| "A Fool's Redemption" Reviews/Comments [ 144 ] |
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Reviewed By: HentaiSouljaShojo On: December 19, 2008 16:43 EST
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O.K. Can you please update your story ? Ijust found it and wanted to know what happens next thank You
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Reviewed By: Broken Dreams [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2008 01:29 EST
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Absolutely astounding fic. The plotline is easy to follow and very well thought out. I love the characterization of Naraku so far. I always thought he would be a suave kinda guy if he weren't so evil. I'm very anxious to see InuYasha's reaction to this "date" business as well. I really hope you continue this fic, I'm so into it! Haha. Well, thanks for this piece!
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Reviewed By: elementalobsession09 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2008 00:31 EST
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You still hanging in there? Hope to hear from you soon!
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Reviewed By: KawaiiTierra [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2008 13:15 EDT
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Oh my gosh! Chapter 12 kept me at the edge of my seat as soon as it ended. It's a Cliffie. I wonder what it is. o_e; I keep re-reading it over, and over again to get some clue. But I haave no idea! I'm dying for an update D:
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Reviewed By: KawaiiTierra [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2008 12:48 EDT
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Hopefully, you'll get a chance to write up your next chapter (And if we're lucky a couple of chapters). It'd be great if your next chapter can be longer, because it's just too darn enjoyable and the waiting is a killer. Takecare D: And thank for you for the amazing fic, it seems so rule -- Everything plays out so perfectly in my head.
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Reviewed By: KawaiiTierra [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2008 12:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glad you were nominated
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Reviewed By: breizhbit On: September 04, 2008 22:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story--prompting me to leave my first review on MM!! I have to say that since the start of this story I've been completely intrigued by the tone and the care you've taken in setting a convincing and compelling atmosphere. The city and its culture seems so well thought out that it lends this vivid and slightly surreal aspect to all of the action taking place with Inuyasha and Kagome, as well as whatever plot is shaping up with Sango and Naraku (where's Miroku? White Prince??). As far as the technical aspects of your writing, I haven't noticed anything that put me off about it, and I can tell you it's very hard for me to read stories that have a lot of spelling and grammar issues (even if they're my own!) I also must say that with regard to the sex scene in chapter 12 I was pleasantly surprised that I managed to stick it out and get through it. I am generally obsessive about canon pairings and sometimes find it hard to handle scenes with other parties that seem gratuitous. This one did not, and though I was disgusted with Kagura & co. (and Inuyasha's behavior!) it was worthwhile to see how it affected Kagome and Inuyasha's situation. Though I have to say I am looking forward to him having to deal with turnabout, as Naraku seems pretty insistent on this upcoming date. What will Inuyasha think about that one? Hopefully it will inspire further introspection and not retaliation? Can't wait to find out! Eeep! Well, sorry for the super-rambling review but your story deserved attention! I hope that you will be able to update soon, since I really look forward to seeing where this one is going to end up! Thanks for writing!
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Reviewed By: Inu_Does_Me [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2008 03:51 EDT
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I hate to question the writer but...this is a InuYasha and Kagome fiction right??? I find your story quite captivating and Im thrilled with joy with every sentence. To me it kinda feels like some parts of your storyline have been used before but its original in the scence that Kagome saved InuYasha and that he is now a prince of sort and is actually worshipped (with girls and sex) instead of being an outcast. Its confusing but I admit its an interesting turn of an idea and because of that it has captured all of my attention. Hopefully you will reassure me that it IS InuYasha and Kagome in the end and I can let go of my possessive nature I have for those two together.....or at least a bit of it. Afterall InuYasha its only fair that Kagome gets some romantic lust after her when he has a blow-job am I right? lol. Still.....InuYasha and Kagome forever! p.s. I also appreciate Naraku going after Kagome instead of Koga all the time. Its a great refresher. And Naraku is handsome.....in his own evil way......
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Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2008 04:25 EDT
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I hadn't found anything really worth reading for a while, and then this jewel of a story popped up, and I was very happy with it! This story is original and entertaining, but it's also thoughtful and well written. I'm really looking forward to seeing how it progresses.
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Reviewed By: Ro0tin4kagome [NSI] On: July 14, 2008 16:37 EDT
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Well can I guess correctly that Inuyasha had just heard the interraction between Naraku and Kagome. And I am so happpy to see that he is being his jealous self already..even if he doesn't notice. haha I love this story. Its has such a unique story line. And the setting...man it could be an awesome movie. lol OH and she totally dropped sango out!! OH now i really cant wait til thenext chapter. Great job. =D
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Reviewed By: BoxingKing [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2008 04:50 EDT
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Excellent story! I love AUs, and yours is such an interesting world! I kept waiting for Naraku to do something, and with what we know of him, it has to be something bad... ARGH! The suspense! I'm also waiting for Miroku. Sango has to be with him, it seems like. At first, I thought you had him change into Naraku once he became the Prince, but then I began hoping he was the Prince that left. That's my hope, anyways. Can't wait for stuff to come to a climax! For that matter, get some more smut in there! Everything is very well written, and flows wonderfully. Keep up the good work, I am awaiting eagerly an update!! ~BoxingKing
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Reviewed By: Teddy Bear [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2008 20:54 EDT
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Incredible, simply incredible. I can honestly say that this story is absolutely amazing. The plot in and of itself is exceptionally divine. The way you so intelligently and eloquently explained away Inuyasha's unique outer-characteristics using very advanced modern technological concepts, not to mention how you created a whole different world, was fabulous. It was so vividly portrayed that, had I not known any better, I would have actually believed that such a wonderland existed. You beautifully made the transition between Inuyasha and Kagome from enemies, to "frenimies" and finally partially accepting friends (hopefully with benefits). It made the fic seem all the more real. You depicted the characters well and I applaud your commendable efforts. Inuyasha is the surly, stubborn, asshole we all know and love, and Kagome the spitfire vixen. I cannot put into words how much I enjoyed this piece of literature. I spent the whole day reading it praying for it not to end. For the record I for one LOVE LONG CHAPTERS, so feel free to go wild whenever you fancy. Your story has wormed its way into the spot of my top three most favourite fics I have ever read in all my time of being an avid persuer of brilliant stories. I hope you update soon and that the upcoming chapters will be just as good as the rest. Continue to stroke the fires of your passion for writing and I hope God guides and blesses your talented hand. PS: Sorry for the long review. Sometimes I get carried away when I really like something. If you like you can peruse my own fic (first ever) called FATED, I'd really like to know what you think about it.
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2008 14:21 EDT
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Absolutely amazing as usual. I am so incredibly infatuated with this story and I love the way you write. Thanks for updating!
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2008 14:10 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh Please update soon!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: bad Kagome
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2008 03:17 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
my words have left me, but I still wanted to leave a virtual smiley face. I not disappointed with anything. I think the story will be that much richer if it takes time to explore the emotions and reason behind the plot.
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