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Reviewed By: rosymouse [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2009 18:13 EDT
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so far so good :) Yes I am waiting for the next chapter no I am not printing THIS one and yes I have it saved, In a few places I felt there was wording missing, but that could just be me Till next time
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2009 16:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful update! I didn't see that coming, Buyo becoming a humanoid main character like that, but I like it! Two chapters and I'm already hooked.
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Title: woo woo
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2009 15:05 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This the story of billy joe and bobby sue...wait no, thats a song he he.. I can wait for more but I don't want to. Its a good thing I'm an adult or I might be thoughing a fit cause I want to keep reading for...EVER ha ha but I'm an adult so I'l wait patiantly until the next update
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Reviewed By: Sharibet [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2009 14:06 EDT
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Another excellent chapter--loved the interplay between Sha and Buyo, and the way that you're spinning out the alternate history, with the same key event but arranged differently. Also interested in the very different relationship that Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha have in this universe...good stuff, all around! Thanks for updating so quickly!
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Reviewed By: Piett600 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2009 05:36 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhhh yes, this is going to be awesome. What a devilishly fertile plot bunny. Can't wait to see how this goes!
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Reviewed By: Niiicko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2009 11:29 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting start! (And I mean that in a definite good way. XD) Can't wait to read more! Woo! I giggled at Buyo. Go Buyo! XD
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2009 17:58 EDT
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one wonders who the green eyed guardian[?] is. quite an interesting twist. ♣ i loved the whole 'yash in leathers' thing you had going in 'phoenix blade' so it's great to see you perpetuate the image in this. *drools* ♦ you have such potential to take this to new heights, i'll be waiting on pins and needles for future installments! ♥ thank you!
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Reviewed By: inugirl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2009 16:39 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love Inu AUs and you write the best! Phoenix Blade was amazing. This first chapter was great and has really peaked my interest on where you are going to take this story. Dont keep us waiting too long for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2009 14:50 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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Fantastic, as always. I already love the detail and depth this promises. Nothing like thoroughly complicated characters;) Great work, hope to see more soon!
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Reviewed By: Sharibet [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2009 02:25 EDT
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Great start to a new story, my dear! I enjoyed your take on a alternate first meeting between Kagome and Inuyasha, and can't wait to see where you're going to take this story.
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Title: Oh goodie goodie!
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2009 13:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful start to what is assured to be a wonderful story! I like the small twist that Inuyasha apparently already had his sword with him at the time of being sealed, so that the keepers of the shrine then took it from him as an artifact. I also love that your Kagome is aware of the 'unofficial' legend that involves Naraku's manipulation, so that she knows the youkai of the legend was not truly evil. Inuyasha's reaction was hard to judge, if the news was completely a surprise to him, or if he was just surprised that Kagome was aware of it. After all, in the manga, Miroku showed up knowing that Naraku had been the one to kill Kikyou, so it's quite possible that Inuyasha had already learned the truth some other way over the years. But then again, if he never really interacted with any humans after awakening, if he managed to make peace with his brother fairly soon and stayed amongst the youkai the whole time, then he might not have learned the truth after all. We shall have to wait and see what you decide to do. I also noticed that Kagome was calling him a "youkai" instead of a "hanyou", so if that bit of information got lost over the years, then that'll be interesting to watch when she learns that tiny little detail. He's lucky he's hanyou, otherwise that purifying explosion of hers would've just killed him. I also love that you made Buyo female, as I think about 90% of all calico cats are. I still need to correct that in some of my older stories. (Ever since I learned that little tidbit, that old song that goes "Black and orange stray cat sitting on a fence" just makes me laugh. The cat in that song is male, which means he's sterile! And here he's singing about being a "lady's cat", LOL)
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Reviewed By: Violetcarson [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2009 13:07 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! I've thoroughly enjoyed everything else that you've written, and this fic proves to be quite interesting as well! XD I like InuYasha's new name as well. I'll be waiting for an update! *salute*
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2009 08:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome first chappie darlin' I've been waiting for a new story from you as I loved your previous ones so much. Can't wait for the next one :)
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2009 07:19 EDT
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Evil said to tell you that Buyo is her favorite and that there better be a happy ending where Buyo gets lots of cheese. As for me, I will just enjoy the ride.
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Title: She's Back
Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2009 01:40 EDT
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Fenikkusuken is back and off to a rollicking good start on a fic guarenteed to tease, please, and make you laugh till you land on your knees. I'm so happy. I was devistated when Phoenix Blade ended, although I knew that it couldn't go on forever, I kept squeezing my eyes shut and whispering, Just One More, Please? Well, you started another story, so I'm gonna saddle up for a ride the likes of which only Kumo could give me. Welcome back, Fenik, you just made my year.
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