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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2008 18:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Poor uncle Souta! But...this chapter has me curious on a lot. Like the well, Envy, the fate of the brothers.. You are too good, woman! The suspense! I hope you enjoy Japan! I'm sure I'll still be teetering here on the edge of my seat waiting for what is sure to be an interesting next chapter by the time you get back! Till then, lol! :D ~Amber
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2008 15:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice! The chase was really exciting and I'm happy to see that the Inu-tachi and co have finally arrived on the scene! Now let's hope that Uncle Sota didn't just kill them all with that very Roy-esque move he pulled at the end -__- Oh! And I see you got nominated for Best Crossover at the IYFG awards! Congratulations! I'm deff gonna try and second it come the 14th! Great chapter, good luck, and until next update! ~Amber
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2008 14:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh...my...GOD! Best chapter yet! Kagome reaaallly pulled her own in this one and it was cool to see the girl power. Plus, Kouga didn't die! And the inu-gang arrived at the castle! Can't wait till the next chapter! Great job on this one :) ~Amber
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2008 15:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So I'm reading this and thinking "Yes! An update!" then by the end I'm like "Nooo...Kouga!" Awesome chapter! But I take it this is where the evil-ness begins? And, oddly...I'm looking forward to it ;) Till next update! ~Amber
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2008 12:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL! Some Ed-Inu comic relief, Kouga showing up, and a taste of a little action scene at the end...made for one great chapter! Nice! And Uncle Souta is learning flame alchemy? VERY cool. I love the subtle similarities between him and Roy. It's a lot like whats done in canon between Kag and Kik. Loved the update. Till next chapter ;) ~Amber
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2008 23:58 CDT
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>=] . . . still think the metal bikini... chains. *shakes head up and down* . . she's back!
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2008 00:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, so you aren't making this easy for her. Good thing Kagome's clever. I would've thought her only plans would be made towards escaping, but reclaiming the jewel fragments that Kikyou gave to Naraku is just brilliant. I wonder how Envy'll react when he finds out that Al really isn't dead...AND how Kaggie plans to sneak/fight her way past a bunch of demons, a shapeshifting dragon, climb down a mountain, and return to her friends all in one piece. Again...NOT easy. Not easy at all. Loved the chapter! Till next update ;) ~Amber
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2008 23:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooh, very cool. Uncle Souta is learning alchemy! Hopefully they're not doing anything that'll mess up the jewel, though. That could cause some problems in the future. Can't wait to see what'll happen when/if Sesshomaru comes into the picture. And Naraku of course. Any chance they'll run into Kouga? Oh! And then theres Kaggie who still needs to be rescued/rescue herself. Loved the chapter! Till next update! ~Amber
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2008 20:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are so EVIL! I'm sitting at my computer screen despairing over the fact that Inu might die...and then good ol' Uncle Souta comes up with Kagome's jewel shards. I'm guessing those fell off when Envy tore her shirt? Anyway, I'm glad they found an alternative. Now Inu might be able to fully restore his youki and Al will be fit enough to pursue Kagome some more(and kick some Envy ass...or whatever Kaggie leaves of it, lol). I don't see him taking the news of her capture too lightly, though. So the reaction should be pretty interesting. This is really only one of maybe 2 or 3 FMA fanfics I've ever read so I haven't seen much about how he's portrayed but based on the series you definetely have him in character. And I agree..in both the manga and anime he's hinted towards a more stubborn, temperamental side of himself that rivals even Ed's. He just knows how to keep it in check better. At the beginning of the FMA movie too he proved to be a capable alchemist as well and even knows how to transmute parts of his soul into inanimate objects..it'd be pretty cool if he did that here. Loved the chapter! And nice save, though I'm sure there'll be more near-deaths, and as you mentioned, deaths in later chapters that'll have me biting my nails all over again. So evil...lol ;) ~Amber
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2008 17:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Inu's dedication is AMAZING but I really hope he doesn't die! As for Kagome rescuing herself, I'm all for that! Most fanfics make her so helpless like she's some damsel in distress but it's not like that in the anime or manga. She is the reincarnation of a great and powerful priestess and has quite a few of her own kickass moves. Let's hope she uses them ;) Till next update! ~Amber
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2008 22:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooh...now Ed hints towards some of his insecurities. Interesting. But he better hope InuYasha and the gang don't find out that Envy attacked them because of him or else he'll really be in trouble. I can see Yash turning Tessaiga on him, rusted or transformed, especially since Kagome is involved...AGAIN. But hopefully she'll be okay. Sneaky little Al...asking her out on that date. As for the fight scene...WOW! I remembered thinking halfway through "When is Sango gonna hit him?" and then, literally, the next sentence that I read was of her screaming "Hiraikotsu!" And that was worthy of a little cheer/dance, lol. I was a little surprised though that Tessaiga didn't transform when Inu went to help Kagome. It usually does when he has a strong desire to help humans(especially Kaggie)...and it's happened when he was weak in the series but I'm not sure if youki affects that or not...I think Yash should've dropped his sword on purpose when Envy attacked instead of holding onto it tighter. You know...to unleash demon InuYasha on him. Then again, that'd mean bye bye Envy and no more story to keep me on edge and we can't have that, can we? Oh wells. Loved the chapter! Till your next update! ~Amber
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2008 16:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! Fight scene! I can't wait! Especially since Yash can't transform Tessaiga or do his iron reaver thingy and Ed just left to gather firewood. They're doomed.. On the subject of Yash, though: AWWWW... He has all those insecurities and it doesn't help that Al is puttin' the moves on Kagome right in front of him. I hope he really isn't pushing her away..OR that he doesn't find out about the kiss! But the fight scene has me more on the edge of my seat right now than the little triangle going on, soooooooooooooo..till your next update! ~Amber
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2008 12:17 CDT
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Awwwwwwwwwwwwww...poor InuYasha! If only he would tell Kagome half the things he was thinking! It's so sweet how he wants to be their protector! Hmmm...so Envy is heading to the village Inu and the gang just left? I hope Shippou, Kaede, and the others will be okay..unless he meets up with the Inu gang halfway. Or did he not leave yet? Till next chappie! ~Amber
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2008 00:55 CDT
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Okay, so it's safe to say Naraku doesn't know about Edward and Alphonse, yet. But if he wanted to get the jewel back he really should have sent Envy after Sesshiles. Unless he has some greater plan? That clever little bean...By the way...Does Envy still have a vendetta against the brothers now that Hoenheilm(sp?) is dead? If he does then the confrontation should prove very interesting, especially if Yash is still in his human state when Envy gets there. Also, I laughed SO hard at "creature comforts". Envy fits into the role of a spoiled rotten daimyo PERFECTLY and I can actually see him chucking the jewel if he gets too annoyed with it. He should really be more perceptive of his surroundings though. Apparently, he isn't the only shape-shifter in town. I loved it, till your next chappie! :) ~Amber
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2008 21:37 CDT
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if one considers that since his name is Inu Yasha and being japanese... surname first and all that, then his family name is Inu and his personal name is Yasha. one would consider that since his sire was Inu no Taisho (dog general/leader) it only makes sense. besides, he wanted to be full youkai so he would probably accept being called 'yasha' as opposed to calling him 'dog'. . . ♣ ♥ ♦ ♠ ... see, i can do all kinds of characters in HTML but i want to do stars!! . . . look alchemy! β δ ω ξ . . . a visit from kouga could prove quite amusing. ~ couldn't resist, i'm so used to reviewing and subsequent silliness. ginny
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