| "Mayumi's Story" Reviews/Comments [ 79 ] |
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Title: Amazing
Reviewed By: Angeana [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2011 01:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has got to be one of my favourite fanfictions. I love it so much that I'm now in the process of rereading it after half a year. This is the first fanfic I've ever reread. The story is so creative and each of your characters is unique and well fleshed out. Thank you for writing such a great story. |
Reviewed By: Angeana [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2009 01:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that was great! it had me at the edge of my seat wondering what would happen next. there were some interesting plot twists, that's for sure. i really liked the ending. normaly i like tragedies better but that ust fit so perfectly! great, now i wanna rewrite my old fanfic. gotta get to work now, so thanks for the awesome read!
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Reviewed By: inu-kags4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2009 13:57 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved it! it couldn't have ended with a happier ending! thank you for all the wonderful stories:) i will miss all the people that died though. i have been a loyal reader from the beginning thank you again!
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: spawnofthesilly1 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2009 01:55 EDT
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Hey mom! I finally finished reading the story and it's amazing. I want you to know that you truly do have a talent for this and you make me so proud to be your daughter (even when I read the dirty parts.) I'm amazed to read the reviews of your fans. That's gotta feel pretty cool to see that, huh? Again, I'm so proud of you and thanks for giving me something to dry my tears. You're always there when I need you, just like the women you write about. Happy Mother's Day! I love you. ~Sarah~
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Reviewed By: Chase65 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2009 18:36 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Standing Ovation* and some tears! This was just a most wonderful sequel! Hmmmm, a 350 year pregnancy (kinda) and Dai didn't have to deal with out of control hormones...LOL! Take some time to read, but please please please write again soon!!
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Reviewed By: Inu_inu_luvluv [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2009 09:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...!!! no, it's really over?!*tears up* it was soooo good!!! *pout* how about a sequel ;) please?pretty please? you did a really good job with this one!!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2009 02:26 EDT
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ah, but you could always write another yash/kag. ♣ wow, you wrapped that up quite nicely. a wonderful story-- take a break, just don't stop writing! ♥ always a delight, ginny ♥;
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2009 23:10 EDT
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the sooner she leaves the past the sooner she can return to dai, it isn't perfect but for him after losing her for so long... ~oh what tangled webs we weave. ♥
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Reviewed By: inu-kags4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2009 18:05 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved it:) wonderful idea:) keep up the awesome work:)
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2009 17:16 EDT
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wow, either he'll be rehabilitated or he's going to end up completely animal crackers and obsessed (even more than he was to begin with). one always hopes for the best (i am forever the optimist but unlike kagome, i'm also a realist who knows of the devistation of mental illness-- beware the reality challenged!). good one, poor yasha-- he wanted to eliminate him. maybe trace will be fit to be a good mate when he does get out (could it be that megumi is subconsciously waiting for him?) ♥
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Reviewed By: Chase65 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2009 22:06 EDT
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Megumi and Trace....you are truly devious! Hadn't thought of him trying to get to the family in that way. I hope the big plan works - I am on the edge of my seat!
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2009 20:04 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I feel sorry for Megumi and her having to lose the memories of being in love but I can understand why Mayumi made that decision. I also feel sorry for Daichi and all he is missing. He must feel betrayed to some extent at all Mayumi is hiding from him. The picture idea was a good one, I can see that one coming in the future and of course Kagome will have her family pictures on one. She must be very careful with which ones she shows Mayumi, it wouldn't do to show her one from the future. I am curious as to what Mayumi plans to do to trap Trace. I also am curious as to what happens to Mayumi that causes her to go to the future and not return. I can't wait to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: inu-kags4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2009 00:41 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAHHHHHHHHHHHH this is getting Sooooooooooooooo good! i love it will megumi know the truth? how will it all end? keep up the awesome work!
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Reviewed By: inu-kags4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2009 21:30 EDT
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i am soo mad at Trace...he should really watch his mouth, if he wants to life......I loved it and i always will!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2009 03:19 EDT
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trace doesn't realize that his big mouth is going to be his undoing. that you never tell your enemies what your weaknesses are. the second world war slogan "loose lips sink ships" is quite apropos. ♣ too bad she couldn't go back and ask her grampa. ♥
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