| "A Life for a Life" Reviews/Comments [ 127 ] |
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Reviewed By: harumikomi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2007 05:06 EDT
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u r 1 of my fave authors.u noe y?cuz u update evryday!!!Bwahahaha!
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Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2007 09:33 EDT
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You are mean, But as it goes I love the story as it is, Keeps me interested and intriged. How did you find the time to research everything about the show? Well anyway keep up with the exclent work.
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Reviewed By: itachi-sama15 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2007 03:24 EDT
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Poor Umiko!!! It's sad that dhe cares for naruto and his dad but has to betray them also. But the story is awesome!!!! So keep writing more please!!!!
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2007 17:12 EDT
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Nice chaps I could see why Naruto is jealous. Umiko is really confusing is she with or against the leaf; can't wait to se how that turns out.
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Reviewed By: InuyashaNaruto [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2007 14:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah man that was cool, poor Naruto to be jealous like that great chapter as always looking forward to the next!!
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Reviewed By: peregrine829 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2007 00:27 EDT
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Perhaps I'm mistaken, but wasn't Arashi the hero in a war against Rock, not Cloud?
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2007 18:57 EDT
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I feel.......happy!!!! Loved the Chap
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Reviewed By: EmeraldFoxTears [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2007 15:38 EDT
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thanks for the permission to use base ideas : ) i dont know what i'm going to use for Naruto's mothers name though. im thinking of two names tho; kijutsu, tejina. both mean magic, but im thinking that i could say that one reason Naruto's father was attracted to her was cuz "jutsu" was in her first name. so im thinking of using kijutsu : ) kinda fits ne? anyways, keep going, your fanfic is going really well! and i liked that little bonus story at the end, although i didnt get to read it all cuz i had to go to school. (i didnt have to be in school until a later time and had a lil time to read but when i came back my desktop had nothing on it -_-) but when i can i'll go back and read the rest. o and i liked that part about Hinata's handkerchief calming Naruto while he was all demonic hehehehee nice very nice touch. -^^- NARUTO X HINATA FOREVA BIZATCHES!!!! (sorry for the outburst) will Umiko and Arashi get together in your story? u put her in quite a spot T.T how horrible yet so awesome! in a fanficcy type way >.> anyways! i like the way you describ Sasuke and what he does, even though i really dislike Sasuke (he's emo and i can't stand guys who are emo i dont know why either) its weird but its very true. oooooo and i loved the fact that you had Naruto actually accept a hug from his dad soooooooooooooo what they both need!!!!!!!!! and omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg i had sugar O.O not really irrelevent but... (goes on forever saying stupid pointless stuff that no one understands) and furthermore i act like im high even though that's far from the truth. ^^ ~crickets~ yeah i'm done -_- ^^;;; gomenasai keep up the good work! can't wait to read more!!!!
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2007 22:45 EDT
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Damn, this story is amazing, and the end story in the latest chapter, at the end of 39, is particularly strong. Keep going.
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Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2007 15:28 EDT
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There is nothing that I can say that would be good, but to say this is that this is the best writen story that I have read in a long time. What else is there to say, but to keep with the out standing work and update soon as possible.
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Reviewed By: peregrine829 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2007 15:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
An unbelievable fic! I honestly cannot wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2007 17:25 EDT
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I believe Kyuubi is going to go on a Rampage in of course Naruto's body. WAR he isn't the strongest for no reason
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2007 07:44 EDT
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Kabuto is dead if he goes against Sasuke's wishes and I can't wait because I believe that he is! Great to know more about what Sasuke's point of view is...poor naruto. Thank You zigyy553 for expalining the whole Tobi thing to me...
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Reviewed By: Wing Guardian [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2007 02:20 EDT
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I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! The way you have taken this story is quite interesting. Please continue to write.
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Reviewed By: golden_haired_neko_hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2007 02:06 EDT
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.... Wow. I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT!!!!!!!!! I think that there's something in this story, some kind of drug or something. I say that because I'm extremely addicted to it now. I've read quite a few fics on Naruto, and I have never read one this fantastic. I really can't wait to see what happens next, and I'm hoping that I can find out soon!!!!!! I freaking love this thing!!!!!!
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