| "Vying for Dominance" Reviews/Comments [ 205 ] |
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2008 14:45 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gasp! I am breathless! That was fucking spectacular! You have no idea how excited I am. Everything was so well performed. You had so many involved in conflict, so many undertones and subtleties, surprise protocol. The match wasn't thrown by either party. It was true to the spirit of the contest. There was the cute part...pink panther, mellow yellow... LOL THE BITCH IS DEAD! You didn't have Kagome be proud and vindictive. You had her true to nature, sad that she had to kill, even though she had no choice. And the fight! Your descriptions were so extraordinary. Ooooh, that mother person really pisses me off, Medosuki, or something like that. She needs to be bitch slapped. I love Takked and all of your characters actually. You breathe life into them. Stupid, selfish males. I hope Sesshoumaru gets the chance to kick some ass. And the icing on the cake!? Sesshoumaru can openly acknowledge Kagome and Auria can have her man! Yes! This action and happy outcome whore is more than pleased. I think I just died and went to heaven. And to think, I wasn't quite sure that the fic could hold my interest. Now I'm wondering about Inuyasha. Didn't Sesshoumaru send out a messenger to get him? If so, I'm wondering what will happen with him. There is all that 'protector' stuff to consider. I sure hope that there is some action there, too. That would be awesome! I think I may have to re-read the fic to see if I have missed anything. Heheh. Awesome job on that chapter! Can't wait for the next!
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Reviewed By: redrose [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2008 13:11 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you thank you x100 for the amazing update it's just so much fun to read and a huge thanks for killing off that bitch Gina she really was getting on my nerves and the whole battle scene was great can't wait for the next chapter so please hurry before I explode. :p
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Reviewed By: halfbreed saiyan goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2008 03:24 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been sitting on the edge of my seat with this story. It's well thought out and keeps you guessing when will happen next. I truelly thought that when Kagome first appeared in the arena she would go all super miko and kick some ass, but then you threw me for a loop and proved me wrong. Very naughty! I think Sess should bow down to the greatness that is female power. Hehehe!
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Reviewed By: kagomaye101 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2008 23:08 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would give you 100 but it only goes up to ten. But WOW i love this fic i finished it in 2 hrs more or less. it's G.R.E.A.T .
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Reviewed By: SKnFS [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2008 21:45 PST
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this is absolutely hilarious. I never would have been able to make Kagome this devious... well after a lot of work but man are you putting a lot of thought behind this. And sessho's mom? I love her
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Reviewed By: imanewme [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2008 18:57 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Great read! I love how you handled the girl fight. Kagome is brilliantly done. Nice. Very nice.
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Reviewed By: FluffyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2008 15:44 PST
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ya!! oh this is hilarious. i was laughing the entire time. *squirms* can't wait for the next chapter. FL
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Reviewed By: Ladydot On: January 23, 2008 15:00 PST
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hahaha!! oh i love it. Kagomes portrayal is brilliantly done! and everyone else wow. This is a wonderful story. Everything is so well put together and it really catches your attention at every turn. And the smut...you know all of us hentai's love it! So don't stop with it. It makes our own lives bearable...lol
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Reviewed By: brainshake [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2008 14:17 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh come on... Not another one! How many more great stories have you written (or are writing at the moment)? Now I have only one of the Halloween stories and Sins of the Father left to read, then I think I've read all your stories. And let me say, I just can't get enough! I'm officially addicted to you and your smutty-ness! I think I'm gonna have to be your personal stalker now, throwing smut-infused popcorns to feed your muse with. :D
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Reviewed By: Maddie50 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2008 00:36 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the way Kagome is always thinking. Great idea to turn a dangerous situation into a win-win for both herself and Auria, with Auria thinking it would be to her advantage. Hopefully Sesshoumaru becomes free, Auria could take another mate, and Kagome gets to live at least--possibly more.
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Reviewed By: Yashaslove On: January 07, 2008 11:21 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is so much fun! I love Kagome's character. So often she is depicted as a bumbling clumsy apologetic idiot. How fun to finally read a well told story where she is a determined skilled warrior...as the Shikon Miko should develop to...but also displays other strong characterists that logically follow what the chosen gaurdian would exhibit, ie. intelligence, compassion, Sesshoumaru is interesting. He was dominated...hmmm...like to know how he is feeling about that. Thank you for the update...I check everyday.
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2008 17:40 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow! This is a great story. Kagome is so intelligent. I hope that everything works out for Auria. She has been a wonderful host, and is very sweet. That Gina needs to be killed, slowly and painfully. Kagome sure does make friends quickly. I'm having a hard time keeping up with everyone. Heh, an excuse to read it again. Well written! Sorry the review sucks, but I do look forward to the next chapter. ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: Laydot On: January 06, 2008 15:28 PST
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Go kagome!! Time to take the competition out indeed! and i do say the poetry effect was brilliant in the last chapter. But this chapter....boy i loved it! now i can't wait for fluffy and all the other lords to see how beautiful Kagome looks! Waiting for a little talk about that hopefully in the next chapter. Maybe as she is competeting against Auria the lords can say how much she looks like a lady and all.. hmm i'll have to wait and see! till next time
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Reviewed By: inu_luver_2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2008 13:11 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was another great chapter! Thank you for the update and I can't wait to find out what will happen next.!.!
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Reviewed By: Yashaslove On: January 05, 2008 23:59 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has been an exceptionally eenjoyable rread. I have been reading and checking for updates daily but am always so nervous about reviews. I am waiting to see what happens next...obviously the youkai have exceptional ssenses - surely eeveryone wwill recognize KKagome's aand Sesshoumaru's ccombined sscent. Love the romantic drama...anyway Just wanted you to know that the effort is appreciated. Looking forward to each update...thanks
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