| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] |
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2009 16:23 PST
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Oh my gosh, did the paparazzi find out, something happen to Marvin? What happened?! Oh wow, what a cliff hanger :D! Hope everything works out in your favor with your family issues, Sue!!!
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2009 15:55 PST
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Something happened, didn't it? Marvin's plane crashed or something happened to Evan in the Hospital... You're going on a two-week no-writing spree again, aren't you? Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2009 14:53 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh no, oh no, oh no. She was right, something was wrong. Was it an atempt on his live? Someone like Evan is likely to get his share of those, being the son of the Tai. Still, he's pretty strong. He did say Bone was losing his edge though. I hope it's not something too bad.
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2009 13:06 PST
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Switching... toe-tags.... *knows she shouldnt' laugh but is hard-pressed not to* Loved the little Evan-Val moment there, tho. I get the feeling that Marvin the Martian's gonna screw SOEMTHING up, big-time...
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2009 12:33 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter... I was REALLY wondering where you were going to go with that one... those two are such fools... Evan is such a sweet heart though... so nice about going to see the kids...
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Reviewed By: darkangel05 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2009 11:05 PST
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I cant understand how Evan and Diet were having a conversation about Evan's and how they smell with a straight face on. Then again me and my brother do it all the time so I guess its not that different. Im so excited about the next chapter. I just cant wait to see if Valerie will start to compare Evan and Marvin. Also I wonder if Evan will follow Valerie everywhere, sort of like how Cain followed Gin around on her date? Awesome chapter Sue and cant wait for the next one to come out! ;)
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Reviewed By: WhisperingWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2009 10:53 PST
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I like this, the wild side vs. the rationale. It's a good chapter. Can't wait for the next. TTFN ~Wolf
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2009 10:09 PST
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LMFAO! Oh my gosh, that fart comments had me laughing for about five minutes! You know...I love that Rehab song, should have clicked more with me why you had it in there but it didn't! Oh man, I love Dieter and Evan together! That's was too good!
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Reviewed By: Inusbabe [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2009 10:03 PST
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More like Tweedledum and Tweedledumber... Anyways another great chapter and sorry to see it end...
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Reviewed By: xbitternessx [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2009 08:35 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just thought I'd leave another review, since I wasn't sure if I'd left one for this installment yet, but it's my favorite to date. (I think I say that about every one, lol.) Also, the use of the Rehab lyrics was great; so Evan. If you didn't already know, though, I thought you'd find it interesting that the song was actually on a much older album, released in 2000, and was called "Sittin' At A Bar." I think maybe two words were changed for the newer version, but it's essentially the same. I like the older version better, and I thought maybe if you liked the band, you'd want to give it a listen. If not, sorry to bother you. =)
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2009 07:22 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Only Evan and Dieter would pull something like that. I would have killed them too. Ha ha ha! I was laughing the entire time! I don't know what's funnier, that they thought that Evan folding up the body bag "nice and neat" was important, or that Dieter figured it would be perfectly fine to switch toe tags. Poor V... And she's spending the day with Mavin...um...Marvin tomorrow. Evan's likely to come up with some excuse to see her tomorrow. He's not gonna let her go just like that. I hope not anyway. Thanks for the update.
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2009 06:58 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
They are such a pair - definitly Tweedledee and tweedledum! I loved the fact they broke in to return it too. :)
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Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2009 06:46 PST
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Diet makes me laugh lol. "She already hates you I don't want her to hate me too!!" XD I love the random adventures they have, even funnier that V insists on a third go at the morgue XD bah ha Evan is rubbing off on her.
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Reviewed By: AtamaHitoride [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2009 06:28 PST
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Oh Dieter... lol Proffesional help may be required for that one. STUPID MARVIN!!
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: smurf_x3 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2009 22:34 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EVAN is a retard....he ruined it with V. she actually wanted to hang with him then he says....its just a BJ.....WOW....stupid man
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