| "A Fool's Redemption" Reviews/Comments [ 144 ] |
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Reviewed By: Maloy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2007 05:46 EDT
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This is great! I loved the latest chapter. The interaction is very good, and I already said that the pacing is great - you don't rush into things everything just develops naturally. You're very good! I'm enjoying this very much. Please don't hold up with the 8th chap for too long ^___^
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Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2007 10:09 EDT
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This is a very interesting story concept, and you are handling it well. Please don't give it up!
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Reviewed By: fireflyskies [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2007 04:01 EDT
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I love this story so far. You've got a really great writing style and while I've read stories with plots similar to this that I haven't liked, this one has definately kept me interested. I can't wait for the next chapter and for Inuyasha and Kagome's next meeting.
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Reviewed By: shikiori [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2007 16:29 EDT
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Continue on! This is a wonderful story! When does Miroku come in? Who's the Gold prince? Do Shippo or Kaede appear at any point? I wuv it! I want to print this story out and keep it with me forever and ever! I wish I lived there, it's so cool! Inu is an idiot, isn't he? Though I do sometimes follow the "She still feels guilty, so I have every reason to still hate her." That's a great philosophy, by the way. Congratulations on coming up with it. Great plot for the entire story so far, and I don't believe I've ever read a fanfiction this descriptive. I love the genetically altered idea, seeing as all the modernized stories get rid of Inu's wittle puppy ears. :) Continue writing!
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Reviewed By: Maloy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2007 11:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I really like the pace of the story, and the plot, while not very original, is very well developed. You're doing a wonderful job! I can't wait for your updates)
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Title: luv it
Reviewed By: bKatty On: June 28, 2007 11:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very interesting, good plot && very well written. keep going, im lovin' it!
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Reviewed By: sogi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2007 05:40 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Whoo this is certainly one of the most interesting Inufics I've come across in a long, long time. Usually i find myself uninterested in sci-fi, but I couldn't stop reading until I hit chapter 5. The descriptions were so powerful in the last chapter that my inner raver was disappointed a place like that didn't exist in real life! I'm so excited to see where this story goes - Keep up the awesome work!!
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Reviewed By: DarkMoonStar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2007 12:35 EDT
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Loving what you've got so far, please write more soon! Can't wait to see what happens next. =)
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Reviewed By: Xaenthe [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2007 00:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I haven't left a review on a story I've read in at least a year, but with your story, I was absolutely compelled to. Your ideas are original and exciting. The set-up to the plot action may have been slow, but it was necessary to keep your readers from getting confused. You teased it along with just the right amount of anticipation for later events in the story, so it was never dull. I love this story. It's absolutely amazing. I can't wait for the email that lets me know you've updated.
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