| "A Fool's Redemption" Reviews/Comments [ 144 ] |
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Title: I looooooove it!
Reviewed By: larky_bird [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2008 00:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story! Please write more! You've got me hooked!!!
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Reviewed By: fudge On: July 13, 2008 00:01 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
how exciting. I guess they are starting at a new level into their blooming relationship, can't wait for you to update! hopefully soon!
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Reviewed By: klachcik1214 On: July 12, 2008 22:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story so much it's definitely one of my favorites, probably my most favorite
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Reviewed By: BrokenAngel1219 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2008 19:05 EDT
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love it so far. just started it 2 day. 1st chapter captivated my attention from the start. very interestin story plot. can't wait 4 more updates, but take ur time if u need 2. no need 2 rush through chapters if they end up crappy b cuz u were pressured 2 post em fast. then again, with ur writin, it's not really possible 4 it 2 b crappy in the 1st place, so u ain't got nothin 2 wrry about.
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Reviewed By: psyco_chick32 (not signed in) On: July 12, 2008 18:35 EDT
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This is excellent! I usually don't like AU fic but have found a few to be to my liking... this one is definitely at the top of my list! I angst over where Miroku could be, tho... :) Keep up the great work!!
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Reviewed By: musicmuse18 On: July 12, 2008 17:11 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoy reading your story. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2008 17:08 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. And although it wasn't the naughtiness some of us were hoping for, I can see that it was important to the plot. Inuyasha needed to see himself for what he had become. He was, for lack of a better word, a whore. He was using others while allowing himself to be used. And that was such an ugly way and sad way to live. And when Kagome saw him doing that he finally realized how badly he was misusing the gift she had given him....his life. You couldn't have done that any better. Inuyasha was finally forced to see what he had become and realized that he needed to change. Unfortunately for him, it looks like he is going to have some competition from Naraku where Kagome is concerned. I loved this chapter, and I look forward to reading more as soon as you can post.
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Reviewed By: new2meridies On: July 12, 2008 17:04 EDT
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In this last chpater you have Kagura nipping on Inuyasha's earlobe. He has doggie ears. He doesn't have an earlobe... Otherwise this story is pretty good. Is Kagura working for Naraku in this to do something to Inuyasha?
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Reviewed By: stargazer824 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2008 11:48 EDT
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Another great chapter! Can't wait to see what happens next!!
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Reviewed By: Midoriko-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2008 08:24 EDT
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*offers support* I used to take those meds to. They get you wondering when you're going to start drooling like someone's done a lobotomy on you while you slept. *hug* But you're great for hanging in there! I'm no doctor, but I've managed to concoct a couple of very good tea and herbal blends for nerves and cramps (owww, I used to get so many of those...), and if you want, I have no problem with sending you a bag. This was a great chapter - Inuyasha running hot and cold so often makes things very interesting. And I'm stuck wondering whether Kagome has the wrong impression as to where that woman is, or whether Inuyasha REALLY decided to be a complete blockhead to run away from his thoughts. Would take the cake, it would. -- I love your narrative style; its so clean and engaging. Keep it up! I'll definitely wait as long as you need. Be safe and take care of yourself! If you want any of my witch's brew (:p) just drop me a line off mm.org and I'll try to help as much as I can ^v^.
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Title: Hey!
Reviewed By: moussajinx [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2008 20:48 EDT
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Nice to see you around again and glad to hear you're doing better (also traveled that bizarre and confusing road of meds. not hella fun) Wonderful new chapter and a really great way of explaining Inu and Kagome's background. Nice! Looking forward to any new chapters and hoping you've found a nice middle lane in the highway of sanity! ;) Cheers!
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Reviewed By: elementalobsession09 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2008 20:31 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad to hear that you're doing better. I was worried for I while that you had given up. Thank you for updating and working so hard, even though it's not easy for you right now. I hope things get better for you! Keep up the brilliant work!!!
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Reviewed By: Xaenthe [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2008 08:57 EDT
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Gah, what a cliffhanger! As always, I'm a devoted slave to your story, and can't wait to see the next chapter. =D
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2008 13:18 EDT
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wonderfully interesting and well written as usual. i always do a happy dance when i see that this has been updated haha.
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Reviewed By: Dawnrider31 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2008 10:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really impressed with this fanfic so far. I just stumbled onto it in the last week or so. Awesome job keeping the technology seem relatively realistic. The only thing I would say is that I would like more back story on the war itself. What tore the world apart? Well done!
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