| "Vying for Dominance" Reviews/Comments [ 205 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ladydot On: December 17, 2007 12:46 PST
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Oh i loved it! and fluffy's reply! oh my..now that would have just turned me on so much. That dark seductive look while he said that..oh your good. very very good. his answer was perfect as well. brilliant! and i loved Shaeda! i hope she is in the story more. She's great. and maybe she will help kagome and fluff-a-nutter be together!! i can only hope. till next time ^^
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Reviewed By: Tana-san On: December 17, 2007 01:03 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow, this went better then I had anticipated. I had myself prepared for Kagome being used and ridiculed and possibly her getting injured due to her fiery temper but she came off as highly intelligent and repectful (but not to the point of butt kissing)and well in control of her actions, as well as her words. It was packed full of entertaining and intriguing action. I loved each and every new character as the youkai council and community gatherings are rarily written about and when they are most try to skimp on the who's who and mainly just use characters that are of necessity. Bravo for going the distance and creating others who are not just the four territorial leaders who would not dare to cause this type of fighting over one miko. These guys had alot of hatred and fight in them and you gave Kagome the chance to prove her worth and intelligence to all of them. I also adored that you "stole" Shaeda from your other fic. She is worth using again and again. The more you use your original characters in other fics make it easier to believe that Sesshoumaru does have a life other than Jaken, Rin, and Ah-Un. It gives reason why so many people who hear of his name fear him even though they never saw or met him. And that is all I should say for now. I'm off to bed. "Violation of Honor", "Merry Christmas, Mr. Taishou" and YOU all had a new posting for me. I am in a very happy place right now. I thank you sooo very much from the bottom of my heart. You girls actually kept my heart a beating in a very good way which according to my family AND heart doctor is just what is ordered. I'll peek in tomorrow night. TA, Jen
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Reviewed By: FayeMegan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2007 22:12 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay, too many OC's now and I can't concentrate on the story.
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Reviewed By: Maddie50 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2007 18:54 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
There is something about this story that I just love. I admit I am terribly frustrated right now as things are not going too well. However, it looks like Kagome might be able to talk her way out of this one. I thought her speech to the lords about the bitch who she had fought previously and defeated, was great. I'm sorry I have not reviewed every chapter, but I am diligently following the tale. Jean.
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Reviewed By: Ladydot On: December 15, 2007 05:56 PST
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haha that last part with kagome whinning was hilarious! At least she got a couple of the lords on her side. Shes the only person that could ever do that lol. Another great chapter though! and i can't wait for more.
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Reviewed By: FluffyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2007 04:58 PST
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lol. good chap, waiting soooo impatiently for the next one! FL
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Reviewed By: Tana-san On: December 14, 2007 21:36 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Did I read correctly???You're going to be giving us some more of your oh so delicious and thirt quenching lemonade??? Oh, Yay!!! opps, almost got away from the review with just the mere mention of your citrus-y treat. Kagome wouldn't be Kagome if she didn't trip and fall or put her foot in her mouth by saying too much. But hey, it's not easy when you're smack in the middle of pure unwanted danger. Oh and it's a good thing Sesshoumaru is so lightning fast or she would have been some creatures lunch. Great going. Until the next posting. Jen
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Reviewed By: sesshys_jaded_samuri [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2007 21:17 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like how you pulled that off.. though I can't wait to see what happens when she joins them at the table... I am glad that you decided to post this up on MediaMiner, since SingleSpark is down... I really hate waiting for updates on this....
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Title: ...
Reviewed By: Niece [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2007 17:13 PST
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AHHH! please update as soon as possible. the suspense is absolutely killing me. ughhh. >_<
but i am really, really loving this story. i can't wait to see what happens.
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Reviewed By: The Assasin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2007 16:10 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ahem... I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT!!!!! im sorry it took me so long to review it but...well that is besides the point. This story is amazing and im actually surprised that you have only 20 reviews. I have one bone to pick with you though: The Cliffies!!!! I mean, I just finished reading "Please Lords" and i really want to kno what Kagome will say!!! This fanfic is completely entertaining and captivating. They say don't judge a book by it's cover but even your TITLE is interesting. *licks lips* that was some impressive lemonade. Enjoyment factor:20...yupp... *snaps out of daydream* hehe... You can check around but i really dont review unless the story is amazing and quite frankly this is!!! For my patience's sake, update soon!!!!!! Tieka =)
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Reviewed By: FluffyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2007 04:23 PST
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oh you are just so wrong for leaving me on a cliffy like that! ;D i liked the chap (aside from the cliffy) plz update soon! FL
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Reviewed By: Tana-san On: December 14, 2007 03:51 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent...now she's got herself in quite a jam. I agree with her over the supposed weapon. What youkai in their right mind would give a miko a weapon to use? Especially a bow and arrow? Promise me the silver bitch will die by Kagome's hand? And how is Sesshoumaru supposed to help her...or is he even permitted to fight for her? Or maybe his beast is so full of the lust for blood that he wishes for his miko to prove her worth? Ahhh the curiousity to leave me in. TTFN Jen
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Reviewed By: Ladydot On: December 14, 2007 03:38 PST
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*gasp* oh you just had to leave us there! it was getting to the really really gooey center. Man now i have to wait...*poute* but once again brilliant! The battle royal was impressive i liked it though. you didn't stay on in it to much but didn't leave it unattended. Till next time ^^
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Reviewed By: Tana-san On: December 13, 2007 02:19 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahh, let the battle begin...it will lead to the battle of Kagome learning how to reach Sesshoumaru's mind and hopefully before she is put up on the proverbial chopping block. Males had such disgusting ways of procurring females in those times. Whether they fought for them or made the females fight for the "honor" is so demeaning. Even putting them up for sale like one does cattle...I only hope that Sesshoumaru got some kind of ESP gift when he tasted her unique blood and well...I'm not writing this am I? But I do like that kind of plot device, it has it's uses in a clinch. I noticed that ASS is back in the game this evening. I'm glad because it's difficult having to filter through all the fics here as they don't have categories like AFF.net or FF.net. Many writers here don't say who the pairings are making for a long search if you're just looking for a Sess/Kag fic. OK enough said. You're probably getting annoyed with all my ramblings every time I write. Hugs, Jen
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Title: i like it...
Reviewed By: little_red On: December 12, 2007 17:30 PST
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so yeah, i'm a little confused... like, i dont know the number of the chapter but. youve got the one with sesshouamru roaring or wahtever and running off, right after kagome screamed... and well, i assumed... corse thats probably why im wrong. either way, i had assumed that he was going after kagome... i mean didnt he and inu yasha hear her scream??? i dont know... maybe i just need to go back and read it again... either way, its a good story, i love reading it. you should continue writting, cause this ones a good one...
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