| "Mayumi's Story" Reviews/Comments [ 79 ] |
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2009 10:49 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I laughed at Mayumi's meeting with the priest. And Daichi's reactions to guns was hilarious also. Sesshomaru needs to get a new human representative quickly. The encounter with Trace was intriguing and set all kinds of possibilities going in my head. Inuyasha's reaction to Mayumi's encounters was spot on, he would find the priest funny and get angry about Trace. I feel he will be hanging out more in the past to watch over his daughter.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2009 02:31 EDT
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a great book to read: 'sho♦gun' by james clavell~ ♣ one wonders why the 'strange youkai' doesn't elaborate so that she can at least consider his reasons. compliance can be obtained if the explanation is good enough. cryptic responses will not work. ♠ love the 'typical guy' responses. ♥
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Reviewed By: inu-kags4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2009 22:41 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
interesting...hmmm i wonder what will happen!:) keep up the awesome work!! thank you very much:)
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Reviewed By: inu-kags4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2009 18:49 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
is the end coming near?!?!?!?!?!?!? only time will tell thank u so much for ur stories! keep up the awesome work!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2009 15:18 EDT
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both time lines keep progressing and pretty soon should catch up to the time kagome first starts going back. one wonders if the 'bad youkai' will be trying to cause problems with that.-- or if he can. ♥
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Reviewed By: inu-kags4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2009 14:38 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
what sweet sorrow is the life we live:) i can't belive what has happened! it must be hard for kagome not to be able to live with her grandchildren and see them grow:( and not even to attend her granddaughter's wedding how sad...keep up the awesome work:) this deserves a 20 not a 10 but thats all it will let me give:)
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2009 22:45 EDT
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everything seems like it will come full circle as time goes on. interesting to find out what causes her to vanish and if she would eventually appear again. ♥
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Reviewed By: inu-kags4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2009 01:40 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i reqlly want to know what will happen next! i just hope everything will be ok...it was so sad that sango and miroku did they will forever live in my heart:) who would have thunk that inuyasha's dad didn't like hanyou keep up the awesome work:)
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2009 13:46 EDT
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in a way-- one can understand how he feels but he has kids to think about! good thing it turns out for them. one wonders what causes her to get stuck away from her family. it's like we know the ending but not a clue how things turned out that way. hearts;
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2009 02:20 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a very good conclusion to Kazuki's side story of being in the past. It tied everything up well and left no loose ends, at least none that I noticed. Though I feel bad for his kids because they lose both parents and the only grandparents that they know so quickly together. It was a touching scene in how you described Sango and Kagome not noticing that Kagome hasn't aged and that they treated each other as the close friends that they were. I was glad to hear that Kagome had at least one child that shared her love of education and became the doctor she dreamed of becoming. I do hope that he is happy as a doctor and wasn't pushed into it to make his mother happy though. Inuyasha will always watch over his kids and help them to the best of his ability, no matter how old they become. The only things left to deal with is the strange time traveling youkai and Mayumi herself. And maybe an addition of Mayumi's grandfather and Midoriko. I just realized that Mayumi now doesn't have anyone to send to the future for help, was that one of the reasons that you sent Kazuki away? To force Mayumi to the future to get her father and mother to help deal with the bad guy?
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2009 22:23 EDT
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the time police! with claws and teeth. one wonders why he's just insisting she return instead of just destroying her, with enough of his 'youkai' her could. i guess she's going to have to be leaving soon, one wonders which way in time she'll disappear to.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2009 17:38 EST
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interesting interaction. ojiisan *laughs* he may take offense to being called gramps-- even the old ones want to think they're young. ♥
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2009 00:57 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What an interesting twist to have Inupapa hate hanyos, considering he spawned the strongest hanyo in history. I was a little surprised that he didn't recognize his scent being part of Mayumi's though. I am very intrigued that the bad guy went into the past before Midoriko and when Sesshomaru was a baby. I can't wait to see what the purpose to this time travel and why Mayumi loses Daichi at some point.
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Reviewed By: inu-kags4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2009 18:10 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! what a way to meet her grandpa! i absolutly LOVE this story! i have read from the beginning and will read until the end:) i can't belive what has happend...what will happen now will she be able to go back to diachi? please write more!!!
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2009 15:24 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a way for Mayumi to meet her grandfather. This should be interesting. And I wonder what plans Inuyasha and family are destroying for that Youkai. Does this have to do with why Mayumi leaves Daichi later. Some of the relationships are getting almost incestuous. Sango and Miroku's son and Mayumi's daughter, Rin and Kohaku's daughter with Daichi's brother and Rin and Kohaku's son being Kagome and therefore Mayumi and Kazuki's ancestor along with Kazuki marrying Miroku and Sango's daughter. The family tree has more cross pollination then a single sunflower in a field of daisies. I wonder how Inuyasha is going to take being so closely related to the wolves, even if it is mostly through marriage. I hope to be a fly on the wall when he finds out.
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