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| "A Fool's Redemption" Reviews/Comments [ 144 ] | | Pages (10): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 › » ] | Reviewed By: moussajinx [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2007 11:13 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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Well hells! How I missed the update till now I'm just going to blame on school going back and a long weekend. Glad I checked in though. You've shown some of the background that Inuyasha is feeling, and I think it's totally reasonable for him to want to 'punish' Kagome. I'm still a little wondering why he has no problem with others touching him (after what he's been through, an aversion to being close to people would be more than understandable) but I'm sure you'll explain more of his early life in Alduray (maybe?) and the trust issue was dealt with. Nice character development and you've kept Kag's basic need to make things better apparent in her interaction. Again, wonderful job and I'll be paying closer attention this time. ;) Cheers!
| Reviewed By: klachcik On: August 30, 2007 14:44 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I love the story, i get so excited whenever i see an update , sorta comical actually, anways i think its really good, and just really awesome, i hope you update soon
| Reviewed By: angelbabe17(logged out) On: August 29, 2007 23:55 EDT
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weird thing is i was just thinking about this story today and wondering when it would be updated and it was. u must be psychic lol. another great chapter!
| Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2007 19:20 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. It was HARD work, but Kagome's patience finally seems to be paying off. Inuyasha was awful to her, but her knowledge of the hell he'd been thorugh made it tolerable. She knew he had a soft center deep down underneath that massive anger. There has got to be something really special about this guy that Kagome would put up with all this. She risked everything to help him; she has hits out on her for it, for crying out loud, LOL. So, I can't wait to find out what she already seems to know....that Inuyasha is worth whatever it would take to get him. I look forward to reading more soon.
| Title: Wow...
Reviewed By: moussajinx [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2007 13:53 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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You just keep making this more and more enjoyable. The detail to setting, the in-depth characterization of even 'minor' characters and the wonderful interaction you write so convincingly is truly a joy to read. Yes, I am guilty of being 'antsy' and I promise I won't leave 'Update Lulz' comments anymore. (I'm also going to NOT make comments after imbibing in things I shouldn't before I review. Sorry 'bout that. :0 ) Again, thanks for your amazing efforts and I hope you know how enjoyable this tale is. :)
| Title: Mind-blowing
Reviewed By: Briana_D [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2007 06:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I love the way that your descriptions are so detailed that one can almost visualise what you are describing. Kudos for an extremely well thought out and original story, there are very few that fall into the sci-fi genre and are so well written. Though personally I find Kagome going to such great lengths to obtain forgiveness a little strange, but i guess its required to move the story forward and in a way may be reflective of her innate goodness. Btw, where is Miroku? When does he make his entrance? I really thought he was the Gold Prince. LOL. Awaiting for another amazing chapter from you.
| Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2007 01:01 EDT
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wow. i really love this story. you have such a way with words and this is such a creative idea. i can't wait until the next chapter.
| Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2007 00:24 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. I was glad to see that Emory wasn't as miserable in his job as he first appeared to be; that should make things somewhat easier for Kagome. And the fact that Inuyasha apparently wanted Kagome in close proximity to him and went through so much trouble to make sure she was comfortable speaks volumes. He obviously doesn't hate Kagome nearly as much as he says. That isn't to say that Kagome will have an easy time with him; Yasha has a bit of a sadistic streak, lol. But the situation with Kagome and Inuyasha also isn't nearly as hopeless as it first appeared to be. I definitely look forward to seeing more of this play out.
| Reviewed By: sublimetrickster [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2007 23:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm gonna be completely honest with you, I haven't been this intrigued by an epic fic in a long time. Most of the ones I start off interested in just don't deliver in the long run, but this one is clearly well thought out and carefully executed. You know what your writing, who and where its happening, and I think you already know how it ends. You also know where you're going with it and as far as I've seen so far, everything you write is there for a reason that will likely be addressed in the future. For example, the oaths. When you first brought them up, I thought they were just there as window dressing, but you surprised me (no easy matter, I assure you) when you brought it back as a way to stick Kagome and Inuyasha together. Very slick. Your zeal for improvement and joy in just writing is refreshing. You remind me of what it was like to post my first fics :). Okay, so all the praise is done, so I'll just point out what I did notice. As you are probably aware there are a few smatterings of spelling errors throughout the chapters. Those are pesky to hunt down and really aren't all that distracting though. And that's about all. I look forward to reading more. Keep up the hard work!
| Reviewed By: JMaxwell [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2007 02:18 EDT
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Just wanted to say that I'm really enjoying your story.
| Reviewed By: moussajinx [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2007 02:10 EDT
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*Poke* *poke poke...stabby* ...psstt!...write a bit more, please! pretty please?
| Reviewed By: moussajinx [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2007 11:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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I've been reading this for a couple of weeks on a horrific p.o.s computer that has had the 'typing option disrupted' (ie: I broke something) and can finally leave a review for you. If I'll wait five minutes per page to have the thing load-up, you have not only made an intriguing plot-line, you've done it with both grammatical and aesthetic prowess. It's not only exciting to read, you fully understand the characters in such detail that it changes an AU story that could have any characters in it, to a Kagome/Inuyasha AU that is original, entertaining and still holds the character's 'personality'. Hat's off to you and I eagerly await the next chapter. Kudoes and cheers to you and your creativity! Thank you again!
| Title: Sci-Fi Inuyasha Masterpiece
Reviewed By: Seriah Black [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2007 02:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read this story on AFF. I cannot begin to tell you how much I appreciate your painstaking attention to detail. Your writing is so good, there's no way I could give you any useful advice, except to keep up the good work, and update soon!
| Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2007 00:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EXCELLENT story. Your plot is original, and your characterization is wonderful. I especially love your depiction of Inuyasha, although Kagome isn't far behind. And now that she's going to be his personal assistant, things between them should definitely get more intersting. Yash seems like such a ungrateful little cretin, but it's just because he's been hurt so much, even by Kagome while she was undercover. So, it is understandable why he's so bitter. I just don't think that it's going to last very long once he's in close proximity with her. But, all indications are that he's going to kick, scream and curse all the way down as he falls for her, lol. I defintely look forward to that. I can't wait to read more.
| Title: awesome chapter ^-^
Reviewed By: inuroxmysox! On: July 19, 2007 22:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I was reading your story and it was so good that I absolutely HAD to leave a review. (I'm kinda lazy so I usually don't leave reviews unless stories are really good.) Your plot line is amazing, and the characters are so beautifully portrayed, especially Inuyasha and Kagome. Somehow, through everything that Inuyasha has endured, I empathize with him. I wish I had strong hands that could break things like that! ^-^ hehe. But anyway, please continue writing, good luck, and I look forward to your next chapter!
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