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| "Redemption" Reviews/Comments [ 90 ] | | Pages (6): [ 1 2 3 4 5 6 › » ] | Reviewed By: ScarlettKuasta [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2010 18:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ZOMFG!! I 'm crying!!! *sniff* its amazing, love the story!! Love the way you've written it, since the moment you describe the waking of Bakura in this world, through the description of the creation of hell and the daemons, the encounter between Bakura & Ryou, thge lemon!! (omg! can't find words for it.. awesome, incredible, I mean, Ryou being seme?! o.o) to the accident and Bakura's desicion (that I love how Marik participate) and now, Ryou awaking from death! couldn't wait to the last chapter to write this.. I'm very sensible at this point.. and as you mention at the beginnig, you indeed have a very unique belief!! love the way you think! *sniff* now, I'll leave, cause I want to see how this ends.. TwT thank you for sharing this fic with us!! *hugs*
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Reviewed By: KaitouRyuki [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2009 22:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it. Sad that it ended though. Are you gonna make a sequel to this? Can't wait.
| Reviewed By: graypheonix85 On: September 28, 2009 15:50 CDT
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Heh, awesome. Continue to write, and enjoy it. Ja ne.
| Reviewed By: paniwi (nli) On: September 28, 2009 13:09 CDT
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ooh sacharine feel-good chapter right there. Disney couldn't beat you at it. Neeh, I'm just teasing hon. But it was very nice, very cute. And it was nice seeing you do a happy ending.
| Reviewed By: paniwi (nli) On: March 09, 2009 08:00 CDT
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*chuckle* Predictably Ryou was bothered by Duke's punishment, he's a sweetie. Good chapter though, things are still very much in motion. And Ryou's right, Bakura really is a romantic. A moping one at that.
| Reviewed By: paniwi (nli) On: February 22, 2009 14:01 CST
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Ah, Bakura is mopey, silly man. I think he just doesn't know any other way to be right now. But oh well, he'll get over it. And that was one mean punishment from Seto, avenging angel indeed! I am almost feeling sorry for Duke now.
| Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2008 23:52 CDT
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Nice update. Continue to do so? Later, ja ne.
| Reviewed By: Paniwi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2008 14:13 CDT
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Nice update sweetie, our tanned couple is going mushy, so cute!. Of course I am missing my dose of tendershipping, but this made up for it. I liked their interaction, as well as Marik and Ryou's. Gotta love his description of Bakura *smirk*. Well I already told you about the paragraph where the pov went screwy, and I would have liked a little more insight in Malik's thoughts/emotions while Ryou was telling his story, but other than that it was great.
| Reviewed By: paniwi (NLI) On: July 20, 2008 10:17 CDT
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Hey sweetie, yeey for an update, and a great one it was. Nice plot-twist about Kisara. I knew she would have to play some bigger role other than to evoke a tear or two out of our beloved avenger, but this I did not see coming. Though of course indeed it leave some interesting questions for which I'm sure you'll have interesting answers. Loved the feather detail, really had to be there no? And Gabriel getting cheeky about summoning, hehe. Either way, nice update and hoping for more soon. I have to know what's going to happen to Duke after all.
| Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2008 03:26 CDT
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Heh, and thus we look forward to the next update. Heh. Continue to update, as always, the story rocks hard. Update again soon, ja ne.
| Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2008 15:49 CDT
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You gonna conclude this hardest part of the tale, this most painful part? It' s agreat story, but this latest section is painful to read, though great. Continue to update, ja ne.
| Reviewed By: paniwi (NLI) On: July 03, 2008 12:36 CDT
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And a review for you my precious. Well, well so it comes to it. One would wonder how much more must happen in your story right about now. I have to say on one end I had expected this outcome somewhat, on the other I had somehow expected it drawn out a bit longer. But that's you my sweet, you always surprise. Interesting chapter, definitely had me wiping away a tear here and there. I'm curious to the what-now my sweet. I'm sure there's more fun to be had, very sure in fact.
| Reviewed By: paniwi (nli) On: June 07, 2008 14:19 CDT
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Well, well. That was indeed a very long update for your sake. The flow as per usual was good, though I needed to go back a few times, but that's because I haven't read in this for a while. Liked the way you switched scenes during the story-telling, that was well done. Spat between Kaiba and Bakura spat was always going to be fun. Heh, Ryou got pissy again, rather than just come up and ask. He can be so funny, a little drama king indeed. Though he essentially still doesn't know anything. The Duke part was of course expected considering the last chapter he was in. Didn't expect the whole carcrash thing though. You left it still open what just happened there. But I do hope nobody's going in a coma, as I told you why already. Either way, good chapter, we shall see where this goes now.
| Reviewed By: darkokita [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2008 01:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
There are a few differences in writing style that I think stem from your being from the UK(?) such as colloquialisms that are unfamiliar and therefore confusing to me (and no, I don't mean the spelling. My mom's from Newcastle). These detract from the flow of the story. There are also a few spelling errors (mostly typos) and mistakes with verb tenses that change within a single sentence. The verbs 'sat' and 'stand' seem to be problems for you as well. No matter what the tense; past, present, or future, I have yet to see you use the verb forms 'sit' or 'sitting'. I've seen 'stood' a couple of times but never 'standing'. Because of this, I often find myself having to re-read a sentence more than twice to figure out which direction you're trying to go. The originality and plotline are amazing. I've been glued to this since I found it and am looking forward to seeing you tie up all the loose ends. Please don't let this be one of the thousands that go unfinished. I would be truly heart broken (not to mention missing out on all the good yaoi, heehee). Thanks.
| Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2008 15:40 CDT
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I was going to read this chapter on deviantArt, but since I'm not quite 18 yet, the mature filter wouldn't go away. >.> I'm only 2 months away from my birthday; dA should be more lenient... Anyway, that was a really great chapter. It was unexpected that Bakura asked Ryou to take him, but that definitely made the sex more touching. Plus, it's always good to deviate from the usual "Bakura takes Ryou" scenario... I can't wait until you finish the next chapter!
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