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| "Vying for Dominance" Reviews/Comments [ 205 ] | | Pages (14): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 › » ] | Reviewed By: brainshake [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2008 04:16 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww, a really beautiful chapter! I really like how you brought to attention that Kagome is no dog, and doesn't like the taste of blood. That would have been creepy and so not-Kagome if you had her go all excited over tasting the blood. And it was so cute how you compared him to Buyo bringing a dead bird to share with his Kagome. XD Can't wait for the next chapter, I think I sense the sweet smell of a lemon approaching.... ;)
| Title: XD
Reviewed By: PitaBread [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2008 10:20 PDT
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Am I the only one that finds it humorous that this started out as a oneshot lemon? LOL Be that as it may, I commend you on this story! Yeah, it has many typos (I suppose you're rushing to get it out to your readers post haste) but that can be forgiven, as long as we not what you meant. Now, for the gushing.... I am like, the biggest SessKag fan - EVER. And I have to say, even though I myself wrote a story where these two fall in love in just a matter of days, it can be difficult to believe. But I feel I managed, and so did you. You did such a great job making this into an actual story with a great plot - that's my weak point, I always feel my plots are lacking - that this has easily become one of my favorites. And usually, I tend to ge a little.... iffy about Mary-Sues, but I found myself looking forward to seeing more of Takked and Enai. Such great characters! Anyhow, I'm sad that this story is almost ended, but it can't go on forever, right? For now, I bid you happy writing! ^_^
| Reviewed By: SKnFS [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2008 08:44 PDT
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I find myself really leaning towards Cuddlebum and Dinner. It sounds like such a cute name pair ya know? This was an awesome chapter and funny how Kagome was comparing between Sesshomaru and her cat. Bringing back the prize and sharing, oh yay! I was once brought back a mouse that started to climb up my leg so I can kinda understand where she's going with this. Not all together pleasant. Loved it so much. You rock.
| Title: lulz
Reviewed By: PitaBread [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2008 17:46 PDT
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Oh, indeed, that was hot. I don't have any popsicles, but I do have icecream sandwiches. AFTER the lemon, of course. *winks*
| Title: Who were you kidding?! lol
Reviewed By: PitaBread [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2008 17:21 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've heard this before. The whole "this was supposed to ba a oneshot but I'm going to keep going for a few more chapters" bit. ;o) It's how I started my Always fic. So far, this is really good! I think Kagome sounds a little braver than she normally would, but that's OK. I like to make her stronger too. I'll be damned if there is anything better than SessKag smut, so this is really good so far. Now, I'm gonna keep reading. Good luck!
| Reviewed By: Cianna27889 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2008 12:01 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am sssooo sorry that this is coming to an end, but alas, "All good things must come to an end." This fic has been great! You have really taken the time to explore your subject, think things through carefully, and your descriptions are like free flowing thought and poetry. Looking forward to more from you, CiAnna
| Reviewed By: RadioActiveRedhead [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2008 23:59 PDT
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*Delighted squeak* Cuddlebum! HAHA priceless. Seriously. Thats like something you'd hear your 60 year old grammie call her little yorkshire terrier. LOL I love how you make them banter like a couple of people who have been married more than 30 years. It makes my heart happy ^^
| Reviewed By: omgitsmomo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2008 23:05 PDT
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I love you and I love this story. I hope this isn't the end! I couldn't stop reading it! I just found it today! I just needed to get to the most recent chapter! You're a brilliant writer! You should think about writing your own story! This seems much better then the actual anime/manga itself! You have an amazing talent! :) You better update, haha!
| Reviewed By: B D Gerretson [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2008 19:27 PDT
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absolutely beautiful!!
| Reviewed By: RediHebi On: March 25, 2008 18:50 PDT
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omg great chapter!! i love Enai's comment to kagome!! priceless! update soon!
| Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2008 14:41 PDT
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Yay! Of course, we all know that Sesshoumaru would win! However...that doesn't mean that the trials are over. Inuyasha getting sat was unexpected, and perfect. I think he needed to be put in his place. I really felt sorry for Sesshoumaru when he instinctively shared his victory with Kagome and then felt rejected. Poor guy. You portrayed Kagome's feelings exactly how I would imagine, full of joy. I don't believe that I reviewed the last chapter. Kuro is a bastard. Good job. And wow, your ability to project Sesshoumaru as a strategist extra-ordinaire is awesome! All of your battle scenes were wonderful. I hope I haven't missed a chapter, but I'm ready to see Auria beat the crap out of Sesshoumaru's mother. From what I read in previous chapters, I assume that Sesshoumaru has been waiting for Inuyasha to grow up and to set the stage for his introduction. This might be earlier than he planned. However, if this is what Sesshoumaru wanted, someone needs to enlighten Inuyasha. I look forward to a stunned Inuyasha. You know, Enai would be good for him. She's like Kagome. Can't wait to see the fight with Auria! Gah! I'm getting bugged by my daughter, so I can't remember the name, but I love the shadow dragon. Can't wait to see what she's up to! I'm off to run errands. Love the story and anxious for the next chapter! ^_^ Snow
| Reviewed By: FluffyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2008 13:56 PDT
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aawww...sweet. can't wait for more, as always. ;D FL
| Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2008 01:54 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
apparently the ONLY thing that has gone right for me today it that I have a LONG list of Fantastic fanfiction to read today.... and that it happened at the START of my holidays and not the end.... I am so **** because I just lost all the data for one class at school... thank god it is only the one class.... could get some of the stuff off the teacher....
| Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2008 20:16 PDT
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Oh wow. Which was the most difficult part to write? The introspection or the action? You have made this action whore very happy indeed and I do appreciate it. I loved the whole exit scene. Everything about it--the windscar, Kagome's smile--was all good. Oooh, didn't expect mama to show up. What a bitch! She's really mean. Thanks goodness for Auria and Enai. It would have hurt me to write Auria's thoughts, but you did a great job in using it to describe the behavior and appearance of the other characters. Smartly done! You have continued to wind this around the General's vision. I'm wondering how Inuyasha will fit in and why it is that Sesshoumaru asked if he could visit. Aren't they going to be together? Maybe I missed another chapter. That's a good enough excuse to go back and read the story again! Yay! *snicker* Shoot. We don't get any battles with the rogues? Darn. I bet some of those rogues are nice hanyou. Oooh, then there's that guy who used the tainted shard. He's out there somewhere, too. Kagome still has a long way to go to be safe. Okay, I'm on a high and am going to read those two chapters again. I'm sorry if I didn't comment on so much in these past two chapters, like Kuro being a real ass and being surprised by Tannis. Just know that it is all good. I'm going to run back and re-read them, especially that yummy kiss. Heheh. ^_^ Snow
| Title: CHAPTER 32
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2008 19:35 PDT
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Aaaaaaach! I missed chapter 32! It was absolutely wonderful! Kagome is out in the open! Inuyasha shows his heritage and no one has known of him! This was just too good. I'm dying. Lines are being drawn and Sesshoumaru is as confident as ever! I doubt that anyone with any experience with Inuyasha would have gone up against those three. The dissenters have absolutely no idea how quickly they will be pulverized. Sesshoumaru was smart enough not to show Inuyasha until the boy could defend himself with his sword. I'm squee happy! *jump jump jump* I'm like Inuyasha. It's about time. Let's kick some ass! Woohoo! On to the next chapter! ^_^ Snow
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