| "Mayumi's Story" Reviews/Comments [ 79 ] |
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2009 19:23 EST
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it's her grampa!! inu no taisho himself? --hmm, one wonders =3 ♦ one wonders what will happen to her now... good chapter. hope she finds her way. ♥
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2009 13:28 EST
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that is one thing that makes me upset about the 'iy' series although i have my own theories. i believe that when one 'mates' with youkai one gets benefit from the youki. one doesn't know just how old jinenji's mother but i think she is way way older than most old women, judging by the actions and maturity of her son. i'm thinking she may be at least a century old (he seems immature as yasha, who is a couple centuries old) so as long as her mate had survived, his youki had kept her from aging normally and slowly dissipating after his death. IMO --then again none of my favorites will ever age or die in my mind. ♣ i love the sly/selective senility that is typical totosai-- well written! ♦ of course it is his kotodama no nenju... one can see the fact that he may have a sentimental attachment to it but he wouldn't deny his daughter and grandchildren. ♥
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2009 03:45 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a great end for the necklace, as a seal for Inuyasha's kids and grandkids. It was funny to see Kagome say sit and have nothing happen to either Inuyasha or Mayumi. I am glad that Daichi and Mayumi patched up their quarrel so quickly, I bet at some point in the future Dai is going to be remembering this time with Totosai with new understanding about what was being said if he had listened. I am glad that the little one went to Kagome without much hesitation, it would have broken her heart if her grandchild rejected her.
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2009 14:04 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Kagome. Having her mother die must be hard on her. And poor Kazuki who realizes that his beloved will die much earlier than he will and possibly his children will too. The fight with the youkai was interesting but now you leaving us wondering exactly what they wanted from Mayumi. I hope that Mayumi and Daichi make up without damaging their relationship when she returns from Totosai. The way she left him echos of Kagome and Inuyasha arguments. I look forward to seeing what happens next.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2009 12:05 EST
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nothing like tearing his heart out then stomping on it... ♣ one wonders if this was when she disappears or it's just the beginning. one hope s the thing will be resolved so that she can eventually be reunited with her family. ♦ great stuff as always ♥
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2009 18:59 EST
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one wonders about these strange youkai. if she knew them, if they were fenn's. ♣ i see she isn't the willful girl anymore. having kids will do that to you. you see the wisdom in listening to your elders. delighted as always. ♥
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2009 18:23 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why am I suspicious of the fact that they knew Mayumi's name? Probably because you want me to be. :-P I am starting to wonder if these are any relation to Fenn's or if they could be the ones that he thought he destroyed. I feel bad for Kagome and Inuyasha not knowing their one set of grandchildren and I feel sorry for the kids not knowing their grandparents. I hope they get to know one another in the future at some point. Though it seems as if Daichi and Mayumi are trying to repopulate the wolf pack on their own. They are lucky they are not having litters or they would be overrun with baby wolf hanyos. It was good to see how protective and considerate the wolves are of Mayumi too. I have a feeling that Inuyasha's sons are going to be more involved with fighting these new youkai, Kazuki in the past and Koji in the future. I look forward to seeing what happens next.
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Reviewed By: kmoaton [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2009 21:39 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Enjoyed this new update. It was nice to see how her daily life was and how much of the 21st century girl she still was despite her choice to live in the feudal era. It was also wonderful for her to finally see Kagome and Inuyasha and allow them a chance to meet their grandson. I cannot wait to see what happens next! Great work!
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2009 16:27 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was a nice peek into Mayumi's life with the wolves. It was especially nice to see the reconciliation between Mayumi and Kagome with Inuyasha looking on. It was interesting to see why the wolves didn't want the cubs to go to the human village, it would be hilarious to see Inuyasha's reaction to that fact considering how he views Fenn's "children" and their inclination to seeing humans as food. It goes to show how far he traveled from his own childhood since he probably had the same instincts. It would have been interesting to see her children's reactions to learn that they are related to Inuyasha, Kagome and Sesshomaru when they learn in the future. Were they present when she was growing up? That must have been weird for them to know she was a child somewhere. And the whole Kazuki side story is going to be interesting. I wonder where that bracelet is in the future. Does Kazuki ever take his kids to the future? I look forward to seeing what happens next.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2009 13:25 EST
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time has been flying by! one wonders what happens when she disappears-- wondering if the power to transverse time suddenly stops with the 'kids' in the future... or if it has something to do with the bad 'fenn-like' youkai... ♣ good progression through many years. ♥
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2009 08:40 EST
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it's getting to me, not being able to see my son (at present i don't know where he is and he hasn't contacted me), it's been months. i can't imagine years. ♣ good chapter, somewhat depressing. ♥
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2009 23:43 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting movements through time. The mixing of time passed was almost confusing but it was a good way to introduce a deal with several issues. Why don't Kagome and Inuyasha stay to see Mayumi? Is it because they are afraid their scent will stay on her or are they awaiting an invitation from her to stay? I would think that she would want to see them occasionally. You briefly mention children but how many do they have, what are their sexes and what are their names? Also you have me wondering if Mayumi was the second person that Sesshomaru loved (I was originally thinking it might have been Kagome but now I am wondering if it was her daughter)? I eagerly await to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: inu-kags4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2009 23:34 EST
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it must be hard for kagome and inuyasha not to be able to see their daughter:( will they ever see each other? wow who knew sessy would like that kind of type, or even a hanyou, is mayumi the woman that he was in love with or was it kagome, or was it rin! please give me a clue!!!! i loved it keep up the awesome work:)!
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Reviewed By: inu-kags4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2009 19:26 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THis one also had me in tears(tear,tear,tear) i love ur writing....it was inuyasha ans kagome on the ledge right? oh how heart renching:( i loved it so much! i my self do not agree with sex before marriage but to each his own:) keep up the awesome work!
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2009 14:00 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice wedding scene. Of course Inuyasha and Kagome are going to be there for their daughter's wedding, no matter how upset they are with her or the fact that she is marrying so young. I am interested to see if they lose their oldest son to the past too or does he manage to bring her into the future. Either could be interesting. Miroku was right to make Mayumi aware that he did not approve of her actions and that her parents were upset. I am looking forward to seeing what happens next for this pair and how her parents manage to contact her without letting any of the wolves know it is happening.
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