| "Vying for Dominance" Reviews/Comments [ 205 ] |
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2008 07:22 PST
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Chapter 24 was very exciting. I read it several times and still didn't get the whole thing about the swords and Dragon of Light though. The only dragon that I could associate it with was the Dragon Strike that Sesshoumaru uses and Sou'unga's dragon, but even then, I couldn't put it together. Could you explain that in a note in the next chapter? The idea that Kagome's powers would react so strongly was great! I really liked the part with Jomon. That was sweet. Enai was too cute. Sesshoumaru is pretty sneaky. I loved his speech. I think that more came out of that than he was planning. She healed his arm! Yay! The way you have youkai and miko powers interacting is awesome. I know that I've missed details. Tannis and Takked are amusing. I hope Sesshoumaru takes Kagome as his mate. *dances from foot to foot* Can't wait for the lemon! ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: Ladydot On: February 10, 2008 06:07 PST
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HOLY MOLY!! wow. just wow. thats was amazing. and the ending aww!! it was perfect. The surge of their connection was brilliantly described. Hopefully though the other inus now will understand just how wonderful and great kagome is. I want to see little ones at some point! lol
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Reviewed By: brainshake [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2008 02:30 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think it was a beautiful ending. Very fitting. I wonder what the other lords will think after witnessing him flying away with her to an empty cave. I think their secret will be out in the open. ;) Nice to see his arm returned. When that happened in the manga I was so thrilled and happy for his sake. I feel the same now. :D Looking forward to next chapter. Not only because of them lemon, though. ;)
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Reviewed By: SKnFS [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2008 23:35 PST
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This was an awesome chapter. There little display was pretty neat. Now the only thing that could happen that could really help throw all them dogs is Inuyasha showing up
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Title: squeefsn
Reviewed By: squeefan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2008 21:42 PST
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Ah this latest chapter was wonderful... I just recently starting reading all of this and I love it.
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Reviewed By: B D Gerretson [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2008 21:31 PST
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hmmm good update. so how do all those other demons react to his demon taking over to keep her and leave with her i wonder? can't wait to find out!
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Reviewed By: KilalaMoonRose [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2008 19:01 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As always, another great installment. You really are a genius. The only thing is that you spelled "So'unga" wrong. It's really spelled: Sou'unga. Oh well; it was just a minor something. Can't wait 'til your next chapter. Ja mata ne!
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Reviewed By: soliary25 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2008 14:09 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Since A Single Spark is down (or is for me, anyhow), I figured I would try here, lol. Great Chapter! I am curious as to see how Sesshoumaru will make this up to her! Update soon, please
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Title: YAY
Reviewed By: B D Gerretson [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2008 13:10 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE OMG LOL IM LIKE PEEING MY PANTS WAITING FOR IT!!!!
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Reviewed By: imanewme [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2008 10:49 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Yeay!!! I finally got to catch up with the last two chapters... and boy howdy they were awsome chapters! The way you describe how Kagome blew up at Aria and Jamon was perfect. Classic Kagome 100%. Of course she blew up at something seemingly pre-maturely, is there any other way for Kagome to blow up? She blew up emotionally in the last chapter, only to blow up physically in this one. (big grin) NICE! LOL... The significance of Sesshoumaru and Kagome displaying "fireworks" isn't lost on me, either. Oh, let's not draw attention to the illicit affair *KABOOM* *giggle* The flashback worked nicely, too, by the way. This story is awsome. I'm enjoying it and will follow it until the end. Ima
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Reviewed By: brainshake [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2008 07:19 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, I really needed something good to read today. It has been the crappiest day in years, and it's only 4pm, what else can go wrong today? So I found a whole bunch of chapters updated since last I checked. That saved my day. Thanks for being such an awesome writer! And keep the awesomeness flowing! It's a shame you've given up on Temporal Twilight, though, as I really liked that story. Revise it if you're not satisfied, just don't let it die. I love Toga, he's such a lovable character, and he and Kagome makes such a cute couple. :)
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Reviewed By: jessie42 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2008 15:34 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story and I'm so happy that you are updating on a frequent basis. The plot has me enthralled and I'm eagerly anticipating the next chapters. Keep up the excellent work!
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Reviewed By: Kakashisgurly [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2008 11:36 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really good. The way you've captured the character's personalities and placed them into a world of your own is outstanding. A few things though, I have to say (nothing of criticism): 1) I thought for sure she was going to die talking to his mom. For godsakes she is worse then her son when it come to having no emotion! 2) Lol, all I could think of when Kagome was serving the blood wine was how, if that were me, I would torture him. I decided I would either bend down and whisper something in his ear like "You know what I've been thinking about since the moment I saw you? How I'd love it if you mounted me right here. Sliding your hard member in and out of me. Having everyone watch and listen as you made me cum, screaming your name everytime." or I would write it down on paper and slip it to him somehow. But then I thought (besides that being horribly hentai) no, because the others would hear and it would probably have some meaning to them like "Hey! This miko just made a pass at Fluffy! She must die!" so that wouldn't be good. But yeaaahhh. 3) When she was with the puppies, I could just like imagine her like thinking about their own litter (however taboo it would be) and what their children would look like.
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Reviewed By: Ethril Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2008 22:29 PST
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I think Kagome flew off at the perfect time. I would have sooner. She's dealt with so much from those short sighted Inu's that it was time she told them how she really felt. You did wonderfully with your newest chapter.
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Reviewed By: FluffyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2008 22:06 PST
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you think longer is worse? not hardly, child. (sorry, i call everyone that) i love when my fav authors make extra long updates. love it i say! FL
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