| "A Fool's Redemption" Reviews/Comments [ 144 ] |
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Reviewed By: bKatty On: May 26, 2008 22:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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loved this chapter, it's really interesting to see the characters evolve...cant wait for the next installment!!
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Title: Excellent
Reviewed By: KowaiiMusume [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2008 12:12 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutely wonderful. I adore this story. Thinking about her having to walk in to a room where the man she loves is making it with two sluts is making my stomach chern for her but I can't wait to read what happens next. Excellent job.
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2008 12:28 EDT
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I'm so sorry that I haven't reviewed in a long time. I haven't been getting updates on some stories. This is a great story and a well-written one at that. I feel so bad for Inuyasha. At least he knows the truth now. Kagome sure is patient with him. In this last chapter, those two women were so mean. I'm anxious to see what she finds behind the shower door. Inuyasha's reaction to finding out what had happened was so sad. This whole chapter leaves me wondering what will happen next. Well, sorry this review is so short, but I'm sick today. Hopefully, the next one will better. Great chapter! ^_^ Snow
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Title: oooh bizzniches
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2008 01:27 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, that was some kind of cliffy we've been left with. I'll be waiting for the next update no matter how long, although I'm sure you realize that we're hoping that won't be TO long.
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Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2008 11:52 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ha took matters into my own hands, now I will favorite this!
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Reviewed By: elementalobsession09 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2008 22:25 EST
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I'm anxious for more! Your fic is one of my most favorites and I hope to see more soon!
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Reviewed By: Jimothy On: January 31, 2008 18:42 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so wonderfully written, and so enjoyable to read. The progress is set at such a sweet and thoughtful pace, without sacrificing any of the excitement keeps you wanting to read more and more. Thank you so much! I hope you continue it soon!
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Title: Where's Miroku?
Reviewed By: alloreli [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2008 14:58 EST
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Ello! I've just read this fanfic for the first time and I think it's wonderful. I also think I know where Miroku is hiding. I think that some time ago Naraku may or may not have killed him and that's why Sango seems sad whenever Naraku is around! Well, that's my theory. Can't wait for your next update! Wonderful story!
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2008 01:35 EST
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I am very much enjoying this story. I agree with you. Introspection can die a slow and horrible death in a fire. Did you get migraines too? LOL I'm not getting the updates on your fics. It's probably hotmail being a bastard. I have to go through my favorites every now and then and check on them. The way that you wrote Kagome's sadness while she combed Inuyasha's hair was heartbreaking. I'm wondering if that was what pissed him off or if it was because he hadn't realized how hard he'd been driving her, taking her for granted. Maybe it was something else. It will be interesting to find out. The bathtub scene was a great breather from all the angst. I enjoyed the playfulness very much. Ooooh, asking her why she hadn't left with him was out of left field, quite a surprise. Could she possibly get any dumber? LOL I wonder what made him think about it. This is a fascinating story, although his sexual escapades are a bit disturbing. I know, I know. That's how they live there. *cowers* Please, no slaps upside the head. I think Kagome has revealed too much to Naraku and that it will come back to bite her in the ass. It's nice to see Inuyasha in an environment where he is accepted and I'm wondering if we'll learn more about his genetic origins. That has me intrigued, very much so. It's like you're keeping a big secret. heheh. Well, I love the mystery and suspense. Thanks! Hope the laptop works out well. ^_^ Snow
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Title: :3
Reviewed By: Inuki [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2008 14:48 EST
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C: Well you have very much captured my interest. XD I don't usually review on stories but I felt I must this time. Please add a new chapter as soon as you can. :D I can't wait. -bounces-
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Reviewed By: youkaineko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2007 04:02 EST
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As the tryptophan coma wears off (otherwise known as Thanksgiving), it's time for people to make their wish lists. Let's see what do I want for xmas… hmmm… I know, a new chapter! Please update soon. Happy holidays!
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Reviewed By: Ro0tin4Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2007 14:57 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh jeeze. This chapter has to be my favorite so far. It just showed such a different side to Inuyasha. And I just frickin' love it how he knows to an extent how Kagome feels for him. And when he pulled her in that tub I was expecting a kiss or something.. but.. it seemed to soon. Plus when he asked that question.. I had no clue what to expect. Well the next chapter should be good. ANd I am still hoping Miroku comes into the picture. I just cant see Sango with Naraku. Its...awkward. =D
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Reviewed By: Midoriko-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2007 15:48 EST
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Reading your last author's note to Drake, I find my question about 'wow, a society without any criminals?' answered - although frankly, I really was just waiting for the antagonists to pop up or show their true colours. I still don't know where everybody's pays come from (unless the 'king' makes enough money from the exotic fruite trade, and other such, to keep the whole structure going solely off that) I love how you're keeping your pace within the relationship, and using the long developing process to help enhance the descriptions of your world. It can't stay idealistic and perfect forever of course, since the plot has to progress, but I find that I really like your city-state. Almost reminds me of Plato's Repulic-- just without the whole 'horse raising' concept behind it. :P I will be looking forward to your next installment!
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Reviewed By: Xaenthe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2007 16:53 EST
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Oh, yay! *satisfied sigh* I absolutely love it when I get an email saying you've updated. It's great to see InuYasha giving Kagome a break. And the bathtub scene: what a creep he is! :) I can't wait to see what'll happen next. And where is that pesky Miroku, anyways...? :) I guess I'll have to wait on pins and needles until I can find out!
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Title: Wonderful
Reviewed By: Kamalakali (not signed in) On: November 09, 2007 16:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm certainly glad that you 'bumped' your fic up, or else I might have passed up reading it. The selection of updates today has been lacking, lol. Actually, I'm quite surprised at the amount of reviews you have compared to the quality of the plot and writing. I mean, this is a really good fic. Very original and well planned. People these days, lol. I'm not naming any names, but sometimes I question...Of course, my earliest fics (posted) were horrible yet people seemed to like them. ::shudders:: I stick to reviewing now, since I cannot seem to motivate myself to ever update things I start. It's safer that way, lol. Anyway, back to you. The beginning is hard to get through, but a necessity, so don't change it. People can get too lazy if you accommodate them. However, the story really picks up and I'm psyched for the next chapter. In fact, it might be my 'check up' link (that's the link I enter mediaminer through). It's quite an honor. The spelling and grammar is fantastic, and makes it a smooth read. There is nothing worse than a good plot but no sense of the English language. Don't even start me on summaries...is it necessary to neglect punctuation and capitalization? ::cries:: Anyway, before I go off on another tangent, I just wanted to say that I sincerely enjoyed reading your fic and can't wait until you update.
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