep up the fabulous work, and if you feel that you need a beta for anything, please drop me a line. Ja Midnyte
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Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2007 11:17 EDT
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Oh and I for got, the referance to Yu Yu Hakashu also Kurama was my fav. lol, keep up with teh excelent work.
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Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2007 10:34 EDT
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I have noticed quiet a few time that there is a lot of refference to Inuyasha,,,,,, I am also a big fan of the anime. Love what you did to incorperate them in the story.
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Reviewed By: Fyrloche [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2007 06:47 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello, milady! It's been a while. Excellent work. I am enjoying this story and thought that I would drop you a line to tell you. chuckles It seems that I am not the only one to have ideas for the fox demon that inhabits Naruto. Though, my own idea went back to Inuyasha. I thought about Naruto running into Kagome and the fox recognizing her as it's mother! Better still, Kagome recognizing the youki signature of the fox and her having a fit trying to get 'Shippou' unsealed from Naruto! It's food for thought anyway. sighs I haven't been able to write lately. There was a breast cancer scare with my wife and my mind has been focused on that. I tried but my heart wasn't in it and the story suffered. Fortunately, everything turned out okay so I am back into writting form again. We'll get back to work on 'Cat-alyst' soon. Later, Fyrloche.
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Reviewed By: InuyashaNaruto [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2007 19:39 EDT
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I like your reasoning supporting it whole heartedly and as always I look forward to the next!
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2007 15:51 EDT
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I really like this story but I am confused since Sasuke killed Orochimaru what is he going to do with the sound village will he become the new leader oh well just keep up the great work and update soon please
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