| "Vying for Dominance" Reviews/Comments [ 205 ] |
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Title: so good!
Reviewed By: oneofurreaders On: January 29, 2008 11:48 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is completely thrilling. The characters and plot are great. Please countinue your story; it sucks you in so that you want to know what happens next.
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Reviewed By: SKnFS [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2008 06:25 PST
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Dun dun dun. Oh yay. Things are going to get more interesting now that Inuyasha's soon going to be among the gathering... you know this kinda reminds me of The Highlander. There can be only one lol sorry anyway looking forward to the next chapter and most especially Shaeda teaching Inuyasha manners... le gasp!
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Reviewed By: Ladydot On: January 29, 2008 03:46 PST
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AHHAHA brilliant my dear! Insanely so. Your writing is like magic gliding on the wind. It holds you to every word and every batted breath. And i do say your plot is to die for. I can't wait to see what will occur next! hopefully another update soon. till then!! ^^
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Reviewed By: SKnFS [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2008 18:32 PST
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Squee! Kagome is a gracious winner and Sesshomaru has lightened up just a tad bit. It's good how you work with devoloping characters, so many people keep them the exact same or just jump into the change that it doesn't make much sense. By the way I like your little ending. *walks away singing Ding dong the....*
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Reviewed By: lockedincar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2008 16:56 PST
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that was nicely resolved
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2008 14:45 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gasp! I am breathless! That was fucking spectacular! You have no idea how excited I am. Everything was so well performed. You had so many involved in conflict, so many undertones and subtleties, surprise protocol. The match wasn't thrown by either party. It was true to the spirit of the contest. There was the cute part...pink panther, mellow yellow... LOL THE BITCH IS DEAD! You didn't have Kagome be proud and vindictive. You had her true to nature, sad that she had to kill, even though she had no choice. And the fight! Your descriptions were so extraordinary. Ooooh, that mother person really pisses me off, Medosuki, or something like that. She needs to be bitch slapped. I love Takked and all of your characters actually. You breathe life into them. Stupid, selfish males. I hope Sesshoumaru gets the chance to kick some ass. And the icing on the cake!? Sesshoumaru can openly acknowledge Kagome and Auria can have her man! Yes! This action and happy outcome whore is more than pleased. I think I just died and went to heaven. And to think, I wasn't quite sure that the fic could hold my interest. Now I'm wondering about Inuyasha. Didn't Sesshoumaru send out a messenger to get him? If so, I'm wondering what will happen with him. There is all that 'protector' stuff to consider. I sure hope that there is some action there, too. That would be awesome! I think I may have to re-read the fic to see if I have missed anything. Heheh. Awesome job on that chapter! Can't wait for the next!
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Reviewed By: redrose [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2008 13:11 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you thank you x100 for the amazing update it's just so much fun to read and a huge thanks for killing off that bitch Gina she really was getting on my nerves and the whole battle scene was great can't wait for the next chapter so please hurry before I explode. :p
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Reviewed By: halfbreed saiyan goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2008 03:24 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been sitting on the edge of my seat with this story. It's well thought out and keeps you guessing when will happen next. I truelly thought that when Kagome first appeared in the arena she would go all super miko and kick some ass, but then you threw me for a loop and proved me wrong. Very naughty! I think Sess should bow down to the greatness that is female power. Hehehe!
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Reviewed By: kagomaye101 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2008 23:08 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would give you 100 but it only goes up to ten. But WOW i love this fic i finished it in 2 hrs more or less. it's G.R.E.A.T .
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Reviewed By: SKnFS [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2008 21:45 PST
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this is absolutely hilarious. I never would have been able to make Kagome this devious... well after a lot of work but man are you putting a lot of thought behind this. And sessho's mom? I love her
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Reviewed By: imanewme [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2008 18:57 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Great read! I love how you handled the girl fight. Kagome is brilliantly done. Nice. Very nice.
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Reviewed By: FluffyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2008 15:44 PST
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ya!! oh this is hilarious. i was laughing the entire time. *squirms* can't wait for the next chapter. FL
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Title: katie.ladyofthenghtsky@gmail.com
Reviewed By: Ladydot On: January 23, 2008 15:00 PST
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hahaha!! oh i love it. Kagomes portrayal is brilliantly done! and everyone else wow. This is a wonderful story. Everything is so well put together and it really catches your attention at every turn. And the smut...you know all of us hentai's love it! So don't stop with it. It makes our own lives bearable...lol
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Reviewed By: brainshake [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2008 14:17 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh come on... Not another one! How many more great stories have you written (or are writing at the moment)? Now I have only one of the Halloween stories and Sins of the Father left to read, then I think I've read all your stories. And let me say, I just can't get enough! I'm officially addicted to you and your smutty-ness! I think I'm gonna have to be your personal stalker now, throwing smut-infused popcorns to feed your muse with. :D
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Reviewed By: Maddie50 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2008 00:36 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the way Kagome is always thinking. Great idea to turn a dangerous situation into a win-win for both herself and Auria, with Auria thinking it would be to her advantage. Hopefully Sesshoumaru becomes free, Auria could take another mate, and Kagome gets to live at least--possibly more.
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