| "Vying for Dominance" Reviews/Comments [ 205 ] |
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Reviewed By: Yashaslove On: January 07, 2008 11:21 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is so much fun! I love Kagome's character. So often she is depicted as a bumbling clumsy apologetic idiot. How fun to finally read a well told story where she is a determined skilled warrior...as the Shikon Miko should develop to...but also displays other strong characterists that logically follow what the chosen gaurdian would exhibit, ie. intelligence, compassion, Sesshoumaru is interesting. He was dominated...hmmm...like to know how he is feeling about that. Thank you for the update...I check everyday.
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2008 17:40 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow! This is a great story. Kagome is so intelligent. I hope that everything works out for Auria. She has been a wonderful host, and is very sweet. That Gina needs to be killed, slowly and painfully. Kagome sure does make friends quickly. I'm having a hard time keeping up with everyone. Heh, an excuse to read it again. Well written! Sorry the review sucks, but I do look forward to the next chapter. ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: Laydot On: January 06, 2008 15:28 PST
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Go kagome!! Time to take the competition out indeed! and i do say the poetry effect was brilliant in the last chapter. But this chapter....boy i loved it! now i can't wait for fluffy and all the other lords to see how beautiful Kagome looks! Waiting for a little talk about that hopefully in the next chapter. Maybe as she is competeting against Auria the lords can say how much she looks like a lady and all.. hmm i'll have to wait and see! till next time
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Reviewed By: inu_luver_2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2008 13:11 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was another great chapter! Thank you for the update and I can't wait to find out what will happen next.!.!
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Reviewed By: Yashaslove On: January 05, 2008 23:59 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has been an exceptionally eenjoyable rread. I have been reading and checking for updates daily but am always so nervous about reviews. I am waiting to see what happens next...obviously the youkai have exceptional ssenses - surely eeveryone wwill recognize KKagome's aand Sesshoumaru's ccombined sscent. Love the romantic drama...anyway Just wanted you to know that the effort is appreciated. Looking forward to each update...thanks
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Reviewed By: Maddie50 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2008 00:02 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The energy you can generate between these two characters jumps off the pages (I printed them). I think it is fantastic that Sesshoumaru cannot resist Kagome no matter what the logical part of his brain is saying to him. The danger of the situation adds to the flavor. Somehow it is so satisfying that the incredible looking female inuyoukai is less desirable. Perhaps that is a rooting for the underdog (no pun intended) kind of thing. I especially enjoy the fantasy/mystical element you add to your intimacy scenes between Sesshoumaru and Kagome--the interacting of Miko and Youki powers. To my knowledge, no one has quite described the event in such a spectacular way. Jean
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Reviewed By: Niece [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2008 04:38 PST
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you're damn right. what a way to kick off the new year! whew. i must confess: this story has quickly become my OBSESSION. i actually squeal like a goddamn little girl when you update. that's a good thing, don't worry :] keep 'em coming... please?
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Title: katie.ladyofthenghtsky@gmail.com
Reviewed By: Ladydot On: January 03, 2008 03:57 PST
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A Happy New Year indeed!! This was beyond brilliant and so sweet. He really gave kagome something even more powerful to fight over. Since she is reassured by him in the best way. And I'm curious as to what he will do to make sure she either fits in or leaves safety. Since i know if Inuyasha comes to get her all hell will probably break thru. Interesting. But keep up the great work. ^^
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2007 21:00 PST
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Oh, the intrigue! I sat and read through the whole thing! I can't express how thrilled I am. I do hope that you continue the story. Of course, there is the lemon, then the angst, and now the political genius thrown into the mix. I'm sure that Inuyasha won't be able to claim that he is Kagome's champion and then she will be in a very bad position. Sesshoumaru can be a cold sonofabitch. I love Kagome's last retort. She would rather dress in rags than be his whore. Oh wow. You have done such a wonderful job. Please, do continue. ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: FluffyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2007 13:10 PST
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i like the speed of ur updates. plz do keep up the speed!! ooh...what is sessy gonna do? how is he gonna make it up to kags? hmm... FL
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Reviewed By: FluffyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2007 13:10 PST
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i like the speed of ur updates. plz do keep up the speed!! ooh...what is sessy gonna do? how is he gonna make it up to kags? hmm... FL
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Reviewed By: Ladydot On: December 28, 2007 04:57 PST
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AHHHHHH! yeah we couldn't leave out the little temper tantrum now! because we all had to see her jealous so then fluffy can make it all better..or try to. stubborn dog he needs a pincer collar..and a fluffy pink tu-tu. mwahaha but aside from my rantings magnificent! Another wonderful chapter that has me just drooling for more!
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Reviewed By: FluffyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2007 15:50 PST
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oh thanks for the update. now i just wish i could read your mind for the next chapter. lol FL
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Reviewed By: Ladydot On: December 27, 2007 05:14 PST
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Haha brilliant! I can't wait till the next chapter.
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Title: i screamed...
Reviewed By: little_red On: December 19, 2007 17:13 PST
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seriously... i screamed when i saw that there werent any more chapters for me to read... your story has very quickly become my addiction...
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