| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] |
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Reviewed By: CandyEars [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2009 11:56 PST
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AAAHHHHHH!! You are evil cliffhanger queen today! Hope your things work out for you, but did you have to leave it like that!?!? OMG! Hope Evan didn't do something stupid after playing for the kids. My heart is even racing! *sigh* - Now to distract myself with "real" work... ick... To the reviewer about a plane crash - kinda ironic since it happened yesterday - but at least everyone survived! Yeah! Poor V though.. she just never gets a break does she? Can't wait to read what happens next! Thank you for your wonderful writing as always Sue!
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Reviewed By: Inusbabe [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2009 07:27 PST
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NOOOOOOOOOOO!!! Oh wait was that Marvin's plane that crashed in the Hudson?
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2009 06:01 PST
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You write that evil cliffy AND THEN SAY THAT YOU WON'T BE BACK FOR A COUPLE OF WEEKS?!?!?!?!?!? EVIL WRITING QUEEN! So who's dead/maimed? Crap, if Evan gets into any more trouble... or if it's Marvin... I odn't like him, but hell, BLOOD...
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2009 05:40 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope whatever it is works out for you darlin' you've left us on an awesome cliffhanger!
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Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2009 04:34 PST
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GAH!!!!! this is gonna drive me nuts until you update next XD I hope everything is alright D8 real life comes before internet and us not real life people eh? XD
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2009 23:32 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastic!!!!!!!!!!! Loved the last part... Evan is just a naughty puppy... lol (aww isn't he adorable???)
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Reviewed By: smurf_x3 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2009 22:28 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! what happened?!?! What did she see on the teli?! i dont like cliff hangers....T-T next chapter please? =3
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Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2009 21:21 PST
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that is one hell of a cliffhanger. what happened???? was evan on t.v.? did marvins plane crash and go boom (no surviviors)? gaaahhhh now im positively agonizing over the wait for the next chapter. hope everything works out at home. update when u can. my best wishes for u ~OB
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Reviewed By: angelyami [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2009 20:53 PST
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OMG! What happened!? Evil, EVILLLL, cliff-hanger!
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Reviewed By: lilswtheart9811 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2009 19:14 PST
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this might sound harsh...but I really don't like Marvin I get the feeling he's cheating on her so uhhhh I hope something horrid happened to him and not to Evan
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Reviewed By: lilswtheart9811 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2009 19:12 PST
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EVIL CLIFFIE!!!!!!!!! *horrified face*
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Title: NNNOOOOOOO!!!!
Reviewed By: DonthatemecuzImbeautiful [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2009 18:27 PST
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AHHHHH! Oh my GOD, WHAT HAPPENED?!?!??! I am seriously hyperventilating over here. If something happened to Evan...or Dieter...or THE KIDS?!?!? AAAAAAHHHHHHH! Please don't leave me with a cliffie like this! Ah well, I hope you get things settled at home. Hope all is well ^-^
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Title: TWO!!!!
Reviewed By: Titiana [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2009 16:44 PST
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You posted two chapters!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PPPPPPPPPPAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRTTTTTTTTTTYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!
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Reviewed By: Chase65 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2009 16:41 PST
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Since the plane landing in to the Hudson is just 4 hours old, my 1st thought is Marvin's plane went down. But I don't think you'd let V off the hook that easy so I am sure he is alive but injured. Or I could be completely wrong! lol! I hope all goes well for the next couple of weeks, and look forward to the next installment!
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Reviewed By: AtamaHitoride [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2009 16:38 PST
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omg?!?! WHAT OMG?! What!?! CLIFFY FROM HELLLLL! lol
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