| "A Fool's Redemption" Reviews/Comments [ 144 ] |
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2007 15:13 EST
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this story is so creative i absolutely love it. i was so excited to see a new chapter up so thank you!
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Title: Interesting...
Reviewed By: Licentia poetica [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2007 05:54 EST
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I was up late and decided to see what was new; glad I came across this! Keep up the good work. iPoe
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Reviewed By: togu On: November 01, 2007 18:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm lovin it!! :D please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2007 03:03 EDT
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This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association! The Feudal Association is a group that presents awards to fanfiction and fanart in the InuYasha Fandom several times a year. Our official website can be found here - http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/ The current nominations pages are here: http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/oct2007art.html http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/oct2007.html Check these out to find out what you were nominated for! And our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs can be found here - http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Voting is open October 17, 2007 - November 1, 2007. Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! Winners will be notified by me after November 1st. ~ The Daimyo Owner of the Feudal Association Note: If you get this notification more than once, it means you have been nominated for more than 1 award.
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Reviewed By: chanda [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2007 12:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I look forward to your next update. I love this story, the detail, the angst and the originality has been well thought out! Hope you get more reviewers, cause god know's you deserve them! Chanda
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Reviewed By: FayeMegan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2007 02:35 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. What an utterly creative story! This is fantastic. I sincerely hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: Ro0tin4Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2007 15:17 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey there! Well so far I love this story. WEll except for so parts but yet those parts are enjoyable. Like how Miroku is not init.. that stinks yet it seems that Naraku has caught Sango's heart and is good.. another VERY good thing is that Shippou is not in here. I cant stand Shippou I dotnlikt o read fics withhim in it. unless he's plder or barely in it. So thats an awesome point. But the situations that Inuyasha is in with the girls.. I have a feeling he astill is a virgin he just uses the girls for pleasure which is A OK! Well you must be getting bored of my review. Yet when this story is completed be prepared for a big review! =D Awesome once again. So update soon! k?
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Reviewed By: the painted lady On: October 11, 2007 14:29 EDT
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This is an awesome story! I love it and am already begginging to twitch! Can't wait for the nest installment!
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Reviewed By: Javeska On: October 07, 2007 22:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must confess the only reason why I am reading this fic is because of the IYFG. i'm a passionate reader and writer of Inuyasha but time no longer allows me to read as I would like. This is a very enjoyable fic. It's different and original when compared to the other experiment fics that are often seen. One thing I want to warn against. There were times especially in the first few chapters that I felt like I was being told the story instead of being shown it. (Sorry, writing minor.) I hope that you can find some way to work on that. That is the only real complaint I have...well, there is one more? Is it possible to use other words for descriptions of Sango. I hope to see more angst and suspense in the up coming chapter. I have hunches about Naraku, but with the way he has been characterized it makes them difficult to guess. I hope to see an update from you soon. ^.~ Good luck!
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Reviewed By: moussajinx [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2007 11:13 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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Well hells! How I missed the update till now I'm just going to blame on school going back and a long weekend. Glad I checked in though. You've shown some of the background that Inuyasha is feeling, and I think it's totally reasonable for him to want to 'punish' Kagome. I'm still a little wondering why he has no problem with others touching him (after what he's been through, an aversion to being close to people would be more than understandable) but I'm sure you'll explain more of his early life in Alduray (maybe?) and the trust issue was dealt with. Nice character development and you've kept Kag's basic need to make things better apparent in her interaction. Again, wonderful job and I'll be paying closer attention this time. ;) Cheers!
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Reviewed By: klachcik On: August 30, 2007 14:44 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I love the story, i get so excited whenever i see an update , sorta comical actually, anways i think its really good, and just really awesome, i hope you update soon
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(logged out) On: August 29, 2007 23:55 EDT
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weird thing is i was just thinking about this story today and wondering when it would be updated and it was. u must be psychic lol. another great chapter!
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2007 19:20 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. It was HARD work, but Kagome's patience finally seems to be paying off. Inuyasha was awful to her, but her knowledge of the hell he'd been thorugh made it tolerable. She knew he had a soft center deep down underneath that massive anger. There has got to be something really special about this guy that Kagome would put up with all this. She risked everything to help him; she has hits out on her for it, for crying out loud, LOL. So, I can't wait to find out what she already seems to know....that Inuyasha is worth whatever it would take to get him. I look forward to reading more soon.
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Title: Wow...
Reviewed By: moussajinx [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2007 13:53 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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You just keep making this more and more enjoyable. The detail to setting, the in-depth characterization of even 'minor' characters and the wonderful interaction you write so convincingly is truly a joy to read. Yes, I am guilty of being 'antsy' and I promise I won't leave 'Update Lulz' comments anymore. (I'm also going to NOT make comments after imbibing in things I shouldn't before I review. Sorry 'bout that. :0 ) Again, thanks for your amazing efforts and I hope you know how enjoyable this tale is. :)
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Title: Mind-blowing
Reviewed By: Briana_D [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2007 06:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I love the way that your descriptions are so detailed that one can almost visualise what you are describing. Kudos for an extremely well thought out and original story, there are very few that fall into the sci-fi genre and are so well written. Though personally I find Kagome going to such great lengths to obtain forgiveness a little strange, but i guess its required to move the story forward and in a way may be reflective of her innate goodness. Btw, where is Miroku? When does he make his entrance? I really thought he was the Gold Prince. LOL. Awaiting for another amazing chapter from you.
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