| "Vying for Dominance" Reviews/Comments [ 205 ] |
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Reviewed By: FluffyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2007 04:18 PST
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oh, that's where the name comes from. i was thinking 'me' and 'sudoku' *snickers* whatever,tho. ;D FL
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Reviewed By: Ladydot On: December 12, 2007 03:56 PST
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Oh my...that was such a turn!! wow and stupid stupid fluffy!! Kagome should knee him in the golden place for that. If only she could...lol But once again brilliant! Your amazing and i can't wait to see what will happen next! Kagome just needs to escape and give it her all! She knows dumbo aka fluffy is close by now so she at least has to try to run for it...lol
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Reviewed By: Ladydot On: December 11, 2007 13:20 PST
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Oh my!! your brilliant. I was so tuned to this chapter it wasn't even funny. Cake which i love to death couldn't even drawl me away from its startling gasp. your an amazing person. and i do hope another chapter comes out quickly. im so curious about whether he goes to her or not. I hope they get together as well. They deserve each other! hmm i guess i need to be patient. till next time!
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Reviewed By: FluffyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2007 12:56 PST
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*taps foot* now how could you do that to all your loyal readers/reviewers? *sighs* geez, now how long will it be until you update? i wanna know! *whines; perks up at a thought* is Sessy gonna transform? ooh....that'll be nice!! FL
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Reviewed By: Tana-san On: December 11, 2007 00:58 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So InuYasha tries to save some of the females from getting caught in Sesshoumaru's ritual? He should of stayed with Kagome but who would have guessed she could be lured into his calling? This is going to hurt big time when he finds out he failed in protecting Kagome and in the end he didn't even save the one female he WAS protecting that night. I so enjoy the descriptive way you write. I can see in my mind's eye exactly what you are descibing with so much fasination. Sesshoumaru not being able to control his inner inu is not something I would want a front row seat for. He is one very dangerous being to confront. But for all his cold and harsh ways he is just as loving and gentle when he wants to be. I see his thought on being bored with the fight until one remains, she submits to him, he screws her legs off ( brutally if he wishes) and the thrill is gone. After all those centuries and the females all react the same, even I would be bored enough to stay single and celebate. Kagome can show him "the way of the Karma Sutra" and then sex with the sexy Inu Lord will be more than "the same old thing" in submitting female and f***ing his frustrations out. That's one gift a human female can give. We like to do it till we're satisfied in every way we can! Well time to check around and find any others that have had to post on other sites. Oh, and I am thrilled I didn't have to wait until ASS got it's consipation under control to read the lemon scene.(No disrespect meant, really, I just couldn't help the pun). Till next time my friend. Jen
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Reviewed By: tixylix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2007 09:15 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
sniffle
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Reviewed By: Tana-san On: December 10, 2007 05:27 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi Shadow...I really loved the lemonade you served. As always, it was delicious. I was alittle afraid there momentarily when he pulled himelf from her and felt the immense pain from the withdrawal before completion of the act. I honestly thought they might have lost their want when Kagome got talking too much. She should have anticipated that Sesshoumaru would be demand explaination before he gave in to finishing. She's lucky it worked out but I really hoped that he wouldn't let her just go like he did. That was sad. He is inu though and his beast was "tamed" so to speak, by her. I highly doubt it will be the end even if Sesshoumaru says no, for now. I'll be looking for more and whatever the site, I'll be there. TTFN Jen
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Reviewed By: sweetest angel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2007 21:06 PST
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*grin* I'm really glad that you created a count in this site too, since that didn't work well on the two others for differents reasons... (single spark and FF ). I was litterally dieing to read more and finally have the end of their "night of madness" !!! :) *all flush*, -need a cold shower now-. Seriously, really good job. I was with tearful eyes at the end of this chap 9. I'm glad that you decide to continue a little more this story even if it was supposed to be a "short one-shot" at the beginning. *happy dance* I can wait to see when they will understand that screw their differences they are miserable without the other. *grin* please please update really soon! until then, take care
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Reviewed By: Ladydot On: December 07, 2007 12:36 PST
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Simply brilliant. you had me in tears. I just wow. Your amazing simply put. this story idea is fantastic and i'm so curious and hopeful that they end up together. they deserve it so so so much. till next time ^^
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Reviewed By: FluffyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2007 08:14 PST
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i'm back...*grins* i liked the chapter. i really did. its sad that sess is such an iceburg. oh well, to each unto his own. later, FL
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Reviewed By: ladydeath31178 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2007 22:23 PST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am in awe I only just found this story today and have read all the chapters even the one you just posted , you went into detail with out over doing it , it is beyond delightful! and I even began to tear up at the last chapter ( granted pregnancy hormones didnt help me there lol) but I truly do enjoy this story and look forward to all future chapters and what you may have up your sleeve for these two star crossed lovers
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Reviewed By: jessie42 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2007 20:09 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was amazing. You got the perfect mix of pure smut and sweet fluffiness. Plus the end was so heartbreakingly sad, I'm dying to know what the next morning brings. All that foreshadowing makes me worry about the future of our dear couple but love (er... lust?) overcomes all, right? Right?!?! Keep up the good work, I look forward to future chapters!
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Title: *Hands more ICE to Sesshy*
Reviewed By: Fluffystenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2007 16:46 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
We all need cold showers after that one ... *looks towards mine* Nah... More reading too. I can not believe FF is being such an @$$ about things... oh well... As always another good chapter SailorTwilightStar (FF.Net) Fluffys Tenshi here
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Reviewed By: FluffyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2007 13:05 PST
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*faces shadow absolutley flabbergasted* i know you did not!! or wait...maybe you did...i don't know how to say that i so totally know that you read my oneshot His and Hers!! that was my line!! *pouts butis excited someone likes her ideas; suddenly becomes nervous* you do like my idea(s) right? right? *paces* oh plz do tell. later, FL
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Reviewed By: FluffyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2007 10:50 PST
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wait a minute...you're on FFN as well? cool. Hi, I'm FluffyLady here and Fluffy's Lady aka FL on FFN. look me up. ;D what's ur name of FFN? i'll look u up too if u don't mind. later, FL p.s. likin' the story thus far. xD
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