| "Vying for Dominance" Reviews/Comments [ 205 ] |
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Reviewed By: FluffyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2007 04:58 PST
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lol. good chap, waiting soooo impatiently for the next one! FL
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Reviewed By: Tana-san On: December 14, 2007 21:36 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Did I read correctly???You're going to be giving us some more of your oh so delicious and thirt quenching lemonade??? Oh, Yay!!! opps, almost got away from the review with just the mere mention of your citrus-y treat. Kagome wouldn't be Kagome if she didn't trip and fall or put her foot in her mouth by saying too much. But hey, it's not easy when you're smack in the middle of pure unwanted danger. Oh and it's a good thing Sesshoumaru is so lightning fast or she would have been some creatures lunch. Great going. Until the next posting. Jen
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Reviewed By: sesshys_jaded_samuri [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2007 21:17 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like how you pulled that off.. though I can't wait to see what happens when she joins them at the table... I am glad that you decided to post this up on MediaMiner, since SingleSpark is down... I really hate waiting for updates on this....
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Reviewed By: Niece [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2007 17:13 PST
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AHHH! please update as soon as possible. the suspense is absolutely killing me. ughhh. >_<
but i am really, really loving this story. i can't wait to see what happens.
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Reviewed By: The Assasin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2007 16:10 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ahem... I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT!!!!! im sorry it took me so long to review it but...well that is besides the point. This story is amazing and im actually surprised that you have only 20 reviews. I have one bone to pick with you though: The Cliffies!!!! I mean, I just finished reading "Please Lords" and i really want to kno what Kagome will say!!! This fanfic is completely entertaining and captivating. They say don't judge a book by it's cover but even your TITLE is interesting. *licks lips* that was some impressive lemonade. Enjoyment factor:20...yupp... *snaps out of daydream* hehe... You can check around but i really dont review unless the story is amazing and quite frankly this is!!! For my patience's sake, update soon!!!!!! Tieka =)
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Reviewed By: FluffyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2007 04:23 PST
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oh you are just so wrong for leaving me on a cliffy like that! ;D i liked the chap (aside from the cliffy) plz update soon! FL
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Reviewed By: Tana-san On: December 14, 2007 03:51 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent...now she's got herself in quite a jam. I agree with her over the supposed weapon. What youkai in their right mind would give a miko a weapon to use? Especially a bow and arrow? Promise me the silver bitch will die by Kagome's hand? And how is Sesshoumaru supposed to help her...or is he even permitted to fight for her? Or maybe his beast is so full of the lust for blood that he wishes for his miko to prove her worth? Ahhh the curiousity to leave me in. TTFN Jen
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Reviewed By: Ladydot On: December 14, 2007 03:38 PST
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*gasp* oh you just had to leave us there! it was getting to the really really gooey center. Man now i have to wait...*poute* but once again brilliant! The battle royal was impressive i liked it though. you didn't stay on in it to much but didn't leave it unattended. Till next time ^^
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Reviewed By: Tana-san On: December 13, 2007 02:19 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahh, let the battle begin...it will lead to the battle of Kagome learning how to reach Sesshoumaru's mind and hopefully before she is put up on the proverbial chopping block. Males had such disgusting ways of procurring females in those times. Whether they fought for them or made the females fight for the "honor" is so demeaning. Even putting them up for sale like one does cattle...I only hope that Sesshoumaru got some kind of ESP gift when he tasted her unique blood and well...I'm not writing this am I? But I do like that kind of plot device, it has it's uses in a clinch. I noticed that ASS is back in the game this evening. I'm glad because it's difficult having to filter through all the fics here as they don't have categories like AFF.net or FF.net. Many writers here don't say who the pairings are making for a long search if you're just looking for a Sess/Kag fic. OK enough said. You're probably getting annoyed with all my ramblings every time I write. Hugs, Jen
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Title: i like it...
Reviewed By: little_red On: December 12, 2007 17:30 PST
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so yeah, i'm a little confused... like, i dont know the number of the chapter but. youve got the one with sesshouamru roaring or wahtever and running off, right after kagome screamed... and well, i assumed... corse thats probably why im wrong. either way, i had assumed that he was going after kagome... i mean didnt he and inu yasha hear her scream??? i dont know... maybe i just need to go back and read it again... either way, its a good story, i love reading it. you should continue writting, cause this ones a good one...
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Reviewed By: FluffyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2007 04:18 PST
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oh, that's where the name comes from. i was thinking 'me' and 'sudoku' *snickers* whatever,tho. ;D FL
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Reviewed By: Ladydot On: December 12, 2007 03:56 PST
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Oh my...that was such a turn!! wow and stupid stupid fluffy!! Kagome should knee him in the golden place for that. If only she could...lol But once again brilliant! Your amazing and i can't wait to see what will happen next! Kagome just needs to escape and give it her all! She knows dumbo aka fluffy is close by now so she at least has to try to run for it...lol
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Reviewed By: Ladydot On: December 11, 2007 13:20 PST
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Oh my!! your brilliant. I was so tuned to this chapter it wasn't even funny. Cake which i love to death couldn't even drawl me away from its startling gasp. your an amazing person. and i do hope another chapter comes out quickly. im so curious about whether he goes to her or not. I hope they get together as well. They deserve each other! hmm i guess i need to be patient. till next time!
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Reviewed By: FluffyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2007 12:56 PST
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*taps foot* now how could you do that to all your loyal readers/reviewers? *sighs* geez, now how long will it be until you update? i wanna know! *whines; perks up at a thought* is Sessy gonna transform? ooh....that'll be nice!! FL
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Reviewed By: Tana-san On: December 11, 2007 00:58 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So InuYasha tries to save some of the females from getting caught in Sesshoumaru's ritual? He should of stayed with Kagome but who would have guessed she could be lured into his calling? This is going to hurt big time when he finds out he failed in protecting Kagome and in the end he didn't even save the one female he WAS protecting that night. I so enjoy the descriptive way you write. I can see in my mind's eye exactly what you are descibing with so much fasination. Sesshoumaru not being able to control his inner inu is not something I would want a front row seat for. He is one very dangerous being to confront. But for all his cold and harsh ways he is just as loving and gentle when he wants to be. I see his thought on being bored with the fight until one remains, she submits to him, he screws her legs off ( brutally if he wishes) and the thrill is gone. After all those centuries and the females all react the same, even I would be bored enough to stay single and celebate. Kagome can show him "the way of the Karma Sutra" and then sex with the sexy Inu Lord will be more than "the same old thing" in submitting female and f***ing his frustrations out. That's one gift a human female can give. We like to do it till we're satisfied in every way we can! Well time to check around and find any others that have had to post on other sites. Oh, and I am thrilled I didn't have to wait until ASS got it's consipation under control to read the lemon scene.(No disrespect meant, really, I just couldn't help the pun). Till next time my friend. Jen
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