| "Mayumi's Story" Reviews/Comments [ 79 ] |
| Pages (6): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 › » ] |
Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2009 19:16 EST
Comment/Review:
i guess to prevent any premature pregnancy at least before the wedding-- yasha had to be 'on the ball'. one wonders what all you have in store for the 'ill fated' couple. good stuff ♥
|
Reviewed By: kmoaton [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2009 18:50 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glad Inuyasha was keeping an eye on her despite of the huge fight. It was sweet that they could secretly be at the wedding. Having her brother there certainly made a difficult time a little easier. I really like where you are going with this story and I can't wait to see where you go next. Until next post...
|
Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2009 22:15 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am not sure who I feel the sorriest for right now, Dai, Mayumi or Kagome. They are all three hurting about this decision. I am a bit surprised that Inuyasha didn't remind Kagome of how her mother let Kagome time travel with no assurances about her safety except Inuyasha' promise to keep her safe. Inuyasha's reaction is surprising me a bit, I didn't think he would be so calm to losing his daughter to Kouga's son and the past. I can't wait to see how this all works out.
|
Reviewed By: Chase65 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2009 21:24 EST
Comment/Review:
That wS the mother of all fights (bad pun intended)! Kagome needs to reach back & remember how her mother dealt with her time spent in the past at 15 yrs old. Once she calms down, she'll come around.
|
Reviewed By: inu-kags4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2009 17:26 EST
Comment/Review:
i cried silently to myself...i loved it,,,keep up the awesome work you put so much soul into these stories i have loved them all...can't wait until the next
|
Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2009 11:31 EST
Comment/Review:
the hardest thing-- to let go. for mayumi it will be to apologize. young people are so absolute and so volatile. ♠ you have stirred some rather unpleasant memories *skips off to read something silly* ♥
|
Reviewed By: inu-kags4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2009 20:22 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWWW this was so sad:( i loved it all in all:) keep up the awesome work i can't wait till the next
|
Title: So cute
Reviewed By: Yona45 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2009 18:19 EST
Comment/Review:
So cut keep going, will she and daichi get back together in the past? Because if they do then it would be great! Keep up the great work!
|
Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2009 18:16 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Mayumi still doesn't fully understand but that is to be expected from one so young. He will be her Daichi when she gets back from being with him as his mate. I can't wait to see what happens next.
|
Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2009 00:19 EST
Comment/Review:
one guesses that after five hundred years, a scent would change. the fact that he was just an adolescent as opposed to the adult. one thinks that maybe the base smell would stay the same but diet, age, environment would all be factors. ♣ what a revelation! one can see why she would be stunned. ♥
|
Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2009 20:43 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was wondering when she was going to get the connection. I am surprised that she didn't get it earlier from scent, but I suppose Dai used something to mask his odor like she does in the past. Now I just wonder if they are going to tell her everything or not. Should be interesting either way.
|
Reviewed By: inu-kags4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2009 00:29 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you have to continue with this story! i love it so much 1,000 tumbs up!:)
|
Reviewed By: inu-kags4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2009 15:37 EST
Comment/Review:
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! loved it keep on writing!
|
Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2009 23:14 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope Inuyasha didn't kill Mayumi's date when he showed up without her, though it was good of him to go there and face the music from her family and presumably make sure she arrived home alright. The scene with Uncle Dai becoming Dai was great, it must be hard on him watching his mate grow up and fall in love with his younger self. It is really going to be hard on him when she goes to the past and lives with the past him. I happily look forward to the next chapter.
|
Reviewed By: inu-kags4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2009 22:28 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
now that i think about it who is the mysterious youki that has been in both worls??? i have a few theories, like inuyasha's dad, that's why it knew their names! or maybe not...:( will we ever know??? you have gone so far in this series!!! i love it i have read from the beginning till now!!! starting from kagome and inuyasha at school then them getting the house to kagome finding out that rin is related to her...to her being pregnate with kazuki and mayumi and getting lost in timethen preg with koij ahhh the memories!!!:) keep on writing.....(this should be a book..wish all this really did happen)
|
| Pages (6): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 › » ] |
