| "A Fool's Redemption" Reviews/Comments [ 144 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lady McKaig On: July 19, 2007 22:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent, very well written and the pace is perfect. The way you set the scenes and all the details allow you to see everything in your mind's eye without getting tedious. I'm enjoying it immensely and it has become one of my favorite fics along with "Phoenix Blade: Time Lapse". Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: fireflyskies [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2007 23:31 EDT
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Wonderful chapter. I loved the scence where Kagome just bursts into the room and everybody stops what they're doining. I can just imagine the embarrassment, lol. Keep up the great work. I cna't wait for the next chapter, and to find out just what Inuyasha's going to make Kagome do.
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Reviewed By: stargazer824 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2007 21:37 EDT
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What a great story! I can't wait to see what happens next!!!
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Reviewed By: sweetkijo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2007 18:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is really good. My heart just plummets when I read he is such a man whore though. I just know he is going to torture her with that and it makes me so...uggg. But I think the way he is written says much to what he has been through. He feels accepted and loved through lust. Its something to fight the lonelyness I suppose he feels. This is truly going to get very interesting and I will stick with you til the end. Great job!!
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Title: Great Chapter
Reviewed By: QTpie (nsi) On: July 18, 2007 16:55 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful chapter to read as usual. You really have me intrigued on what Inuyasha will have Kagome do as his nanny of all things, haha! I love the characterizations of the characters and am anticipating your next chapter already. What is a true surprise is that you don't have more reviews for your delightful story. That will definitely change once readers catch wind of this great read. Until the next chapter, keep the creative wheels turning and keyboard typing
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Reviewed By: Xaenthe [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2007 15:17 EDT
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Lol. Just...lol. When InuYasha told Kagome to suck him off, I choked on the soda I was in the process of swallowing, and burst into gales of laughter. I think he's an asshole, but not entirely without justification. I hope Kagome brings him to his knees, the jerk. :) Anyways, there's this story called "Synthetic Twilight" that gets updated all the time, and for a while, I would open it eagerly, thinking it was your story because of the title--it reminds me of your description of the underground club scene--it drives me crazy! But now I think I've gotten it figured it out. :) I loved the chapter--especially Kagome's mischievious uncle and his bodyguard, the sly things. And I can't believe Kagome didn't flee when she saw InuYasha in the heap of bodies. I'm kind of curious about the role of jealousy in this society you've set up. Obviously, the morality of this city is different from the widely-accepted standard. However, do people tend to pair off into couples after they've had their fill of the scene, and if yes, is monogamy the preferred behavior? Would a couple go through agonies if one (or both!) of the partners caught the other cheating? I'm curious as to how that dynamic would work. Well, please keep up the great work! I can't wait to see your next chapter. P.S. I'm not understanding why you get so few reviews. Some of my favorite fanfics, which tend towards the well-written, get the fewest reviews! Like "The Phoenix Blade: Time Lapse." I've been following that since the third chapter, and the author didn't get a substantial amount of reviews until much later. :( I don't understand how all the shittiest high school fanfics get all the reviews, and ones that show imagination, originality, and care with plot get so few. Not fair! Okay, so this is probably the longest review I've ever written, so I'm going to end it...now.
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Reviewed By: Maloy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2007 05:46 EDT
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This is great! I loved the latest chapter. The interaction is very good, and I already said that the pacing is great - you don't rush into things everything just develops naturally. You're very good! I'm enjoying this very much. Please don't hold up with the 8th chap for too long ^___^
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Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2007 10:09 EDT
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This is a very interesting story concept, and you are handling it well. Please don't give it up!
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Reviewed By: fireflyskies [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2007 04:01 EDT
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I love this story so far. You've got a really great writing style and while I've read stories with plots similar to this that I haven't liked, this one has definately kept me interested. I can't wait for the next chapter and for Inuyasha and Kagome's next meeting.
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Reviewed By: shikiori [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2007 16:29 EDT
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Continue on! This is a wonderful story! When does Miroku come in? Who's the Gold prince? Do Shippo or Kaede appear at any point? I wuv it! I want to print this story out and keep it with me forever and ever! I wish I lived there, it's so cool! Inu is an idiot, isn't he? Though I do sometimes follow the "She still feels guilty, so I have every reason to still hate her." That's a great philosophy, by the way. Congratulations on coming up with it. Great plot for the entire story so far, and I don't believe I've ever read a fanfiction this descriptive. I love the genetically altered idea, seeing as all the modernized stories get rid of Inu's wittle puppy ears. :) Continue writing!
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Reviewed By: Maloy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2007 11:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I really like the pace of the story, and the plot, while not very original, is very well developed. You're doing a wonderful job! I can't wait for your updates)
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Title: luv it
Reviewed By: bKatty On: June 28, 2007 11:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very interesting, good plot && very well written. keep going, im lovin' it!
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Reviewed By: sogi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2007 05:40 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Whoo this is certainly one of the most interesting Inufics I've come across in a long, long time. Usually i find myself uninterested in sci-fi, but I couldn't stop reading until I hit chapter 5. The descriptions were so powerful in the last chapter that my inner raver was disappointed a place like that didn't exist in real life! I'm so excited to see where this story goes - Keep up the awesome work!!
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Reviewed By: DarkMoonStar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2007 12:35 EDT
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Loving what you've got so far, please write more soon! Can't wait to see what happens next. =)
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Reviewed By: Xaenthe [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2007 00:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I haven't left a review on a story I've read in at least a year, but with your story, I was absolutely compelled to. Your ideas are original and exciting. The set-up to the plot action may have been slow, but it was necessary to keep your readers from getting confused. You teased it along with just the right amount of anticipation for later events in the story, so it was never dull. I love this story. It's absolutely amazing. I can't wait for the email that lets me know you've updated.
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