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| "A Balm for Social Failure" Reviews/Comments [ 68 ] | | Pages (5): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 › » ] | Title: Bermuda....lol
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: August 12, 2009 19:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the thought of L being able to threaten Light with Ryuk. "Be nicer to me or I'll leave for Bermuda..." lolz! It just tickles me pink :p I must have been blessed with a vivid imagination, b/c Light's face after that sentance is pricless! Colledge is creeping up soon, and I just got done filling out the paper work *sighs* I hate paper work... Im glad to see that you've updated and mentioned the Whammy (Wammy? I can never remember how to spell it >-
| Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: July 21, 2009 09:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's kinda funny, but I was actually going to review today if you haden't updated. I came by every day to make sure I haden't missed your update, and now I learn that you were in a slump D: I suppose that makes me late, but as they say 'better late than never' :p I love devoted L, it tickles me pink. I also still have some remaining curiosity about (I think it was WAMMY? I can't remember now, it was a few chapters ago and I havent seen the series in a while ^^') whatever that company/project thing that Watari donated to that L was in. It was mentioned that the program was becoming corrupted but no mention as to why (other than a breif mention of fear). I was wondering if that would come up again or if this was the last we were going to hear of it? Anywho I gotta run to work, here's waiting for the next chapter! ~Passing Reader
| Title: ... I think i may have just suffered a minor heartattack... O.O
Reviewed By: Apari On: July 03, 2009 22:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.O Just... Wow ... I dont know what to say... I have just sat here... glued to my computer screen (Very much like L i might add ^^') And read this entire fic thus-far... This is one hell of a rollarcoaster of a story... if it can be called that XD I would go back and review every chapter... but... that would take me hours XD so i'll just try to cram every thing in here with my limit of 4000 characters (< note i just wasted space by writing that...and this ¬¬') ______________________________________________ I can honestly say that this is the most gripping, inticing Death Note fic i have ever had the pleasure to read O.O Not only do you convey your characters emotions and dilemmas so realistically, you also have that ability to keep almost anyone completely absorbed in the story as a whole, (2 days, and sleep and hunger still have not prevailed ^^') ________________________________________________ I am surprissed i havent suffered a heart-attack from the constant Adrenaline-Rush i have been subjected too XD Never knowing what happens next... (oh how evil an author you can be T_T)tears streaming down my face in an effort to hold in the fangirl squeals when something good happens... And resisting the Strong (Oh sooo strongg T_T) Urge to face-palm or slam my head against the computer desk when Light did something stupid (lol (: gotta blame light :D ) _______________________________________________ Definetly rated 10 in all feilds :D And i just LOVE how you have portrayed L ^-^ He so cute XD Light too XD he's just so... unstable XD yet... completely in control at the same time (Not including the times when he was Kira and tried to kill L... because that cant really be counted as control... O.O') Lol XD ... i shall get to the point (i hope O.O') This chapter was such a great turn of events XD i had almost abandoned all hope for Light O.O ... just the thought of him 'becoming the submissive' makes me shudder - but thats only because LxLight always seems wrong to me... i suppose i find it hard to believe someone *ex-mass murderer, mass murderer... or with a severe God Complex* such as Light being submissive ... and someone *socially inept, weird and frail looking, and with an extreme sweet tooth* such as L being dominant XD *LightxL all the way *^-^* * The way you portrayed the relationship between them was great XD with the constant power struggle between them, each always trying to get the upper hand - and i just love how L tends to lose :D ... seems i got of-topic again O.O' - back to the chapter! i loved how Light became some-what back to normal by the end of this chapter (: i was like... yay ^^ - i really cant wait until the next chapter XD. Howevever its sad its almost completed XD *Alas - Good things never last T-T* But i admit i am interested in how your gonna manage to wrap this all up XD *hopes there are still at least a couple more chapters to come* ____________________________________________ Lol ... Teru creeped me out... So weird... stalkerish *Hits Teru with his tennis racket: Light is L's!!* ^-^' Ok - i'm sure i have now bored you enough with this extra LONG review (: The time is approximately 04:04 AM ... and i am wide awake... T-T. Hope to see an update sometime soon (: Much Love xx ___________________________________________ The suspense is killing me... T-T i think i have already gone into withdrawel... its only been 10 minutes since i finished... dammmmmmnnn *twists up like Ryuuk*
| Title: I'm Cooked! D:
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: June 27, 2009 23:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First of all thank you so much for responding to my review! I know how busy you are and that it's difficult to type so many responses so I wanted to thank you properly :p Second: I'm going to die laughing if you keep this up! The irony of the story is killing me; You swiched L and Lights situations like one would spin a chess board. Now not only are they playing with each others pices, but they're using the same tactics too! (Referring to when L injected a bit of truth into his sentances as Light had done) I now have to wonder when or if he realized that was happening? __________________In other news, I have burnt myself to a crisp while swimming..... I wish to die right now. So while very much in pain, I was overjoyed to see that you had updated, It gave me something to do while I tried to de-bake myself ^^' I'm proud to say that I am at least a shade darker, hurray for the white team lol! I'll probibly still be here in this same spot by the time you update, so until then here's trying not to move ^^; ~Passing Reader
| Title: Happy Fathers Day!
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: June 21, 2009 22:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this chapter, nuff said :D It always seems like Light ends up hurting L in some way shape or form, even as he's giving him what he wants lol ^^' (I wonder if it makes me sick and sadistic to be laughing at that?) _________________________________________________ I'm so happy to hear that this is going to continue on for a while longer!!! This is one of the few (and I do mean FEW) fics that I would go back and read over and over again. I adore this story in it's entirety and simply can't get enough! It makes me wish that life would slow down a bit and alow me to read more ^^' I love how you make these two GROW as characters in your story, and the irony of the situation makes it that much easier to relate to them. Also, I discoverd not too long ago that my sister reads your storys as well! *insert surprise* Spacificly this fic and your Kingdom Hearts series, (she keept ranting and raving about the one staring Hayner & Seifer lolz) I haven't gotten around to playing Kindom Hearts 2 yet, but do plan to eventually. I did defeat 1 though so go me! ahaha ^^' Here's waiting for the next chapter, post it soon ne? ~Passing Reader & my admiring sister ;p
| Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: June 17, 2009 18:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought the story was going to end with these two chapters! Imagion, to my happy surprize, when it didn't :p Despite Mikami creeping me out on so many levels, I actually found myself sad at his demise :o I think I may have an 'utter devotion' fetish lol I can't wait for the next chapter, but at the same time I don't want the story to be any closer to its end D: Maybe the other fanfic with these 2 will cheer me up. I do wonder what you've come up with (I keep picturing L and Light in space and I can't stop laughing; 'Who will win the right to captin the ship? Stay tuned' :p) Gah, I'm a nerd. Don't mind me, I was sick today I'm going to blame my sillyness on that ^^' ......But it IS a neast idea, 'L and Light in space' *cackles* 'Garunteed, you've never read another fic like it' ;p Untill next time! ~Passing Reader
| Title: Excitment! XD
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: June 06, 2009 09:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm both, regarding your Mikami poll (I hope I spelled his name right). I really liked him in the anime, but at the same time I sensed his inner "nutty-ness" so to speak. I'm both excited and sad, it's almost over! I'm glad your making another DN fic, if I had nothing to look forward to I might go into a mini reader depression ^^' Thank you so much for all your hard work! I eagerly await the next chapter, see you soon! :D
| Reviewed By: Event Horizon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2009 07:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG, first review of new chap! I must say, I've developed an unhealthy and crippling obsession with this story. :D I love Mikami and Light's interaction in this chap, the wit and the plotting and the hot tense scenes very much make up for the lack of L. But I really liked the worry you painted going on in L's head. I'm so excited for the next chapter that I can't sit still!
| Title: I play Sim2 too :p
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: June 01, 2009 19:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The Sims2 is a great game to play when one is bored and has no ultimate goals to reach within a certian time period hehe. I merly play it b/c they look pritty when you get the downloads, XM sims or something, very nice XD I have no idea where were headed now, I was starting to think L and Light would come to some sort of comprimise that would lead to them joining up ^^' ....They still have to eventually right?.... Anywho, loved the chapter, sorry about the last review, my dads birthday was last weekend :p I hope you have fun at your con! and dont let the writers block eat yooouuu! D:
| Title: I FINALLY GOT INTERNET!!!! XD
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: May 27, 2009 21:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
We finally got internet today and as soon as I was done with work this was the first fic I checked on! *sqwees excitedly* Thank you very much for the mental preperation notice, and thankfully It was not as bad as I thought it would be and added a whole new bout of angust to your story which was both wildly fasinating and mildly depressing haha ^^'. I noticed that someone has also bummed my name too, it's the last review on may 4th. I suppose that I will probibly have to get an account on here, just incase more people do this and say not so nice things ^^' I will definatly let you know if I do so though ;p (I wonder if thats a weird thing to do...?) I can't wait to see how this ends, though I have to wonder how your going to do this without it turning into one giant death trap lol. I also can't wait to see the new Naruto and Deathnot fics your making (I think I just about died from suffication via: surpression of girly annoying fan-girl squeals) I do belive that you have made me your own personal review whore (But not in that weird, slightly scarey, kinky way ahaha ^^') As for me I'm finally moved in and can now read at my leasure, yaay for me :D Here's waiting for the next chapter; and is very excited to see it XD
| Reviewed By: Event Horizon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2009 23:00 CDT
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High five! :) Woot! I love the turn of events, good on you for pulling out the stops. I also really like the way you really injected some good power-struggle L/Light into this chapter. I love seeing L in detective mode, but even more when their logic and anger is evenly matched. I wonder if that detailed room service breakfast is going to come into play in the next chapter? ;) Mwhaha! I only have one small note, and this is just the way I see it in my head (and who am I, after all), but when Teru is speaking of God, I always picture the pronouns in caps. Like "he was stunned by His brilliant radiance and His voice was the melody of justice." :P I don't know, I just like seeing adoration in capital letters. Bring on chap 29!!
| Reviewed By: Event Horizon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2009 22:07 CDT
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OMG! This isn't a review, just me going crazy because I checked on aBfSF cause I'm a crack-head, no updates, went to check out your awesome RoxasXAxel fanart (which is superb, by the way), came back and BAM! UPDATE! asdfjkwlerjkf U ROX! ^_~ Give me 25 minutes, I'll have a decent review for ya.
| Reviewed By: Event Horizon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2009 01:08 CDT
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Oh thank god he finally "said" it. ;( I'm filled with a terrible mix of emotions, joy and grief and awe (again! at your terrific writing!). I absolutely cannot wait for the next chapter and for hopefully :D a short but sugary sweet respite from all the gloom and doom. Wait, what am I saying? Bring on the gloom, bring on the doom! Just keep giving us luscious and wickedly witty interactions between our two fav geniuses. ^_^
| Title: :)
Reviewed By: immecya On: May 16, 2009 14:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love light/l. good story. throw misa off the roof of the tallest building weeeeeeeeee
| Title: You had me at jail cell...
Reviewed By: Ki de Lioncourt(not signed in) On: May 15, 2009 12:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, so Im on ch.16 and I have to say, you had me with Amelia. I caught all the allusions to Light, but I figured it couldn't really have been him, since your story had thus far challenged all my trains of thought to within an inch of my sanity. I guess when I really had caught on, I just couldn't believe it. But it truly does make sense to keep light in the picture, afterall I still have to make it ch. 26. Ten more chapters of a yaoi without the other leading boy? Umm, no. And furthermore, killing himm would make a better tragic ending than a milestone for the middle of any tale, to be sure. Not to say that it couldn't be done, but perhaps it's that it's simply too daunting a task to try and fullfill? I want you to know that your story is engaging, thrilling and a challenge for me to guess what's going to be coming up next. I only hope you continue to put out works as grand as this one. I look forward to reading them all. ~Ki de Lioncourt
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