| "A Fool's Redemption" Reviews/Comments [ 144 ] |
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Title: :3
Reviewed By: Inuki [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2008 14:48 EST
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C: Well you have very much captured my interest. XD I don't usually review on stories but I felt I must this time. Please add a new chapter as soon as you can. :D I can't wait. -bounces-
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Reviewed By: youkaineko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2007 04:02 EST
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As the tryptophan coma wears off (otherwise known as Thanksgiving), it's time for people to make their wish lists. Let's see what do I want for xmas… hmmm… I know, a new chapter! Please update soon. Happy holidays!
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Reviewed By: Ro0tin4Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2007 14:57 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh jeeze. This chapter has to be my favorite so far. It just showed such a different side to Inuyasha. And I just frickin' love it how he knows to an extent how Kagome feels for him. And when he pulled her in that tub I was expecting a kiss or something.. but.. it seemed to soon. Plus when he asked that question.. I had no clue what to expect. Well the next chapter should be good. ANd I am still hoping Miroku comes into the picture. I just cant see Sango with Naraku. Its...awkward. =D
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Reviewed By: Midoriko-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2007 15:48 EST
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Reading your last author's note to Drake, I find my question about 'wow, a society without any criminals?' answered - although frankly, I really was just waiting for the antagonists to pop up or show their true colours. I still don't know where everybody's pays come from (unless the 'king' makes enough money from the exotic fruite trade, and other such, to keep the whole structure going solely off that) I love how you're keeping your pace within the relationship, and using the long developing process to help enhance the descriptions of your world. It can't stay idealistic and perfect forever of course, since the plot has to progress, but I find that I really like your city-state. Almost reminds me of Plato's Repulic-- just without the whole 'horse raising' concept behind it. :P I will be looking forward to your next installment!
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Reviewed By: Xaenthe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2007 16:53 EST
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Oh, yay! *satisfied sigh* I absolutely love it when I get an email saying you've updated. It's great to see InuYasha giving Kagome a break. And the bathtub scene: what a creep he is! :) I can't wait to see what'll happen next. And where is that pesky Miroku, anyways...? :) I guess I'll have to wait on pins and needles until I can find out!
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Title: Wonderful
Reviewed By: Kamalakali (not signed in) On: November 09, 2007 16:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm certainly glad that you 'bumped' your fic up, or else I might have passed up reading it. The selection of updates today has been lacking, lol. Actually, I'm quite surprised at the amount of reviews you have compared to the quality of the plot and writing. I mean, this is a really good fic. Very original and well planned. People these days, lol. I'm not naming any names, but sometimes I question...Of course, my earliest fics (posted) were horrible yet people seemed to like them. ::shudders:: I stick to reviewing now, since I cannot seem to motivate myself to ever update things I start. It's safer that way, lol. Anyway, back to you. The beginning is hard to get through, but a necessity, so don't change it. People can get too lazy if you accommodate them. However, the story really picks up and I'm psyched for the next chapter. In fact, it might be my 'check up' link (that's the link I enter mediaminer through). It's quite an honor. The spelling and grammar is fantastic, and makes it a smooth read. There is nothing worse than a good plot but no sense of the English language. Don't even start me on summaries...is it necessary to neglect punctuation and capitalization? ::cries:: Anyway, before I go off on another tangent, I just wanted to say that I sincerely enjoyed reading your fic and can't wait until you update.
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2007 15:13 EST
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this story is so creative i absolutely love it. i was so excited to see a new chapter up so thank you!
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Title: Interesting...
Reviewed By: Licentia poetica [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2007 05:54 EST
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I was up late and decided to see what was new; glad I came across this! Keep up the good work. iPoe
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Reviewed By: togu On: November 01, 2007 18:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm lovin it!! :D please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2007 03:03 EDT
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This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association! The Feudal Association is a group that presents awards to fanfiction and fanart in the InuYasha Fandom several times a year. Our official website can be found here - http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/ The current nominations pages are here: http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/oct2007art.html http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/oct2007.html Check these out to find out what you were nominated for! And our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs can be found here - http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Voting is open October 17, 2007 - November 1, 2007. Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! Winners will be notified by me after November 1st. ~ The Daimyo Owner of the Feudal Association Note: If you get this notification more than once, it means you have been nominated for more than 1 award.
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Reviewed By: chanda [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2007 12:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I look forward to your next update. I love this story, the detail, the angst and the originality has been well thought out! Hope you get more reviewers, cause god know's you deserve them! Chanda
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Reviewed By: FayeMegan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2007 02:35 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. What an utterly creative story! This is fantastic. I sincerely hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: Ro0tin4Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2007 15:17 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey there! Well so far I love this story. WEll except for so parts but yet those parts are enjoyable. Like how Miroku is not init.. that stinks yet it seems that Naraku has caught Sango's heart and is good.. another VERY good thing is that Shippou is not in here. I cant stand Shippou I dotnlikt o read fics withhim in it. unless he's plder or barely in it. So thats an awesome point. But the situations that Inuyasha is in with the girls.. I have a feeling he astill is a virgin he just uses the girls for pleasure which is A OK! Well you must be getting bored of my review. Yet when this story is completed be prepared for a big review! =D Awesome once again. So update soon! k?
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Reviewed By: the painted lady On: October 11, 2007 14:29 EDT
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This is an awesome story! I love it and am already begginging to twitch! Can't wait for the nest installment!
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Reviewed By: Javeska On: October 07, 2007 22:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must confess the only reason why I am reading this fic is because of the IYFG. i'm a passionate reader and writer of Inuyasha but time no longer allows me to read as I would like. This is a very enjoyable fic. It's different and original when compared to the other experiment fics that are often seen. One thing I want to warn against. There were times especially in the first few chapters that I felt like I was being told the story instead of being shown it. (Sorry, writing minor.) I hope that you can find some way to work on that. That is the only real complaint I have...well, there is one more? Is it possible to use other words for descriptions of Sango. I hope to see more angst and suspense in the up coming chapter. I have hunches about Naraku, but with the way he has been characterized it makes them difficult to guess. I hope to see an update from you soon. ^.~ Good luck!
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