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| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] | | Pages (158): [ « ‹ 109 110 111 112 113 114 115 116 117 118 119 120 121 122 123 124 125 126 127 128 › » ] | Reviewed By: darkangel05 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2009 10:55 PST
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Who knew that Zel Roka touched so many people with his music. I especially like the fact that mostly children showed up instead of adults. That was pretty cool. I would also like to know where Evan is. Is he with his family or at a hospital. If a hospital then obvisouly its a youkai hospital. Maybe thas why Valerie wasnt allowed in? Because she's human??? Anyways awesome chapter Sue and cant wait for the next one to come out! Update soon please!!!
| Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2009 10:52 PST
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Wow, I didn't expect Evan to get shot! I'm surprised that Valerie hasn't tried to call Maddy for information. Then again she's concentrating more on finding out where he is.
| Title: ...No...
Reviewed By: DonthatemecuzImbeautiful [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2009 09:55 PST
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OMG when I checked my e-mail this mornign and saw that you had updated I couldn't believe my eyes. I mean, it hasn't even been two weeks and you're gracing us with your presence again. Then, I started reading. This was singularly one of the most powerful one of your chapters that I have ever read in any of your Purity stories. I don't know how but it just...spoke to me. Thank you so much for this and I can't wait to see how the rest of this plays out. Evan-Zel-cannot be dead. Poor V :( Can't wait for the next update
| Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2009 07:36 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH...MY...GOD! I want to say that you're really, REALLY mean, but I know you're not. But still, I'm with V. Where is he? He's gotta be at the family mansion, right? And we all know he can't be dead. He's youkai for crying out loud. GAH! You have to give us another chapter soon, or I may go mad. Thank you for this one.
| Reviewed By: AtamaHitoride [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2009 06:32 PST
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Oh no!
| Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2009 05:48 PST
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gah! GAH! GAHH!!!1!!!! Although we know a gunshot shouldn't kill Evan, V doesn't know he is hanyou she must be so emotionally distressed (maybe this incident will make her realize that she loves him? 8DD) V needs to call Maddie!!!!! Maddie will know how to contact his family ;____;
| Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2009 05:28 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My god ness poor Valerie thats horrible - so morbid. I can't wait to see what happens next.
| Title: Chapter 42: More on the life of Dieter...and Marvin's back. And, yes, you DID nearly give me a coronary at the end.
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2009 13:45 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What can we say about Dieter? Dude is just...like an onion--many layers. Wow, makes me wanna know so much more about his life and hope so much to continue to see him in future Purities. He's so funny! He's also got a past that could make one hell of a movie. I SAW it as I read it and wanted to hug a fictional character--yeah, I DEFINITELY relate with Diet. What can we say about Marvin the Martian? (forgive me--the name sticks, Sue) He's so comfy and brotherly and boy-next-door-ish...ya just wanna keep him in you closet for emergency cuddling when you're down or to have a buddy nearby to watch Lifetime with when your girls are out of reach. He's SO...comfortable. It's obviously what V can handle, Marvin's personality, but she's so Jung Ho in so many ways that I think a marriage with them will give new meaning to the phrase "Familiarity breeds contempt". I hope they stay friends. I can see Evan being okay with him and even trying to hook him up with some of his female associates in an act of goodwill--with most likely tickle me senseless, though I could be surprised--all conjecture, of course. What can I say about that evil cliffhanger? I'm pinching you in my mind, Sue. LOL! This was chock full of insight and I honestly read it more than once--ESPECIALLY the Dieter portions. I learned more about the mate bond, too, so, thanks!
| Title: Chapter 41: Poor V...
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2009 09:41 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I laugh as I shake my head. Oh, Evan. Oh, Diet. Oh my God...you two DIDN'T! Then again, that shouldn't surprise me. But, learning all I have about Dieter has really shed lots of light on his personality. Some things I guessed wrong and others I thought "I KNEW it!" And, as always, it's so...entertaining seeing Evan as the voice of reason--seems Diet's pretty incorrigable (sp?), too. OMG, STILL laughing at the thought of viewing a work of cats screwing. GAWD, your imagination is HILARIOUS, Sue! Many much-needed laughs! This one had me smacking my 4head in commiseration. Poor V indeed.
| Title: Chapter 40: V tickles me--Diet, too!
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2009 09:32 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, can I just say? I've been going "Ah-oom" and "Nam Myoho Renge Kyo" since reading this chapter. More interesting than watching V heckle Evan is her pondering the man who is Zel Roka/Evan. I love her inner thoughts on him and watching her go down her menntal checklist of assumed flwas vs new discoveries. Also, you broght Diet back! **glomps Sue** I love him--he's so random, odd and creative! Outside of his leanings to all things morbid, he's so much like me! But, of my...Did Evan say he was getting bored? Oh shit...
| Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2009 05:31 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just wanted to tell you, you misspelt Sydney (it was Sidney) in chapter 71 of Purity 8. Please update soon... I'm VERY BORED and I am currently while at home, reading Purity (4 then 8, now I think I will go to the first one...) but I will do that tomorrow as I REALLY should be going to sleep I have a University meeting to go to... (not that I have been going to bed early recently... been reading your stories again too much lol. Oh and how old is Evan and what time is it (Purity 9) set in???
| Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2009 18:56 PST
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cliffy : ( update soon!!! i wanna know what happened
| Title: Oh, hell...it didn't go through? Okay, Chapter 38:
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2009 13:36 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, just the awe and sense of wonder V went through in this chapter alone had me all fluffed out. I love how she's so comfy in his space and unconsciously leans into Evan and how he occasionally let's it slide without mentioning it. Have I told you, lately, Sue, how much his Yoikai Voice tickles me? Sometimes I can't figure out if he's a voice of reason or a bad influence. Either way, laugh-nation! Oh, the bagpipe part? "'O 'o hell, okah"...forever will tickle me when I think of it. And, of course it turns him on. **rolls eyes** And V's jealousy is so cute and telling--mad about the kitty that never was, hon? Well, don't. Zelicious is all yours, honey bunch! Great read! Sorry the review didn't go through, Sue. It was much longer than this but stayed on the same vein. God bless you in your endeavors and I hope things clear up soon! **bear hug**
| Title: Chapter 39: The chapter that made me go
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2009 12:09 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, can I just say, Olive is just glomp-worthy! Oh, I want me an Olive squishy with purr and cuddle action, Sue! Bailey's adorable in his little boy ways, trying to hog all the attention. See the cheesy grin? But, man, V's got some issues with children, obviously and I'm more than curious about the origin(s). I can't BE-LIEVE she lost her top (though, to think of the story...well, I guess it was a long time in coming)--oh, I giggled like a nerd! And the melting heart feeling of Evan and Olive...gotta tell ya, Sue, made me reminiscent of when my neice was a little one--too precious indeed! Great chapter!
| Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2009 11:58 PST
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OMG! A terribly beautiful cliffhanger we've been left with. I have a feeling that either Marvin's plane crashed, or something happened to Evan OR something happened to one of her family members. I'm leaning more towards the first two though. I hope it's nothing serious... OOH!!! This is going to kill me! BUT, I hope that everything with you works out well. I can't wait for your next chapter! ~MSMND
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