| "A Life for a Life" Reviews/Comments [ 127 ] |
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Reviewed By: EmeraldFoxTears [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2007 13:41 EDT
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AHHHHH YOU STOPPED THERE AT A CLIFFHANGER!!!! NOOOOOO!!!! WHY DO YOU TORTURE ME SO!!?!?!!?! Sorry I haven't written a review lately, my mom stole the computer from me. But now for an update on what I think, (which really doesn't matter) Ahem... I ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT! THANK YOU SO VERY MUCH FOR HAVING THE VILLAGERS FINALLY RECOGNIZE NARUTO! I LOVE YOU FOR THAT!!!! And that fight between Arashi and Naruto, great way for everyone to find out that Arashi is still alive, awesome, awesome AWESOME! Hm, maybe you should start showing off some more of Hinata's skill in your fanfic too. You already showed off her more... aggrivated side. o.o (doesn't want to be in an angry Hinata's way) Just a suggestion, but maybe you should do a chapter where it's mostly someone else's perception of the day. You could use Umiko, Hinata, or someone else who's watching Arashi and Naruto, or maybe have another of their friends just watch out of curiosity. It'd be cool if you had something happen between Naruto and Hinata, and maybe have Arashi give us more background information on his wife. Question though, is that really his wife's name or did you come up with Yukita? Just wondering. Oooo, you could also tell us Narut's point of view on everything that's happening so far, (even though I know he's a little... iffy I guess you could say, don't think that's the right word though.) Just some suggestions, not trying to tell you how to write the story or anything. But you have some really good ideas, it makes me think and gives me ideas for my fanfic. (I'm not stealing anything but I've had an idea to bring in Naruto's parents from the beginning) Anyways, please keep up the good work, I can't wait to read more!!!!
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Reviewed By: zigyy553 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2007 12:38 EDT
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Tobi is the 1 who found Sasori's ring, and became 1 of the top 10 in the Akatsuki (Orochimaru was number 10). If someone finds the ring and wears it, either Akatsuki accepts you, kills, or forever loses one member. Oh, and is the world the Leader talking about where chakra comes from FMA?
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2007 08:04 EDT
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Who's Tobi and whose that ladie's daughter?? You jsut love to keep your readers wondering don't you?!?! CAn't wait for the next chapter
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Title: coolio
Reviewed By: oOUchiha_Sasuke_ItachiOo [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2007 18:21 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey zigyy553.. i didnt no u read this one too!! this is charity-nicole... well this is great story!!! continue with the good work!! i really love this story!! please keep going! i hope they find out oon who she is .. i wonder who her daughter or child is...??? oh well ill just wait and see!!!
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2007 13:46 EDT
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That was a good chapter and Icann`t wait to read more
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2007 10:14 EDT
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Is Sasuke going to try and get al of the demons like Akutski? First in his collection Naruto and then he would take Akutski on? What is Naruto's mom going to do?? So many questions!!! Update soon
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Reviewed By: Fyrloche [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2007 07:41 EDT
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Pay no attention to the nay sayers or perhaps one should say 'neigh' sayers since they are asses. Seriously, darlin', you get more people objecting to your non-canon stuff than anyone I know of. It's a secret talent you have. Or maybe its just your blood talent. Who knows? Just remember that a lot of us like you just the way you are. On an unrelated note, I'm sorry that I haven't updated anything lately. There has been a lot of turmoil in my home (health and daughter independance issues). Fortunately, most of it has worked out and I will be able to concentrate on writing again. Keep up the good work. Later, Fyrloche.
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Reviewed By: zigyy553 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2007 21:42 EDT
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Please let that be Naruto's mother. Please let that be Naruto's mother. Please let that be Naruto's mother. Please let that be Naruto's mother. Please let that be Naruto's mother. Please let that be Naruto's mother. Please let that be Naruto's mother....
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Reviewed By: WolfPad [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2007 01:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
*amused* with authors, there is no such thing as 'coincidence'. Great story, I adore the plotline and your characterizations. It got a bit slow at times, but not nearly enough to make me stop reading. I also highly enjoy your little cliffhangers you like to write; they are highly amusing. =^^= Keep it up, and I shall definitely continue reading.
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2007 23:35 EDT
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I thought this chapter was pretty good the only think I can say is that Danzou needs to be found out and killed for what he did and for what he was planning anyways keep up th great work and update soon please
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2007 14:00 EDT
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I love this story and I liked this chapter wow this woman has me wondering if she is actually Naruto mother who was thought dead or could it be his aunt or maybe I have no idea what I was thinking of oh well this still a great story and I cann`t wait to read more
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Title: INUYOKIA87
Reviewed By: INUYOKIA87 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2007 22:39 EDT
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Please hurry and update! I like this story alot you really have talent for weaving images together.
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2007 08:15 EDT
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First time reviewing this Story and I have to say. I LOVE IT!!! it is total greatsness. Your idea of Arashi coming back to life and the struggles of Naruto are just wonderful. Although i cannot wait to know what Sasuke is planning to do and to know if Orochimaru is really dead or not. Either way the story is GREAT. please update soon. i need to know what happens with the whole bloodline limit techniques.
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Reviewed By: zigyy553 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2007 01:14 EDT
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update!
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 12:29 EDT
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Wow both chapters were great and funny I cann`t wait to read more by the way that Final Fantasy VII The Last Order movie you said about is it on dvd or is it on psp because the oly FF7 movie I know of is Advent of Children because if it is on dvd then I will go look for it oh yeah keep up the great work and update soon please
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