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Title: rinzechan
Reviewed By: rinzechan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2009 01:11 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
....Wow..... That's all I can think to say! And it's Amazing! I've hit the fanfiction jackpot today!
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Reviewed By: AvidRabid [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2009 19:06 EDT
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OMG! Action packed and dramatic cliff-hanger! But now I'm extremely curious about whats going to happen next... So hurry, and update!
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Title: go ahead just toss my off the cliff
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2009 01:14 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
She got it out of her didn't she, that bird brain. Aah what a cruel cruel cliff hanger, I sensed it coming with all that calm after the storm for most of the chapter I just knew it would end in a killer cliffy.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2009 01:25 EDT
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one wonders what he wants-- the poor girl had one boring relationship and she was sheltered all her life-- he's no player either! ♣ i really like your OCs! his nephews can really rile him up-- hilarious jocularity. ♦ i'm thinking that body wasn't kagome and that her jewel enhanced powers took over-- then again, could be a dead kagome (unless the jewel could be extracted without killing her-- it'd hurt like a b*+@# though). ♠ i hope you enjoyed the love song-- in the midst of that he made some really profoundly valid points about shared experience and tolerance, he's really funny too! ~ delighted ♥ ginny
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2009 23:59 EDT
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Oh! I can't believe what you had Buyo doing! That was hilarious, especially Inuyasha's reaction. LOL
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2009 23:58 EDT
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KYA!!!!! Nooooooo! You horrible, horrible person, tormenting us with such a cliffy. That chapter was going so wonderfully. Witty banter, good placement in the competition, then you had to go and attack Kagome. Gah! I love you! You're an action whore after my own heart. ^_^ Wow, Inuyasha can sure pull out the 'formal' when he wants. His words to Sagara were great. I'm worried about someone accusing him of killing Kagome because he's holding Tetsusaiga. You've got me on the edge of my seat. Hope you can get to the next chapter soon. Thanks for a great ride. ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: King Baka [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2009 23:53 EDT
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Great chapter! We get some fluff, some comedy (again, the dog-cat interaction was hilarious), and some romance, and then BAM!!! Kagome gets attacked in the locker room. Now I'm wondering if the "blood-soaked body" is Kagome or Abi-hime. You could really go either way, though you would have to think of some way for Kagome to physically wound (not purify) Abi. Maybe arrows? I can't wait for your next update to find out. Do me a favor and don't tell me if you email me in response to this review. Thanks.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2009 21:51 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that the shrine is back to normal... nice that inuyasha was able to go the the competition with kagome... but looks like inuyasha was careless - he should have called for back-up... now kagome is hurt and was the jewel taken?... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Sharibet [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2009 21:15 EDT
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Another fun chapter--I really love the banter between Inuyasha's nephews and their grumpy uncle, and the cliffhanger finale to the archery competition was a real nail-biter. Now for a bit of critique: I am not a fan of the "big misunderstanding" storyline, but from an editorial standpoint, I wonder if you aren't making things a little too easy for Kagome and Inuyasha by having the Kikyo/Yayoi issue quickly cleared up with a reasonable conversation between Kagome and IY. Such resolutions are the preferred solution for Real Life, but not necessarily always the best storytelling choice, since you've now dissipated a source of dramatic tension when overall story tension should be building on the way to the climax of your story. Or, to put it another way--are you sure you aren't making things too easy for the two of them, and sacrificing internal conflict in favor of focusing on the external conflict with Naraku and his minions? Just my editorial two-cents' worth...all in all, though, this is a really fun story and I'm enjoying each new installment tremendously.
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Reviewed By: rosymouse [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2009 17:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Must you leave me on a cliff???? As usual up to par
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Reviewed By: Ivellios [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2009 15:54 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! Not a cliffhanger! Man, you do such a great job building up suspense and capturing the character's personalities that I just want to read on and on. Then I come to the end of updates and I have to wait for new chapters. It is just so cruel... Anyway, thank you very much for continuing to update this story and I hope you are doing well. Sincerely, Zach
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Reviewed By: Moonlit Showers [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2009 14:52 EDT
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aww and Inuyasha was trying so hard to protect her too. What a cliffie! That would be really traumatizing having you're team mate attack you... I can't wait to read the next chapter! Keep up the awesome work! ^_^
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Title: You had me at...
Reviewed By: kareemachan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2009 23:06 EDT
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I've read and enjoyed other fanfics by this author, but the fact that she mentioned 'The Tale of Genji' was icing on the cake, as it were. Weird as it may sound, Genji is one of my absolute favorite books of all times, but only in the unabridged edition and definitely only the Seidensticker translation, not Arthur Waley. Anyway, this story is good, so far, and I look forward to reading more. Gambate, Fennikusuken from your fan on Orcas!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2009 05:02 EDT
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i forgot to add the simi-colon to the &hearts to make it ♥ sorry! ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♬ ♪ ♩ ♬ >=P
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2009 04:59 EDT
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i just remembered this-- in reference to the wash-rinse-repeat reincarnation soul-mate stuff-- i thought you would enjoy!! so, enjoy: youtube.com/watch?v=Gaid72fqzNE &hearts ginny
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