| "Vying for Dominance" Reviews/Comments [ 205 ] |
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Reviewed By: tixylix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2007 09:15 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: Tana-san On: December 10, 2007 05:27 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi Shadow...I really loved the lemonade you served. As always, it was delicious. I was alittle afraid there momentarily when he pulled himelf from her and felt the immense pain from the withdrawal before completion of the act. I honestly thought they might have lost their want when Kagome got talking too much. She should have anticipated that Sesshoumaru would be demand explaination before he gave in to finishing. She's lucky it worked out but I really hoped that he wouldn't let her just go like he did. That was sad. He is inu though and his beast was "tamed" so to speak, by her. I highly doubt it will be the end even if Sesshoumaru says no, for now. I'll be looking for more and whatever the site, I'll be there. TTFN Jen
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Reviewed By: sweetest angel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2007 21:06 PST
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*grin* I'm really glad that you created a count in this site too, since that didn't work well on the two others for differents reasons... (single spark and FF ). I was litterally dieing to read more and finally have the end of their "night of madness" !!! :) *all flush*, -need a cold shower now-. Seriously, really good job. I was with tearful eyes at the end of this chap 9. I'm glad that you decide to continue a little more this story even if it was supposed to be a "short one-shot" at the beginning. *happy dance* I can wait to see when they will understand that screw their differences they are miserable without the other. *grin* please please update really soon! until then, take care
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Reviewed By: Ladydot On: December 07, 2007 12:36 PST
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Simply brilliant. you had me in tears. I just wow. Your amazing simply put. this story idea is fantastic and i'm so curious and hopeful that they end up together. they deserve it so so so much. till next time ^^
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Reviewed By: FluffyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2007 08:14 PST
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i'm back...*grins* i liked the chapter. i really did. its sad that sess is such an iceburg. oh well, to each unto his own. later, FL
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Reviewed By: ladydeath31178 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2007 22:23 PST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am in awe I only just found this story today and have read all the chapters even the one you just posted , you went into detail with out over doing it , it is beyond delightful! and I even began to tear up at the last chapter ( granted pregnancy hormones didnt help me there lol) but I truly do enjoy this story and look forward to all future chapters and what you may have up your sleeve for these two star crossed lovers
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Reviewed By: jessie42 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2007 20:09 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was amazing. You got the perfect mix of pure smut and sweet fluffiness. Plus the end was so heartbreakingly sad, I'm dying to know what the next morning brings. All that foreshadowing makes me worry about the future of our dear couple but love (er... lust?) overcomes all, right? Right?!?! Keep up the good work, I look forward to future chapters!
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Title: *Hands more ICE to Sesshy*
Reviewed By: Fluffystenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2007 16:46 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
We all need cold showers after that one ... *looks towards mine* Nah... More reading too. I can not believe FF is being such an @$$ about things... oh well... As always another good chapter SailorTwilightStar (FF.Net) Fluffys Tenshi here
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Reviewed By: FluffyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2007 13:05 PST
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*faces shadow absolutley flabbergasted* i know you did not!! or wait...maybe you did...i don't know how to say that i so totally know that you read my oneshot His and Hers!! that was my line!! *pouts butis excited someone likes her ideas; suddenly becomes nervous* you do like my idea(s) right? right? *paces* oh plz do tell. later, FL
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Reviewed By: FluffyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2007 10:50 PST
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wait a minute...you're on FFN as well? cool. Hi, I'm FluffyLady here and Fluffy's Lady aka FL on FFN. look me up. ;D what's ur name of FFN? i'll look u up too if u don't mind. later, FL p.s. likin' the story thus far. xD
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