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Title: amazin story amazung writer
Reviewed By: Irish Rebel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2011 22:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the story it was amazing:-) You could almost feel the angt that Inuyasha and Kagome were going through in the story. I especially loved Sesshomaru's sons in this story loved their characters:-) I really liked the idea of reincarnation in tis story, and i can't wait to read your other stories:-D xx |
Title: amazin story amazung writer
Reviewed By: Irish Rebel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2011 22:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the story it was amazing:-) You could almost feel the angt that Inuyasha and Kagome were going through in the story. I especially loved Sesshomaru's sons in this story loved their characters:-) I really liked the idea of reincarnation in tis story, and i can't wait to read your other stories:-D xx |
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2010 02:52 EDT
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I don't know what the deal was in my last review. Maybe I read the chapter in snatches and missed some. Regardless, loved the story.
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Reviewed By: Star Weaver [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2010 02:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought you did an absolutely wonderful job on this fic! I've heard the modern day premise before, but this fic was far more creative and beautifully written than others of it's type. Though I missed Sango and Miroku, the addition of Sess's sons made up for them and their personalities were comical without seeming absurd which can sometimes happen with original characters. It was really nice to read through the fic without having to guess what you meant because your grammar and spelling were superb! The only thing I wish is that you had covered what happened to the rest of the family in you epilogue: do Sess and Karin have children? what about Sota, Yayoi, and Grandpa? A sequel perhaps? :) Overall I loved this fic and i stayed up later than I should have because I was so anxious to know what happened next! I hope you keep writing and good luck on future work!
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Reviewed By: inyu01 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2010 21:20 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWSOME SOTRY!!! I REALLY ENJOYED READING THIS FANFIC....I THINK U R AN AWSOME AUTHOR HPE U CONTINUE WRITING MORE FANFICS....
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2010 06:30 EDT
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i'm not sure if all of the symbols here are compatible but the basic HTML ones are: http://dmmarks.com/SpecialChars.html ♣ ټ ♥
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Title: Ending Already? Why?
Reviewed By: Kiroku Ookami [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2010 15:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have thoroughly enjoyed this story, and I loved reading both it and the "Time Lapse" off of MediaMiner. The storyline-superb. Characters? Awesome, especially the twins and Buyo. :) It was another great story. So why did I give it an overall rating of 8? I think that there's so much more to build upon before wrapping it up-the story should still be in progress. To me, at least, the chapters built up to preface...some cataclysmic event, I suppose, but the ending turned out to be somewhat anticlimactic. I just feel like there should be more, much more to this story. I still enjoyed reading it! I would strongly, strongly encourage you to continue this piece! If not, thank you for another sweet epic! ~Kiroku Ookami~
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2010 04:04 EDT
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;clubs: --should have been ♣ --been spending too much time at dA and their emoticons and plz icons --forgot my HTML ♥
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2010 04:01 EDT
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*\o/* another wonderful story finished *\o/* ahh, the joys of the belated wedding night --and 'firsts'. LOLz ;clubs: loved sesshoumaru's mother-- quite a character! XD nice to see she was civil and even covertly affectionate... slightly. ♥
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Reviewed By: Inumimi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2010 18:55 EDT
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Thank you, thank you, thank you so much for this wonderful story! I love what you did with Sess's mom she so funny! I would love a story just about her driving her family nuts (perhaps in regard to a new grandchild - pup). In fact I would love some stories concerning Kagome, Sha, and all the rest that take place after the jewel is gone. You have created such fully rounded personalities that more stories would be very much appreciated! There are even story possibilities following Sha's search for Kagome's reincarnation in the future (Inu's in outer space?). Anyway once again Thank You for a great story!
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Reviewed By: King Baka [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2010 17:06 EDT
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Oh, I love Karin at the start of the chapter. I fail to see how Sesshiro could have found someone who is more his polar opposite. Maybe she'll be able to at least partially remove the stick up his butt over the next several decades? She and Sha are going to team up to drive him absolutely crazy. :) And she's asserting her dominance over the kiddies… Hehehe, guess the "indirect kiss" isn't going to happen. That was a nice moment. I also liked how the jewel disappeared. For weeks they tried to figure out a way, but in the end the answer was under their noses the whole time. It was so simple, and that's what made the answer so difficult to discover. The citrus was, in a painfully inadequate word, HOT. I've always had a thing for shower sex, so that scene really got me going. And I'm glad you decided to do the lemon, even though you said you originally hadn't planned on it. After so much sexual tension and longing, I think I would have felt a little cheated if we didn't see Sha and Kagome get rewarded for their patience and perseverance. And I was right about the bittersweet moment at the end, with Kagome passing away after a human's lifespan. Many stories grant Kagome a longer life, but I'm glad you didn't do that here. Endings are better when they aren't 100% happy. At least Sha has an amazing family to keep him company as he waits for her reincarnation to appear. Overall, out of the AUs I've read, this is one of the two or three best. I truly enjoyed it. Thank you for taking the time to bring the story to life and letting us tag along for the ride.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2010 12:34 EDT
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The red string of fate to lead things on, hehehe. Definitely an awesome ending to an incredible story so far. Continue to update will ya? Not just this story, but updates for future tales, and other current ones too. Not just a literal soon (within a few weeks) but soon as in soon as you're satisfied with what you've written. Thus, update again soon will ya? Ja ne.
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2010 08:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautiful! What an amazing ending to a wonderful stroy. I have loved every chapter the emotions and thought provoking ideas you have put into this. You are amazing I can't wait to read your next story :)
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Reviewed By: Piett600 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2010 04:17 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has been a very enjoyable fanfic - it's an excellent exploration of a 'what if' scenario, and the highest praise I can offer is that these still feel like the characters we know and love. The original characters are interesting and engaging without ever unwittingly becoming the focus of the story. As with all your other stories the writing quality is excellent. This has been a fun fic from start to finish, and I only hope there is more 'in the tank' so to speak for you as far as Inuyasha goes, because these sorts of stories are a wonderful compliment to the canon universe.
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2010 01:39 EDT
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I hadn't expected the story to end so soon. Great chapter. Kagome was able to help a little girl and find a career in it. The death scene and afterlife were cool. Poor Sha. I felt really bad for him. Oooh, shame on him for the whole motorcycle thing, but that was a hot lime! ^_^ It's about time he got some! ^_^ I guess he'll be reunited with Kagome in her next life. The Lady of the West was a blast! LOL I see her the same way. Oh! I was just reading Phoenix Blade: Time Lapse the other day...again. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Silly1 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2010 18:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lovin' the happy ending! I got some of the references, not all--I'm glad you put them at the end for those of us who thought we figured out something! Really enjoyed the story--looking forward to whatever's next! Oh, and, the scene where Kagome 'died' and met her father (and all the connections there--I'm all about the connections!), that was the best--if I could vote, I'd say that is what it is truly like! Wonderful, all of it! Eve
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2010 04:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! I wasn't expecting this next chapter to be the last chapter, but I think you did a wonderful job tying up all the loose ends and giving everybody their happily ever afters. I'm sure we haven't seen the last of you, so I shall sit back and await whatever new treasure you decide to come up with next!
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Title: I guess I'll just have to go watch trueblood now
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2010 02:52 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NO!!! Its over *bawling like a baby*, I wasn't ready yet!!! What am I going to do now, read the dictornary *stomps off to pout*. Ok so now that I'm done thoughing a fit, I got to say that this was really fun to read, and I hope that this isn't the last time you'll write for Inuyasha (even though its over, I'm still pouting about that two years after the manga ended). Thanks as always for sharing your stories with the rest of us.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2010 02:30 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great update... nice happy ending... seems that kagome and sha were able to help a little girl... karin is a nice addition to family too... good that kagome was able to get rid of the jewel and see her father again... glad that sha and kagome finally were able to be together in the end... wonderful story... good job... great work!
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Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2010 00:52 EDT
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Well, When I said it was going to be a good ride, I wasn't kidding. Fenik, you supplied enough twists and turns to make this a wicked, good read, and kept my mental movie screen busy. I have enjoyed this story every bit as much as everything else of yours that I've read. Thanks for another wonderful story, can't wait to see what you come up with next. LOL
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2010 12:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another awesome chaptere. I'm glad Kagome's finally making some kind of peace with the jewel :)
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Reviewed By: King Baka [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2010 20:29 EDT
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Well that was a quick battle. Clever girl, Kagome! I was hoping Sha had a good reason for being MIA, but it appears he hasn't completely grown up yet. I was surprised Sess didn't smack him one, or Kagome for that matter. It's interesting to see Karin coming to terms with her role as pseudo-mother to the boys, and of prospective mate to Sess. I LOL-ed when Tenmaru told them to get a room. :-) Also interesting was that the fact that much of this whole thing was out of her control is catching up to Kagome. Loved the lime, the hair touching, the mutual self-gratification. People can be very creative when they're horny. XD I look forward to the next update.
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2010 22:45 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! An update! And what an update! Progress, progress, progress... Both with you and your story, as well as with Kagome and the jewel! I wonder how long it'll take Kagome to realize the "right wish" is to simply wish the jewel away... or is that not the route you're planning on taking? After all, even that wish could backfire if it simply disappeared, and she died from a giant hole in the heart! Also, she wants to keep and use the jewel if at all possible, as well she should...if at all possible. So maybe your "right wish" won't be the canon "right wish"...either way I'm looking forward to seeing what you come up with, and I'm really looking forward to your "new moon" chapter...as is Inuyasha, I bet. *wink*
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Reviewed By: Inumimi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2010 14:25 EDT
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Another killer chapter (well killer for one unlucky kitsune). Love how things are starting to move along. I hope Kagome can keep up with her increasing control over the jewel otherwise its lots of cold showers for poor InuYasha. I also continue to love how culturally correct you are making the story, it really adds an extra dimension!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2010 01:01 EDT
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i guess with the emergence of such threats one after the other the jewel isn't going to allow any youki near her since naraku, unless kagome either finds the right wish or learns to completely control its reactions. one can think that a little tingle wouldn't be all that bad (interesting sensations), it's when it starts sizzling... ♥
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Title: Wicked Awesome
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2010 00:50 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man this chapter had pizazz, heart pounding action, fuzzy fluff and puff, heelarious in character squabbling, something we've been hoping for and a tease to send it home. It sure was satisfying reading this today, kind of like good food satisfying.
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2010 20:40 EDT
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WooHoo! So much action. One fried kitsune, Rin moves in, Kagome nearly blows down a building, and hot, hot foreplay. ^_^ I'm so glad that the boys were okay. So glad that things are better with the jewel, but still no hot sex! *stomps foot* LOL Great chapter. Loved Sesshoumaru's gentleness with Rin's emotions. He's being so patient. ^_^
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2010 20:37 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... lots of happenings occurred... seems that kagome is making progress with the jewel but still not good enough for sha to get close... looks like karin will be staying with the house of the west now too... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: LookAtMe [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2010 02:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is wonderful, I love reading it. I love reading your work, it really paints a picture in my mind. I have also read The Pheonix Blade: Time Lapse, which by the way is my favourite story of all time. I am sorry that your friend has passed on, I first heard of Neko's passing when I read the most recent chapter of Hearts Landfill(wonderful story also, should check it out if you haven't).
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Reviewed By: dreamer789 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2010 01:30 EST
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NOOOO!!!!!! ive been reading this story for the past couple of days in my spare time. and its become addicting to me. and then i got to the last chapter, and went to hit the "next" button, so i could read more only to find out ITS NOT THERE!!!!!! :'( im so sad! this is such an awesome story and i was dreading coming up to the part where I couldnt go on! PLease please please update soon! this is an amazing story and i absolutely LOVE it!!!!!!!!!!!!! Definitely one of the best ive read :) So keep up the great work!!!!!!!
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