| "Vying for Dominance" Reviews/Comments [ 205 ] |
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Reviewed By: RadioActiveRedhead [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2008 08:55 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ARGHHH CLIFF HANGERRSSsssss *wither*
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Reviewed By: brainshake [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2008 02:34 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I was so drawn into the story I was surprised when the chapter ended. Normally, I keep an eye on the scrollbar to see how much is left of the chapter, but I forgot myself this time. It was that exciting! Can't wait to see what happens with the blood crazed Inuyasha. Poor Kuro will be ripped to pieces! XD Go get him, boy!
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Reviewed By: SlightlyMadHatter [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2008 23:41 PST
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ARG!!! NOOO!!! I WANT MORE!!! I hope you write another chapter soon...I wish to see the end of this fight.
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Reviewed By: imanewme [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2008 20:15 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome fighting scene! Woof! Simply brilliant!
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Reviewed By: Little Rini On: February 28, 2008 19:05 PST
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Update please! The month's almost over. :( Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: brainshake [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2008 04:20 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I missed the eclipse. :( It was scheduled at 4am here, so no way was I awake for that... Anyway, I'm very impressed with Inuyasha's speech. Proves that he's not just an airhead but that he does indeed have a braincell or two. It's gonna be really interesting to read next chapter, even though I'm not particularly fond of reading battle scenes. But I'm sure you'll do awesome, just like everything else you decide to write. ;)
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Reviewed By: Ethril Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2008 15:41 PST
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good luck on the fight! One thing I think about when writing a hand to hand fight, is I envision what is going on and then jot down movements or expressions as my imagination plays on. Then when I have every move I want written down, I write the fight around my notes...It's just an idea, you can ignore me if you really want...but great chapter and can't wait for the next one!
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Reviewed By: SKnFS [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2008 11:42 PST
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Once again you present the world... or us loyal readers on MM here with a fantastic chapter. Inuyasha has arrived and the anticipated moment has arrived. how the heck is the poor guy going to react. And... the world is still moving despite the fact that Sesshomaru.. smiled? Yes I believe I saw that in there. Wow! I love your story so much, it moves at such a well balanced pace and I love it I love it. Thank you
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Reviewed By: Ladydot On: February 21, 2008 12:32 PST
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Oh i love it! And fluffy's playful, yay! This chapter made my dreary day into a perfect one. I'm so excited for the next chapter! I just know its going to be brilliant. Till then ^^
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Reviewed By: imanewme [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2008 08:09 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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"Im not leaving this place unless she's with me." Oh Crap, Inuyasha... why on earth did you go and say something so difinitive? Isn't that pratically begging a fight to the death? (banging head on keyboard) Don't sweat the hand to hand combat too much. Okay, so you haven't written a scene with it before. . . that's what research is for! LOL... I have faith in you. /Ima
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Reviewed By: SlightlyMadHatter [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2008 21:55 PST
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Absolutely brilliant. I am thoroughly enraptured by it. My compliments to the world and story you have woven. Please continue this wonderfulness.
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Title: Ch 29
Reviewed By: Kin-chan Pandun [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2008 21:35 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Saw the eclipse (gorgeous). Read the chapter (fantastic). I really like this serious introspective/upfront Inuyasha. I think he made the right choice in how to handle meeting the Lords. I'm glad Sesshoumaru and Kagome have come to an agreement about the future. The bit about the Sesshoumaru being turned on by Kagome's powers was amusing and cute. The part about him looking forward to the challenge of building a relationship with her was endearing and inspiring. ... ... I can hardly wait for the upcoming fight. Will we have more Inu Lord POVs re: Inuyasha, now? ... ... ... ... Thanks for writing, Kin.
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Reviewed By: HentaiVixen [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2008 20:59 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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alright inu finally grew up!!! but, its too late to bad so sad for him!! sesshy and kagie!!! love it!! please up date soon!!! ja!
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Reviewed By: TheAlmightyAya-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2008 20:37 PST
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Noooo! That was way too short! lol. Keep the story coming, I want to read more more more!!
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2008 20:01 PST
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Ach! You leave us in such suspense! Whether he knew it or not, Inuyasha was excellent in his address to the lords. I loved it. Absolutely perfect. I'm sure that Sesshoumaru was expecting such behavior and that it played to his cause. I'm dancing in place and holding my breath! I don't know how Sesshoumaru is going to play this or what his ultimate design is, but this is awesome. Can't wait til the next chapter! ^_^ Snow
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