| "A Fool's Redemption" Reviews/Comments [ 144 ] |
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Reviewed By: ilona [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2010 19:30 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOOOOooooooooooo!! WHY????? Why do they have to go through this?? you are an evil author!! just let them be together without stupidity from both parts and outside interference :S although i was glad you updated i sort of regretted it after reading the chapter because of what you did lol. and now i really cant wait until you make it all right again :D
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2010 04:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow......poor Inuyasha but he really should have talked to her alone first. I feel worse for Kagome though. I can't wait for the next chapter! This story is just so GOOD!!!
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Reviewed By: stargazer824 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2010 18:49 EDT
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Thanks for updating! This story really is great... you do such a wonderful job of building the plot. I can't wait to find out what happens next!
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2010 01:37 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay, good update! Although I'm not 'yay-ing' the angst itself, I don't like angst! BUT...I agree that at times it's definitely necessary, and I have found that I actually have a pretty high tolerance for angst just so long as the story eventually works itself back around to happy again. Provided that Inuyasha eventually finds out the truth of what really there'll be hell to pay, but he'll no longer be angry with Kagome! Update again as soon as you can!
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Reviewed By: secret35 On: September 24, 2010 01:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
FUCK FUCK FUCK!!! im in tears right now! BUT IM SO EXCITED THAT YOU UPDATED!!!! you have no idea how long my anticapation was for this story! What are the fav couple gonna do? GOD! i just wanted someone to wake up and say something!!! @0@ but sadly it actually happened and look where they are now... and it had to be angst because Im in tears right now, yet had to be done. i too agree that angst adds spice to the story :P but please please please please please update ASAP because i seriously wanna smack these two haha lol if only. Keep up the good work your story is coming out to be incrediably amazing!
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Reviewed By: Scriptix (nsi) On: August 10, 2010 09:47 EDT
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Ugh, I love your Naraku for being such a damned creep. I just know there's something seriously disturbed under the surface. I'm still a hearty proponent of chapters that take almost an hour to read, but if it gets you updating again I'm all for any bit you'll throw our way honestly. I'm glad to see you back - I hated to see such a gem in the coal mine of fanfiction go to waste.
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Title: *dancing*
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2010 00:19 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man I've been waiting and waiting for more from this story. I'm so glad Inuyasha is thinking rationally about what is going on, and I also kind of hope that he will find out what Naraku did before Kagome opens her mouth and tells him the "truth"...But I'm not writing and I know I'll enjoy whatever emotional rollercoaster you have planed for the next update ;)
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Reviewed By: emily aka elmo On: July 19, 2010 14:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi, i never reviewed a fic before so i realy dont know what to say.. for beginners i realy like your story. when i first read your story i was like WOW this is so good! then i got to the last chapter which was 14 and when i noticed that you havent updated in a while i was like "noooo this fic is so good1" well im just happy that you started to write it again because it realy..realy..realy is a good fic. oh and oh my gosh i just want to beat naraku up for lying to kagome trying to mess her relationship up with inuyasha!! I cant wait to read the next chapter!!
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Reviewed By: secret35 On: July 11, 2010 19:26 EDT
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AAHHH the anxiety XO!! ive waited for the story for so long! im so glad that your keeping up with it XD!!! its so SAD in this chapter, Fucking Naraku god i hate him DX, well anyway keep up the good work i really cant wait for the next one LOL.
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2010 00:35 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! You're still alive, and so is this story! Wonderful update, though I agree with what's been said that you most certainly don't have to shorten your chapters on our account. I would much rather read longer chapters. I understand the mathematical theory of shorter chapters equaling less wait-time between updates, but so far that theory has yet to be proven! Still, glad to know you haven't abandoned this fic. Now hopefully this new angsty arc won't take that long to resolve before they can get back to getting closer again.
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Reviewed By: sublimetrickster [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2010 17:15 EDT
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Nooo, not more hardships for their relationship! Just tell him, Kagome, he'll understand... eventually.
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Title: Yeah!!
Reviewed By: J Luc Pitard [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2010 15:14 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Welcome back. Good chapter. I do wish Inuyasha's nose would've figured out what was wrong, but that may have given us a conclusion too fast. Better for them to keep plugging away at their resolution. Naraku's nice and creepy as ever. Just what was he thinking!!! Drugging her, then kissing and... nothing else? Wuh huh? I'm guessing it's to sow dissent, but maybe a bit subtle for him. If this was canon, I'd think she'd have miko powered him and he'd used her blacked out time to recover but that wouldn't work in this series, so I'm guessing he was some percentage of gentleman there.
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Reviewed By: inugirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2010 11:32 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh I've forgotten how much I love this fic. Take all the time you need updating, but please never abandon this one! I cant wait to see what happens! Stupid Naraku needs to keep his lips off Kagome!
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Reviewed By: youkaineko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2010 02:50 EDT
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I understand your fear of writing long chapters, misguided as it may be, that it will make readers not want to read your story. But honestly if it's going to be a year between chapters anyway, I would much rather read 25 pages or more and feel fulfilled and that the wait was worth it than feel gypped by a very small chapter. It also seems that the urge to keep your chapter size down is actually making you take longer in between chapters not making than come faster. But then I have seen that happen to other writers as well. Why hobble your muse when it is whispering in your ear and your fingers your flying across the keyboard? Sounds counter productive to me. All that aside, it was wonderful to find that a new chapter had finally shown up for this story, even if I did want to yell at Kagome for being stupid.
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Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: breizhbit [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2009 21:45 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I love reading this story! Though there was kinda a lot of Inuyasha thinking on things in this chapter, I loved the sweet moments between IY and Kagome, and I am certainly in great suspense as to just what the hell Naraku is up to. In an environment like the one you've created, how does he plan to get away with doing anything to Kagome against her will? Is he counting on his reputation and position as prince to override her status as Inuyasha's assistant & special person as well as being niece to the king? Is he planning something that he thinks no one will find out about? Just what is going on? (Still wondering where Miroku is if he is in fact who Sango is sighing over in this story.) Also! I was very happy to read your book recs as I have been casting about for some new material lately. Thanks! Wonderful work and thanks so much for the chapter!
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